domingo, 11 de febrero de 2018
ARW1-3
Hello guys...!! Welcome to our Blog on Reading and Writing 1-3.
On this blog we will work on different activities from the coursebook, and exchange ideas, while doing so-, in groups. Thus, this is our space to enjoy working collaboratively on the different tasks we will be assigned to work on all through our 3 months together.
I hope you will enjoy the new experience that will take you one step ahead in Reading and Writing, while getting into the latest of the world of technology, as well.
The first assignment will be to upload your final version of the first writing onto this blog by Tues.13th. You will have access to your friends' and will comment their work, get ideas from them, analyze and give your feedback to them.
The second assignment will be to upload your Venn diagram by Fri, 16th. so that your classmates may contribute their corrections and/or suggestions on spelling, grammar and presentation, since you'll have to paraphrase the one done in class.
Ma. Graciela Vargas N.
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Hi guys...!!! I´m so happy to get in touch with you, and work together these months on this blog.... Hope yo'll enjoy it as well..!!
ResponderEliminarHi,in uploading my fuera draft
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I'm xiomara I'm too happy to write in this blog and exchange some ideas with you
ResponderEliminarHI IM YASMIN AND IM GLAD TO SHARE MY OPINION, IDEA,AND MY HOMEWORKS :) HOPE TO SEE YOU EARLY IN CLASS
EliminarWITH LOVE...YASMIN POLANCO
Sorry, I have a question
ResponderEliminarThe final draft for the writing is presented on Monday?
By: Kate Bustamante
hi! I heard that the final draft for the writing is presented on Tuesday.
EliminarCarol Mendoza
Hi, you're right Carol, but Kate, if you've done it, you can present your final draft tomorrow.
Eliminarhello guys... i'm Luis, do you know how can we upload the writing?
ResponderEliminar(Luis Calcina Quispe)
ResponderEliminarMy best friend called Heber Jarib is a brave person because he knew how to overcome all the obstacles on his life such as: dead of her mother, abandonment of his father and his disability. Since he was a child, he was stutters, shy and he suffered of bullying and when I met him, he had social problems because he didn’t have any friend, but he never gave up and he tried to overcome his disability. Playing videogames were one of his favorite hobby and he was interested in opening his own business, although his aunt thought that he was going to be a criminal, he continued with his dream because he wanted to accomplish his goal. In short, he achieved his dream and now he has three stores, which he rents and win a lot of money.
Dear Luis
EliminarIt’s his mother, not her mother
But the rest it’s ok
Good job 👍
By: Kate Bustamante
I agree with Kate. Bravo Luis¡ In addition, it was an interesting,reflective and really enjoyable story. :)
EliminarI AGREE WITH KATE AND ROSITA ... I STRONGLY BELIEVE THAT YOU CAN CORRECT THIS AND SHOW US IN A BETTER FORM
EliminarTHANKS
YASMIN POLANCO
hi, luis im ruth waiting for me,,
ResponderEliminarMy mother is a hardworking woman. because she has done many works such as: In a supermarket, at home, helping her siblings. I admire her so much, despite her parents died, she overcame obstacles that had to face up in her childhood. She always worked and helped her siblings. In brief, even though the problems are always coming ,she is able to overcome the impossible.
ResponderEliminarHi Ruth,
Eliminar1. "woman. because" -> without dot
2. "she has done many works such as: In a supermarket, at home, helping her siblings" -> i think that it's wrong because dont have sense
3. "She always worked and helped" -> She always works and helps....
Good Luck
Carol Mendoza
yeah,thanks carol you are right, any help is good.
Eliminarhello Ruth, i like your writing, but I have found a mistake in the first line. when you use "because", you can't put a comma because you are explaining us your reason and if you put a period, that idea will change completely.
EliminarI hope I can have helped you
Good afternoon Ruth! Your writing is really lovely but I think that you should correct it carefully in the part "she has done many works such as: In a supermarket, at home, helping her siblings" because that Carol said it doesn't make sense. Good luck Ruth! You can do it!
EliminarHi guys, I'm Jose Vilchez and I'm happy we can share our knowledge between us. Remember this wednesday 22 we have to present our portfolio.
ResponderEliminarHi guys, my name is Erik. This is my paragraph. I had some problems to upload my writing so I type by this way.
ResponderEliminarMy grandfather, Vicente Cozar, is a great man because of many things he did to overcome obstacles. He lost his parents when he was a child, so he lived with his uncle, who allowed my grandfather to study just school. In an early age, he worked in a hospital to get enought money to independ hiself. Some years later, he went to Junin and started his own bussines with a bookstore. Living in this place, he worked hard to found some schools and highschools with the support of some authorities. In short, because of his lacking of education, he used to think not only in improving his economical state, also he had the necesity of improving the educational situation of Junin, that is why he is a great man.
what pages do we have to have in our portfolio
ResponderEliminarHi Enzo, the pages are 10, 16, 18, 30, 42 and 50 😄😄
EliminarHi, I'm not sure but I think the page 31, exercise 1 we have to include too, and don't forget to put your writing.
EliminarYES... ALL ITS ALRIGHT ... JUST ADVICE STHAT WE NEED TO COMPLETE PAGES 70 71 75 76 FOR THE LAST UNIT :)
EliminarWITH LOVE ... YASMIN POLANCO
My mother is an outstanding woman, she always have found ways to overcome the hardest obstacles in her life. first: Her parents died when she was a child, despite of that she decided to come to lima facing many problems. She had to work as a home's cleaner, in restaurants and baby sister. However she could finished her studies, despite of her perseverance. In short, even though the problems are always coming ,she is able to overcome the impossible.
ResponderEliminarit's because of her perseverance.
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ResponderEliminarMichael Jordan
ResponderEliminarMichael Jordan is a the greatest basketball player ever who led the Chicago Bulls to six NBA championships and won the Most Valuable Player Award five times.
Michael Jordan was born in Brooklyn, NY on 1964, he was a basketball player and current principal owner and chairman of the Charlotte Hornets, NBA team, he played 3 seasons on the University of North Carolina before he got draft picked by Chicago Bulls in 1984, he quickly emerge as a Nba Star, and in 1985 he earned his famous own trademark, Air Jordan.
He still holds many records, as regular season and playoffs scoring average, that's for he is considered the greatest Basketball player ever, and in 2015 he became the second african-american billionaire after Oprah Winfrey.
the first writting (enzo coronel)
ResponderEliminarBeethoven was a german composer.He wrote classical music for the piano orchestas.In 1801 at the age of 31, he began to lose his hearing. He composed Moonlight Sonata, Symphony 9, Für Elise and more. That's why it's considered one of the greatest classical composer.
Hi again, this is a summary about why I consider that my uncle is a genius:
ResponderEliminarMy uncle Angel is a genius, because he overcame many obstacles to succeed. When he was 11 years old, he lost his parents in a difficult economic situation as a result of which he never finished school. Being a poor child he planned to travel to Lima in a truck, there he gathered with other people in the same situation and started working in the streets selling candies, fruits, etc. Although he didn’t finish school, he had a creative mind to put the money to work for him. Working hard, he developed his own business in the world of the suitcases. In short, my uncle is an admirable person.
I hope you have enjoyed reading it and if there are some grammar mistake don't doubt to say me.
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ResponderEliminarHi guys tomorrow only present draft?
ResponderEliminarWell good night :'D
Hi everybody, this is my paragraph from the first unit.
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Michelangelo is considered a genius because of his extraordinary skills in different arts such as sculpture, painting and architecture. He was born on March 6, 1564 in Italy. His love for art may start at the age of six, his father owned a marble quarry and he started making marble figures with a chisel and a hammer. At the age of 14 he already had an incredible talent for art, but years later this ability was still going to increase until the point when he created the sculpture of David, and the painting The Last Judgement. His works of art are among the most well-known by humanity, so his influence on Western art must be undeniable.
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Hi guys that's my second writing, enjoy reading and let me know if I have some mistakes or if all is wrong...
ResponderEliminarMy friend Omar is a very perseverance person, he never give up despite of all , he always search the way to overcome his obstacles. His childhood was sordid, his father abandoned his family, his mother was sick and his little brother began to growing up for this he left the school and started to work in the streets selling candys, but wasn't enough to support his family. he yearned find a better work for maintain his family, finally he found a better work, Omar start to work with an old man helping to did the things that he couldn't do it, with the payment Omar can support his family. Past the years, the old man died and left all his money to Omar, with this money Omar creates his own business and finally could maintain good his family. Nowadays Omar's family live good for the perseverance of Omar.
Albert Einstein is considered one of the greatest Physicists of all time because he discovered the theory of relativity. Thanks to him, Humans benefited with the greatest inventions such as: Tv, digital cameras, laser bean, financial market, microwave, the Gps microchip. Einstein accomplished many things in life because of his hard work, and all his work has helped our world today.
ResponderEliminarOprah Winfrey is an American media Propietor, talk show host, actress, producer. She is best known for her talk show the Oprah Winfrey show. She have faced great obstacles in her life's for example: She was born in a poor family, She was raped for her male relatives, and as a result She was pregnant at the age of 14, therefore She decided to run away from home tired of the abuse, However Oprah was a gifted speaker, She often spoke at church at women's groups, and at school. She won a speech contest and earned a full scholarship to college in 1976. Oprah moved to a tv station in Baltimore Maryland. Where her dreams came true, Oprah became famous as a talk show host. In short, Oprah is a woman who has earned great respect and fame as a media giant in spite of hardships that she faced as a child and teenager.
ResponderEliminarHi Ruth
EliminarI really like your paragraph, i found Oprah Winfrey's history quite surprising. It's amazing how people can overcome the obstacles and get successs.
I think it would be good if you change "life's" in the third line, it has to be "life" ,it's not necessary to add "'s".
Good luck!
By: Anabel Lacma
hey ruth beautiful paragraph ... just that it would be better if you do this more short ... then it will be a best paragraph... please check your ortography
Eliminarwith love, YASMIN POLANCO
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ResponderEliminarHi again. This is my paragraph from the second unit.
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My father has overcome a lot of problems he has had with his family throughout his life. Many of this problems were related to the lack of money. He was the older of 5 brothers and her mother didn’t go to high school, therefore getting enough money to maintain them was very difficult. Besides, his father’s abandonment of the family forced him to work harder so he could help his mother to maintain him and his brothers. In conclusion, even though my father faced a lot of difficulties, he was never defeated, he was able to overcome them with a lot of effort and hard work.
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ResponderEliminarHi, classmates please some of you, know how to make a venn diagram and how to send it in this web...please someone tell me one idea..
ResponderEliminardo you know anyone how can i download venn diagram at this blog???
ResponderEliminarHi Ruth, I have an idea. On Imgur you can upload photos anonymously. Once you signed up you just have to follow the steps and then you can just copy the link and share it here.
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somebody knows how to upload a file to this page??
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ResponderEliminarSorry guys, I’m Kate
ResponderEliminarI need some advices because I can’t upload the image ;(
Please 🙏🏻
easy peesy my dear friend enter to this page ...
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you can make your ppt into an image
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ResponderEliminarHello. This is the Venn Diragram from Unit 1. I would appreciate if someone tells if there's a problem watching the image on the link.
ResponderEliminarhttps://i.imgur.com/95o6E3j.png
HI JAIRO .. I WOULD LIKE TO GIVE YOU SOME ADVICES OF YOU
EliminarVenn Diragram ITS NOT NECESSARY TO COPY ALL ALTERNATIVE IN THE BOOK .. YOU CAN GIVE AN IDEA IN YOUR OWN WORDS FOR ME IT WOULD BE BETTER AND YOU WILL IMPROVE YOUR SKILLS IN THE COURSE.. I HOPE THAT YOU READ ALL THE UNITS.. AND BE PREPARED TO THE NEXT EXAM ..
WITH LOVE..YASMIN POLANCO
Hi again, this is my Venn Diagram from Unit 3. You just have to copy the link on the search bar.
ResponderEliminarhttps://i.imgur.com/m52EUeu.png
Hi Jairo! I only have one suggestion for your work, in the part that you put "Similarities" you need to make connections between the 2 readings and do not separate the ideas of both readings. I really enjoy your work! Good luck man! :)
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ResponderEliminarIn this link i uploaded my Venn's Diagram about Unit 3: https://ibb.co/fkXSqx
ResponderEliminarHEY JUAN I REALLY APPRECIATE YOUR WORK IN YOUR Venn's Diagram AND THE ALTERNATIVES THAT YOU HAVE .. GOOD JOB
EliminarSEE YOU .. YASMIN POLANCO
Hi everyone, this is my Venn Diagram uploaded with Luis's method.
ResponderEliminarhttps://imgur.com/pKujq4L
hi jose manuel .ITS Yasmin Polanco .. ive been read your Venn Diagram and i strongly believe that its pretty good ... just that laughter therapy is free and its has any cost.....anyways enjoy my dear friend ...
EliminarHi everybody, I'm Kate and this is my second writing
ResponderEliminarAdriana Mendoza is a woman who never give up despite of all, for example: she’s totally blind, she only has one leg and she being a very young mother. When she had 5, her parents and she lived in the highlands and one day she suffered an accident on the highway, she became blind and she lost her leg. In all her childhood she wasn’t able to go to the normal school but one day she decided to go to learn and have friends. At the age of 15 she met a man and she become pregnant. She assumed her responsibility and she started working in an office. In short, the problems come alone and it’s up to us to be able to face them despite the problems such as handicap, homeless or poverty.
I REALLY LIKE YOUR LONG PARAGRAPH BECAUSE YOU USE VOCABULARY AND A CONTROLLING IDEA 10/10 ... VERY GOOD KATE..
EliminarSEE YOU ..YAZMIN POLANCO
Hi guys that's my Venn´s Diagram ---> https://i.imgur.com/vo9Svn7.png
ResponderEliminarenjoy reading it ;)
PRETTY GOOD BUT I THINK YOU NEED TO BE MORE SPECIFIC IN YOUR VENN´S DIAGRAM
EliminarSEE YOU... YASMIN POLANCO
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ResponderEliminarGood morning, ladies and gentleman. For those of you who don’t know me, my name is YASMIN POLANCO ... I am the tall girl who sits in front of the class .. I particularly like to participate in class and I love the jokes because it is a way to express myself .I hope everyone likes me and I hope to have fun with you in This new stage of advanced learning ... so enjoy english class
ResponderEliminarwith love... YASMIN POLANCO
HI MY DEAR FRIENDS..... I WANT TO SHOW YOU MY PARAGRAPH OF THE FIRST UNIT :) SO ENJOY AND CHECK IT ...
ResponderEliminarBill Gates is an entrepreneur and businessman .He dropped out of college to found and build the world's largest software business called Microsoft with his friend Paul Allen . Gates wanted to connect the world with new advance technology . As a result of his hard work ,he started to have world wide fame .According to university students, Gates was considered a genios of innovation in his time.In short, he show to us that we can achieve our goals no matter how impossible is.
YASMIN POLANCO
HI MY DEAR FRIENDS..... I WANT TO SHOW YOU MY CLUSTER MAP OF THE FIRST UNIT :) SO ENJOY AND CHECK IT ...
ResponderEliminarhttps://imgur.com/a/uy9u0
HI MY DEAR FRIENDS..... I WANT TO SHOW YOU MY 2ND PARAGRAPH ABOUT SOMEONE WHO I ADMIRE.....UNIT 2 ... :) SO ENJOY AND CHECK IT ...
ResponderEliminarhttps://imgur.com/a/vqtWi
HELLOU MY BUDDY´S... I WANT TO SHARE MY BEAUTIFUL HOMEWORK.... IF YOU ARE WATCHING THISE PLEASE CHECK MY VENN´S DIAGRAMS I ALREDY DID OF UNIT 1 AND UNIT 3 ---- SO ENJOY MY WORK ...
ResponderEliminarhttps://imgur.com/cU2SyLe
THANKS FOR WATCH... YASMIN POLANCO :)
hey my sweet freind i just wanted to tell that tomorrow we need to present the portfolio and this monday will be our final exam... im going to miss to all my friends :3 bless YASMIN POLANCO
ResponderEliminarIF U WANNA IMPROVE YOUR ENGLISH JUST ENTER TO MYENGLISHLAB
ResponderEliminarIF SOMEONE IS NEW IN TECHNOLOGICAL THINGS
IM HERE FOR YOU
SO DONT BE AFRAID
I CAN HELP YOU
LOVE .. YASMIN POLANCO
Hi Yasmin, I can’t upload my Venn diagrams!!!
EliminarPlease help meeeeee🙏🏻🖋
Hi everybody! I'm Rosa and I will like to share my first writing to see your friendly opinion.
ResponderEliminarSrivanasa Aivangar Ramanujan was one of India's greatest mathematical geniuses in XX century because he made a significant contribution to the analytical theory of numbers. He was born in 1887 in Erode, India; he came from a poor family and suffered different kinds of diseases that's why he couldn't finish school. But he never gave up, Ramanujan came across a mathematics book called "Synopsis of elementary results in pure mathematics".That he used to teach himself by age 17. Godfrey Hardy, his mathematic tutor in Cambridge University, said that Ramanujan had said that in his dreams the Goddess Mahalakshmi told him possible solutions for his mathematics problems.
Hi again everybody! This is my second writing about someone who has faced obstacles.
ResponderEliminarMy mom is a successful woman because she overcame differents obstacles such as poverty and abandonment. First, she used to live in a dilapidated home with her 6 siblings and her mother since my mom’s dad died; but the family never gave up, they achieved several ways to find food and clothes. In addition, my mom used to sell candies, cigarettes and food while her mother worked washing clothes. My mother knew that only study, she would be able to be “free” and struggle to be successful. In short, even thought she had to walk through different obstacles, she knew how to despite and never gave up. Thats why I really admire my successful mother.
Hi Maria. Let's see:
EliminarIn line 6 you could put ''with study'' or ''studying'', I think that to put just ''study'' is wrong. Also, the comma is unnecessary.
In line 8 I don't know what do you mean by ''despite''.
Also, It's ''That's'', not ''Thats''
Thank you so much for your suggestions :)
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My mom is a successful woman because she overcame differents obstacles such as poverty and abandonment. First, she used to live in a dilapidated home with her 6 siblings and her mother since my mom’s dad died; but the family never gave up, they achieved several ways to find food and clothes. In addition, my mom used to sell candies, cigarettes and food while her mother worked washing clothes. My mother knew that only by studying, she would be able to be “free” and struggle to be successful. In short, even though she had to walk through different obstacles, she knew how to face them and never gave up. That’s why I really admire my successful mother.
And finally the third mini writing today's class. \o/
ResponderEliminarReading 1 and Reading 2 talk about medicine that can improve health. So both bring benefits and help you stay in a good way. But they also have differences, Genetic testing is more expensive, stressing and difficult than Laughter therapy that is cheap, fun, easy and really enjoyable.
By me.
Credits to Anonymous :)
Hi everybody that's my first writing about one of my favorite genius ¨Nikola Tesla¨, enjoy reading and give me feedback :)
ResponderEliminarNikola tesla was a genius because designed the alternating-current electric system, which is still the predominant electrical system across the world today. Nikola Tesla was born on July 10, 1856, in Croatia. He studied at University of Prague, there began to be interested in the alternating current and he had to leave Europe and continue his investigations in America. There he meets another expert in his area, Thomas Edison, who was may be the most famous savant of his decade.Tesla worked for Edison for a short time because they wasn't agree. Tesla supported the alternating current and Edison supported the direct current. Then Tesla leaves his work and began "THE CURRENT WAR” that finally won Nikola tesla with his alternating current. Unfortunately at the age of 86 Nikola Tesla, the man who transform the world with his inventions, died alone and forgotten in a New York hotel.
Hi guys, that's my FIRST writing. I hope you like it and give me feedback. thx
ResponderEliminarJorge Luis Borges was an award-winning Argentinian writer born in Buenos Aires, is considered a genius of 20th. century, although he didn't win a Nobel prize. His long-term memory was incredible, He was an authentic savant, even when he became blind in 1955, he wasn't disabled because he could remember many quotes from different books, letters or tales, even though, Jorge learned German and Scandinavian by himself. His deep thoughts about how life is and it's developed around years and people’s feelings are material of analysis and different points of view. He learned to write and read when he was 4 years old so he spent almost whole day in his father's library reading books so that's the way how Borges discovered Kipling, Wells, Stevenson, Chesterton, Poe, Oscar Wilde, Las Mil y Una Noches, Papini and many others. He announced to his parents his vocation as a writer at six and published his first work at ten, although he didn’t manage to be recognized until the age of 40 as a prestigious writer.
And it's my SECOND writing about someone who has overcome obstacles.
ResponderEliminarMy friend Abril is a beautiful person who really brings out the positive to everything, even when everything seems to go wrong or problems appear, she is there thinking in a positive way, what lessons they leave for her life and how to solve these problems and then advise others in a similar situation. She was born deaf, her father didn't recognize her legally and her mother died in childbirth. On the other hand, she was bullied and discriminated in her school because she couldn't speak fluently. So she had to have a lot of perseverance to learn to vocalize the sounds and she already achieved it, now she can speak sign language and Spanish. Nowadays, she has finished her special education so she is preparing to study at the University.
And last but not least the "venn diagram" about Genetic testing and Laughter therapy.
ResponderEliminarThis is the link ⇒ https://drive.google.com/file/d/1K6JOOftDqYkhoUD5hbfcwiRiuLdXHijK/view?usp=sharing
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ResponderEliminarHello guys, can you help me?
ResponderEliminarPlease, How can I upload my venn diagram?
hi guys, I am Ruth, but my friend Luis Calcina is helping me with the venn diagram's homework, it is my homework
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Hellooooo! This is my second writing about someone wi know overcame an obstacle.
ResponderEliminarMy mom is a person who overcame her obstacles succesfully with much effort and hard work. For instance she suffered extreme poverty and abandonment in her childhood, she lived in Highlands and she was the penultimate of eight siblings. Despite the misery, she wanted to be success and have a better lifestyle. After much sacrifice, sad and bad experiences she was educated and she entered to the university to study education. Now she is a teacher for a public school and love teach because she thinks the education is progress. In short she lived har situations but she never gave up.
Hi Kiara, good paragraph. I have some corrections.
EliminarIn line 5 ''sad'' is an adjective, you should use ''sadness'' if you want to mention something that can be measured.
In line 7 you should write ''teaching'' or ''to teach''. Also, before ''teach'' the word ''love''must be ''loves'' because of the subject ''she''.
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ResponderEliminarThis my second writing about someone who overcame obstacles:
ResponderEliminarJoselyn is an excellent friend and an example of overcoming obstacles, she is an psychologist living and studying in Manhattan, NY; She had a hard childhood because her parents get divorced when was a kid, her father decided to travel to USA to work and send their children the money they need to study and get everything they needed, we met at school when he had 5, after 20 years, we are still friends, she once told that we are going to reach our goals if we worked hard, she year by year got the recognition to be the number one’s student, she finished school at 2009, at on 2010 she decided to study psychology on Cayetano Heredia’s University but on that year she got hepatitis C, that caused that she missed every activity she could have done that year, she started on 2011 her career and also started to study English at ICPNA, he finished her studies in 2016, the same year she decided to travel to USA, where her father was living so she could study her mastery in an American university, now she is getting focus to travel around the world and keep following her dreams, I am very proud to be her friend, she is an example of persistence and take risks for a benefit.
Hi guys! This is my first writing about one of the best geniuses of history.
ResponderEliminarGalileo Galilei was born on February 15, 1564, in Pisa-Italy; he was a mathematician, astronomer, physicist, writer and philosopher. He is considered the father of modern science because he made some remarkable discoveries such as the four moons of Jupiter, the probation that Venus goes through phases, the support for Copernican view that earth resolves around the sun, the support the theory of heliocentrism, among others discoveries. Another reason that he is considered the father of modern science is that he was able to invent an improved telescope, a water thermometer and between his greatest scientific works, could include his Two New Sciences about kinetics and the strength of materials and due to his last scientific works, he was arrested at his house, where he spent his last days, dying on January 8, 1642 at the age of 77
Hi Tamara, oh my... in the 4th line ''probation'' doesn't mean what you think it means. You should use ''demostration'' or ''evidence'' instead.
EliminarIn the 5th line ''resolves''...well, it means to solve a problem. The correct word is ''rotates''. There's also a ''for'' missing before the last ''the''.
In the 6th line I would add an ''s'' at the end of the word ''reason'' because you mention a lot of reasons, I would also and put ''why'' instead of ''that''
In line 8 you miss an ''I'' before the verb ''could''.
In line 9 you have to put a period after ''materials'' and erase that ''and''. This is because the next sentence about why he was arrested is not related to the reasons why he is considered the father of modern science.
Thanks for you help Jairo :)
EliminarThis is my correction
Galileo Galilei was born on February 15, 1564, in Pisa-Italy; he was a mathematician, astronomer, physicist, writer and philosopher. He is considered the father of modern science because he made some remarkable discoveries such as the four moons of Jupiter, the demostration that Venus goes through phases, the support for Copernican view that earth rotates around the sun, the support for the theory of heliocentrism, among others discoveries. Other reasons why he is considered the father of modern science is that he was able to invent an improved telescope, a water thermometer and between his greatest scientific works, I could include his Two New Sciences about kinetics and the strength of materials. Due to his last scientific works, he was arrested at his house, where he spent his last days, dying on January 8, 1642 at the age of 77
Hi again! This is my second writing.
ResponderEliminarMy mother is a good fighter and persistent person because she was able to overcome all the obstacles on her life such as having suffered of depression, having gone through extreme poverty, having gone to another country to find a good job, having suffered for discrimination abroad and not having had the support of her parents. Since she was a teenager, her dream was work in a large company like secretary, but her parents opposed and they left her of supporting, however she didn't give up her dreams and she went to another country where she achieved become one of the best secretaries of one of the best companies in that country. In short, I consider my mother my example to follow and I admire her a lot, because even though she had gone through some obstacles in her life, she did not give up on making her dreams
Hi guys! I would like to know your opinion about my first writing.
ResponderEliminarStephen Wiltshire is an autistic savant who has the ability of drawing and painting detailed landscapes. He has a particular talent for drawing lifelike and accurate representations of cities, in some cases he only has to observe them briefly. His disability didn't prevent him from becoming a genius so he persisted and created his own language at the age of five. He found out the way to communicate with the world through the language of drawing. Stephen won a lot of art competitions and he was recognized by many people around the world. At the age of 7, his lifelong career emerged by selling his first work and by the time he turned 8, he received his first commission from the British Prime Minister to create a drawing of Salisbury Cathedral. Stephen may encounter difficulty in some aspects of his life but that's not an obstacle for him.
https://imgur.com/a/I2ZuC
I hope you enjoy reading my writing.
By: Anabel Lacma
Hi Ana, good paragraph. I think that the ''so'' in the 4th line is not necessary.
EliminarIn your organizer: Where and when he or she lived
You can't omit the second he before the verb ''lives''.
Hi again! Please guys tell me what do you think about my second writing.
ResponderEliminarVictor is an admirable guy because he was never defeated by his obstacles and got success. He has faced a lot of problems, economical and family problems, but the strongest knock that he got was his father's death. It made him feel that anything would be the same, but he didn't give up because he yearned for a better future. In order to achieve his goals, he started to study and work at the same time, so he could get into a prestigious university. Fortunately, he got a scholarship and even though he was full of shame about his past, it wasn't an obstacle for him. Getting success was the only thing that he wanted, so he got it and nowadays he is a well-known professional that enjoys doing his work. In short, even though his life was full of obstacles he overcame them and achieved achieved his goals.
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Hey! Here is my Venn diagram about " Genetic Testing " and " Laughter Therapy ".
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hi guys, i need your help please.... do you know what is a thisis statement???
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EliminarWhen you write an essay it has a main idea, the main message about which all the paragraphs are related to.
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Genetic Testing is a type of medical test that identifies changes in chromosomes, IT determine the predisposition of a subject to develop a variety of diseases. It has positives and negatives effects in people, for instance some people think Genetic Testing can be very useful because it give them a reliable information, other not because this information could bring them an emotional and physical impact that can lead them to make a risky unhealthy decisions, such as: getting sad, depression even taking them to commit a suicide. even though, nowadays Genetic testing has revolutionized medicine which can prevent diseases and treat them, In fact, the most import is people are able to make the best important decision of what their body refers to.
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Eliminarhello ruth, i like your writing because i agree with you about it, but i have found little mistakes as for example:
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-On the third line is ON PEOPLE
-On the fourth line is it gives
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and anymore... ok Ruth, i hope that i have helped, good luck my friend and study for your last exam.
my friends, this is the writing on page 86, i would like to knwo if this is good or bad
ResponderEliminarGenetic testing
Genetic testing, which helps many people, is much better than other treatments or medicines because it can detect when we have a strong disease, which it can kill us, for example: years ago, my best friend was detected of ASMA, but he wanted to know why he had it and he made a genetic testing and the doctors told him that it was hereditary and finally, he checked on time and now he lives happy life. In addition, there are two aspects, which many people consider that genetic testing is good.
It helps to make informed decisions, it is one positive aspect, which many people agree or prefer genetic testing, although it is expensive, it’s much better and more recommendable because neither laugher therapy or other treatments can’t detect strong diseases.
Other positive reasons is what it can provide clarity and a firm diagnosis, although many people think that it isn’t true, the positive alternative that we can get is real.
In conclusion, if genetic testing had never existed, the medicine could never have revolutionized and it couldn’t have saved many people.
It’s good Luis, but I think that it would be more than 3 paragraphs
EliminarBecause the teacher say: 1 paragraph for introduction, 2 paragraphs for the body and 1 paragraph for the conclution
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Hi guys! Here is my Venn Diagram of " A genius explain"
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Albert Einstein
ResponderEliminarIn his childhood was a bad student at school his teachers didn't see a future for him . A little boy who didn't understand the subjects and had to work selling news since he was 9 years old trough the time he started to study hard by his own , he wanted a future even others thought that idea was impossible. In the first time that he took the entrance exam he didn't applied so he study more then in the second time he entered to college he won a space there , so in this moment overcame a lot of obstacles (social , education problems)he never give up in front of difficulties . In the past of the time he became a genius because at college he was good in maths then he contributed relativity theory's
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ResponderEliminarHello guys, when I read the essay, there was one paragraph that was interesting to me, so this is my opinion about genetic testing.
ResponderEliminarMoney.Immoral. These two words came to mind when I read about genetic testing. Because actually it is being sold without prescription medical in different brands generating in some cases problems in the consumer.
Actually the technology medical has progressed a lot developing cures, because we can find many solutions against diseases, but some corporations are more interested selling their product than the necessity from the person, because anyone without knowledge medical can get the product and could generate some damage like stress if the person had bought the wrong product.
In pharmacies we can find generic products and brand name, as they offer another alternative to the consumer. Even though they have the same composition, their costs are different. That makes me think that the true purpose is money, in fact, if hadn't existed generic product, they would have sold the product without prescription medical, that's immoral to the humanity.
In conclusion, genetic testing is a product that is sold without prescription medical and there's no guarantee in its results.
Hi Jose, I’m Kate and I really like you essay
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I would like to talk about my friend Mary . She is an example to follow because of her extraordinary personality . She didn't have enough money to study at private university and her family couldn't help because they had a big debt in the bank . At school she was a good student . After finished the school she had to work for two years to help in the economy of her family and to pay the entrance exam . Then she applied to UNMSM. At the first attempt she entered to the university . In short she overcame the poverty of her family and now she is a successful lawyer ,woman and daughter.
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Animals are intelligent? The animals like Clever Hans and seizure alert dogs are special mammals with a big intellect because they were never trained and everything did by themselves. However, there are a lot of controversy which many people and Scientifics say that they are dumb and only use their instinct.
Its very short, remember that a paragraph is minimum 4 lines
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ResponderEliminarAre the animal really intelligences? According to the article "EXTREME PERCEPTION AND ANIMAL INTELLIGENCE" written by Temple Grandin and Catherine, who are experts on this topic, show us that there are many animals with extreme perception like the forensic dogs that are better than any X-ray machine, but that does not make them genius. What make them more intelligence than another normal animal is how these animals acquired new skills without humans help and how they use that to solve different kinds of problems.
For example, the seizure alert dogs whose owners assure that can predict seizures 30 minutes before it starts and then choose to do something about it, another example of animal intelligence is Clever Hans the famous german horse that could count according his owner, Wilhelm Van Osten, he could solve mathematical problems by moving his hoof. Then the psychologist Oskar Pfungust showed that Clever Hans was reading sings that human produces unconsciously when asking to him, but Clever Hans really was intelligent, even if he couldn't count because he was able to train himself to appear to count and a normal horse couldn't did that.
They conclude emphasizing that the animals not only developed new skills, but also they did something about it. As Temple Grand and Catherine Johnson said: “Intelligent is person using their built in perceptual and cognitive skills to achieve useful and sometimes remarkable goals.”
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ResponderEliminarAre the animals more intelligent that people? According the article which was wrote by Temple Grandin and Catherine Johnson, it says that animals like seizure alert dogs and Clever Hans (horse) have their five senses more develop than an average human and have a big cognition because they never needed a training for example: the alert dogs can feel seizures and Clever can solve mathematical problems. However, there are a lot of controversy where many scientists or psychologists like Oskar Pfungst don’t believe that animals are intelligent and he explained that they are just dumb and only uses their instinct.
Are animals really intelligence or what? Acording to Temple Grandin and Cathein Johnson, How can we mesuare their intelligence, if we are always using our estándar to assess their abilities. For instance: some animals can predict seizure because they use extreme perception, It is the cognitive ability that they use, but It does not makes them smarter, Furthermore, Clever hans can solve mathematical problems it shows intelligence, even though no body though him how acquired this skill, as you can see they can not comunícate therefore, we can not messure their intelligence using our estándar. in fact, we have to develop differents tecniques to assess animals intelligence, if we want to know the way how they think.
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Hi Giovanna, I think that your mistakes are in words for example: acording-according, or mesuare-measure
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ResponderEliminarKoko is an intelligent gorilla. Her instructor Francine Penny Patterson says that Koko is capable to recognized and understand more than 2,000 words and 1,000 signs, and this type of language does not exceed that of a child. For example: Koko was able to regognize by himself though of a mirror, and koko is able to combined workds susch as finger-bracelet which most gorillas fail. However most researchers argue that , they think that Koko is just like clever Hans and It does not mean like human’s intelligence. As a resolt, some people think Koko’s comunication is nothing more than nonsense, either, we can not compare animals behavior with human standars.
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As Temple Grandin and Catherine Johnson said: "Many animals have extreme perception" like a dog can smell things a person can't, that doesn't make the dog a genius but it shows its advanced perceptual abilities a sample of that condition are forensic dogs which are trained to improve on drugs detection, especially. There are also animals which enhance their abilities without humans help like seizure alert dogs, They were trained as seizure response dogs, originally, but They develop the ability to predict a seizure themselves, such as Clever Hans did it. That horse could count apparently but the fact was he couldn't, anyway, he was able to train himself and see movements that humans couldn't notice, that way he could give correct answers. So these are signs of high intelligence or hight talent because no one has ever been able to train a horse to do what Hans did or a dog start recognizing the signs that a seizure is coming.
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Are animals really intelligent, or do they only imitate our behaviors? Let’s start with the most well-known animal: The dog. They are usually good at smelling and detecting objects, but there are some dogs that are capable of even more. These dogs can recognize when a person will have a seizure even 30 minutes before it happens! On a similar level a horse named Clever Hans could read their owners behavior and knew when he had to start tapping and when he had to stop, giving the impression that he knew how to answer mathematical problems. What makes these animals intelligent is that they were never trained and, in the particular case of the dogs, that they don’t have to do what they do. The fact that they decide to act when they know someone will have a seizure is what makes them intelligent.
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ResponderEliminarIn Extreme Perception and Animal Intelligence, by Temple Grandin and Catherine Johnson discuss two examples that show a sign of high intelligence in animals.
The first example is about attack alert dogs. These dogs that predict an attack before they start are a good example of animals that use their extreme perception to solve problems. Nobody knows how they do it, because this type of signals are not perceived by people. In addition, one study found that most dogs with a seizure alert were trained to respond to seizures, not predict them because they are standards that any dog can train to on their own.
The following example is about Clever Hans. He was a horse whose owner thought he could count because Hans used to touch the number with his helmet to answer some mathematical questions. Although a psychologist proved that Hans did not count, and discovered that Hans could only answer the question when the people asking were in plain sight and they already knew the answer, it was because he was observing an unconscious cues that humans gave without his help. No one has been able to train a horse with this type of behavior. What makes these examples very similar because that they did things that are not attributed to them.
In addition, the fact that any of them needed humans to help him acquire his talents and then decided to do something about it shows a sign of high intelligence.
P.S:If something is wrong, do not hesitate to correct it, it would help me a lot.
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ResponderEliminarHi friends this is my writing about a summary of an article about lulu,the pig I hope you will enjoy it.
ResponderEliminarIn "The story of Lulu the pig, who "pretended to be dead "to save owner's life",by Simon,that discusses about A pig which saved the life of its owner who had been suffering a heart attack.This is the story of a heroic pot- bellied pig named Lulu who became a media sensation in the late 1990s. Ann Ann Altsman suffered a heart attack while being vacationed in the northern forests of Presque Isle, Pennsylvania. Lulu, a domesticated pig, saw his own owner in problems and went out on the road and the black pig pretended to be dead to get someone's attention.She have moved and headed to his owner's mobile home.She have repeated this operation several times, according to witnesses, until a young driver remained. The young man quickly phoned the assistants.Now he is out of danger and he's happy to have a pet he can trust to his own life.
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ResponderEliminarHi dear friends this is my writing about a summary of text 1 .I hope you like so enjoy it.
According to the article Extreme Perception and Animal Inteligence written By Temple Grandin and Catherine Johnson . Does animals show us their intelligence? This is still a controversy in our society but
The majority of animal using their abilities as cognition skills ,perception and senses
since it is a way to solve problems such as Standley dogs that predict a seizure minutes before it happend without trainig .Another example is clever hans a horse that could count with his hoof any mathematical questions just recognizing unconscious cues and humans movements.in short what make differents and specials of the other is that they decided to do something about it by themself.
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ResponderEliminarHi dear friends this is my writing about a summary of text 1 .I hope you like so enjoy it.
According to the book called ´alex the parrot ´written by stephannie spinner , an autor of many books for Young readers,recounts the true story of an african grey parrot which was the subject of a graduate student's scientific experiment to show animal intelligence because alex learned to count, add, and subtract; to recognize shapes, sizes, and colors; and to speak, and understand, hundreds of words. These were things that no other animal could do by themself
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Living in 2175 is a wonderful life, because everything is different and i can live much better than before.
ResponderEliminarFor example, living in this year is very disparate, because i have robots that can help me with my house shores, also there are cars and machines which are able to fly.
In addition, i have had the opportunity to study many careers, such as medicine, engineering, accounting and i have worked in several companies and right now i have a good experience for those things.
Furthermore, talking to my relationships with guys; i have gotten married five times and i have ten kids and thanks to them i become a grandmother.
On the other hand, living in 2175 also has disadvantages for example i use many kinds of cans that contaminate the environment and these increase the level of pollution.
In conclusion , although i have became less awareness about looking after the earth. I have felt very happy to see an advanced world.
hi guys, it is my writing about the future "pag 147"
ResponderEliminarTo live in 2175 has been wonderful because I were able to see different landscapes, meet more people and do everything that I want. Now, I´ll tell you something about me and my future.
Studying different careers are something that I were able to realize in my life, for example: I studied architecture, systems engineer, cooking, education, etc. However, not at all has been so easy, although my lifespan is longer, I had some difficulties in different aspects, but I always faced them and I could achieve all my dreams.
In addition, I met a lot of beautiful women with whom had many marriages and I got many children whose mothers live in different houses, but I always go to visit them. I have different kind of houses where I live, for example: housepod floating, inside the sea, etc. However, I am not a millionaire person, but I work and it makes me to feel happy.
To conclude, if my lifespan had never increase, I wouldn´t have had the opportunity to live and have an amazing life.
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ResponderEliminarHere is my essay of the last month... sorry to be late
“The science is easy to process; the emotional component is not” by Rajani Aatre
What does it bring to my mind? A possibility to avoid potential diseases in your kids and discount the feeling of responsability or guilt. That’s why Genetic Testing is a good opportunity to improve our lifestyle and take care about people we really love.
Genetic Testing is a potential helper in the medicine field and as awareness of genetic mutations grows, testing mechanisms have become quicker, cheaper and more precise.
If we think about benefits, I should choose "you can take action". A clearer knowledge of risk can guide medical care giving you an adequate treatment with certain medications that it will help to you and your family stay healthy and live a longer life.
In short, genetic testing is a great way to stay healthy and take care about our family to avoid possible risks, take action and live a good life.
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ResponderEliminarTo live in 2175 has been wonderful and incredible because I were able to see different landscapes, knew more people and did everything that I wanted. Now, I´ll tell you something about me and my future where I live.
driving a flying car, seeing different kind of buildings, and Study different careers are something that I were able to realize in my life, for example: I am working like a lawyer, but I have studied architecture, systems engineer, cooking, education, etc. However, It hasn´t been so easy, although my lifespan is longer, I had some difficulties in different aspects, but I always faced them like a man and I could achieve all my dreams.
In addition, I met a lot of beautiful women with whom had many marriages and I got many children whose mothers live in different houses, but I as a good father, I always go to visit them. I have different kind of houses where I live, for example: into the sea, a floating house, etc. However, I am not a millionaire person, but I work and it makes me to feel happy.
To conclude, if my lifespan had never increase, I wouldn´t have had the opportunity to live and have an amazing life, although the future is a strange world, you just have to relax and enjoy it.
EXTREME PERCEPTION AND ANIMAL INTELLIGENCE
ResponderEliminarA lot of animals have extreme perception. Dogs are trained to perform a large number of feats by their owners or by their trainers, as human beings, They can perform some tasks very similar to us, but it does not mean that they are intelligent animals. Seizure dogs are an example, they can predict a seizure before it starts by using advanced perceptual abilities. These dogs were trained as seizure response dogs or adquired their skills without human helps.. Some of them bring the medicine or the telephone and others perceived signs of seizure ahead of time. For instance, when they notice the sign of seizure, they will pull down the owner´s clothes, bark at their owners or drag on owner`s hands to avoid dangerous situation.
ORKY AND CORKY THE KILLER WHALES
ResponderEliminarOrky and Corky are two famous whales that were captured in the Pacific, both of them have lived for 19 years in captivity.Orky has an imposing personality, he is moody and just few times his temper get into violence. Ten years ago there was an accideent, Orky nearly drowned a trainer when it was performing one of his traits. Corky is half Orky`s size. At first with a new trainer she would be shy, but then with the time she would become playful. Both had six calves, two ere stillborn and the other four only lived for a short time. Trainers and veterinarians who have worked with them are impressed not only by their grace, but by their intelligence and memorie.
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ResponderEliminarhello guys.... it is volunteering writting, i hope that you enjoy it.....XDXDXD
ResponderEliminarIs the mandatory volunteering good for people? According to the article which was written by Mensah Dean, it makes a comparation between volunteering and mandatory job and explains us about their differences too.
To be a volunteer is much better than be obligated to do something that you don´t want because when you are going realize those kind of activities, you have to love and enjoy it, like Justin, who made everything by himself and for children. He was admired and loved for people, although he never had to do it, he made it.
Many people believe or disagree about Mandatory volunteering because everything that you do is a responsibility and obligation which it shouldn´t be of that way. One of the paragraph on the text says “People won’t do this service unless it´s mandatory”, but it is a wrong idea because there are many people who make it by themselves.
To conclude, the text gives us positives and negatives ideas about it, although each person have a different point of view, I completely disagree with the mandatory volunteering.
Hi guys that's my second writing, a little sad, but I hope you enjoy reading and let me know if I have mistakes :)
ResponderEliminarAll the people celebrating the new year 2175 in their houses with their family and me alone leaving the pub a little drunk, lost as an orphan in the mother's day, I remember that sounded really cool be immortal when I was a young. Be immortal Imagine that! I felt really enthusiastic when I did "THE PROCESS" for the first time. However, the immortality was not cool as seemed.
Years passed and unfortunately, my family thought that "THE PROCESS" was a bad idea, that was an unnatural way to live the life for this reason none of them did it.
Just the fool young (me) had thought the immortality was a good idea and saw how his family grew old and finally how each one of his family members died in front of him.
Nowadays I still remember the taste of my mother's meal, the melodious voice of my sister and my father's advice. I miss them a lot! I suppose that is the high price that must be paid for immortality and I will continue paying for many years more.
In “Extreme Perception An Animal Intelligence” authors Temple Grandin and Catherine Johnson explain that dogs have developed their perception to the point that they can solve problems as an example seizure alert dogs that are trained as seizure response dogs, to help their owner when an episode occurs. The difference is that seizure alert dogs use their skills and cognition, in this case perceptual skills, to identify signals that their owners are going to have a seizure.
ResponderEliminarAlex was an African grey parrottrained by his owner, Harvard University psychologist, Irene Pepperberg. Alex was known for his different abilities like learn and voice labels of different objects and their characteristics: color, size and quantity. Although his trainer used to test him in different areas, she never tried to test Alex's ability in math until one day, when she asked him to order numbers from 1 through 8. Sadly, Alex died when he was 30 years old and his owner started testing his skills in math, but in those studies Alex did the best.
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ResponderEliminar"Koko" the gorilla is a famous animal around the wordl because of her intelligence. Its a western lowland gorilla known for the use of sign language a modified version of American Sign Languague(ASL).Her instructor reports that koko is able to understand 1000 signs. In short, "Koko" shows superior intelligence , when she understand signs that she learn through the years.
I can smell the smoke of industries, I never thought this would be our future, dark days, although it is daylight or night, you are blind by a blanket of smoke. The darkness reigns in the sky
ResponderEliminarThe worst problem of live in a ultra industrialized world is contamination. You can thought that is not possible, but the fact is that companies did not think of the world, they are only focused in business and money. It is really depressing how animal kingdom disappear because of pollution. Despite technology being an advantage, I strongly believe is a disadvantage related to relationship. All people are sunk in their cellphones or tablets. I really miss playing with my friends outside, I really miss breathing pure air.
Despite all that, we can see that are positive things in this year. First of all, transportation is really efficient. This is not like 2018, where most of drivers did not respect rules or laws. In fact, drivers do not exist anymore , all manner of transportation is by teletransportation. It's awesome. Another positive thing is about daily rutine. Engineers have created robots that are useful in the daily life. They can cook, they can wash, they can do massages to you, all you need, they can do
After 157 since 2018 life has changed. I'm utterly pensive about my life here and sometimes about what could happen if I had not done the process or if no boy had done the process. Perhaps our world would be different or not? Is there the possibility of changing the world yet? I do not know
Living in 2175
ResponderEliminarMy life in 2175 is very different from what I lived in 2018, because before inmortality was discovered, everything was very common, like work is the cancer of dreams and aspirations. Now I want to tell you some of the amazing opportunities have been knocking on our door , with the discovery of inmortaality.
First of all, let me tell you that I got married once, have 7 children, 21 great grand children, but before I got married, 235 years ago, I studied hospitality management. After finishing mmy studies I started working for a big hotel chain as F&B management and then decided to study craft artist and arquitecture. Moreover, robots do all the household chores. There is cure for all the diseases. There are many positive aspects of living longer. I achieved all my goals, had the opportunity to correct my mistakes and the fortune to see all family grown up.
On the other hand, living longer had disadvantages like careers, is not easy to find a job , there is a lot of competition, even marriage was affected .I feel like I can get bored of my husband at any moment.
To conclude, living so long is awesome because I did everything I wanted, but I recognize there has been social problems and we as a society need to find out a solution.
The article is about wheter animal intelligence is for percetion or instict. For example, the seizure alert dogs and a horse called Clever Hans. The first one are animals that can predict seizures, even though they were trained as response dogs which means that they only help their owners when a seizure starts, but they realice by their own how to predict a seizure. The second one, whose owner thought that Clever could count, but the truth was that Clever unconscious was Reading the movements of the person who asked him questions and that was Clver´s true skilll which was learn by himself. Both of the examples show the animal intelligence becauseit is one thing to have the ability and another thing to do something about it.
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Ruby was an asian elephant who was famous for her paintings. Once her keepers saw her rasping in the mud and mading some figures, they decided to give her brushes and after that Ruby started painting. All what Ruby did was learned by herself. A lot of people were surprised and her painting started selling. Unfortunately Ruby died, but in memory of her her keepers built a house with her name, in the Phoenix Zoo.
ResponderEliminarMy life in 2175 is incredible. I must admit that the change on the earth has evolved quite a lot, although the common problems that afflict humanity have always been the poverty that, given the overpopulation that exists, the resources for people are scarce; however, the technological advance in the world is impressive.
ResponderEliminarOn the one hand, the disadvantages that worry people, such as poverty, which is a problem that has been around for many years and that unfortunately continues to happen even in the future, as well as overpopulation, which is why the scarcity of resources low affecting many people.
On the other hand, the advantages we have are the technological and scientific progress of now, such as the reduction of traffic thanks to teleportation and the medicine has also made significant progress that has made the human race very satisfied and grateful in many ways.
In conclusion, the future that was predicted years ago is becoming a reality in these times, although it still does not have a solution for every thing or problem that we have, the future is still being written and, who knows?. Maybe we will come to invent the Time Machine.
well i think that a mistake would be that you repeat "on the other hand "in the second body
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Are animals really intelligent, or do they only imitate or behavior? Let’s start with the most well-known animal: The dog. It’s usually good at smelling and detecting objects, but there are some dogs that are capable of even more. These dogs can recognize when a person will have a seizure even 30 minutes before it starts! On a similar level a horse named Clever Hans could read their owners behavior so he could know when he had to start and stop tapping, giving the impression that he knew how to answer mathematical problems. What makes these animals intelligent is that they were never trained and, in the particular case of the dogs, that they don’t have to do what they do. The fact that they decide to act when they know someone will have a seizure is what makes them intelligent.
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Willow is a mixed English-terrier dog from Manhattan that understands written commands from her owner. Willow always showed a high capacity to understand orders, but this ‘’new trick’’ is the most remarkable thing this dog is able to do. It all started when Willow’s owner made a deal with a friend. If Willow was able to learn how to read the friend would give them a trip to Mexico. Now Willow is able to recognize over 30 words printed on cardboards and she is even able to follow commands like ‘’Go to the kitchen and bring me a pen’’. There are plenty of more animals that learned how to ‘’read’’, you could think that they are just following orders to get food and because of that these animals are not intelligent, but think more about it. Isn’t the fact that they understand that a person wants them to do a signal of intelligence? Isn’t the fact the they end up memorizing and following each order just as they should be done a sign of animal cognition?
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Nothing! I can’t see anything at all! You could think that living in the clouds is like a dream come true, but in fact it’s like living in the middle of nothing. The way we live has been changing a lot since 2056 and I’m not quite sure if all these changes were for the better.
Let’s talk about one of the pillars of the old civilization: Marriage. It has become boring and, even worse, it has lost its value. Nowadays people see it just as something you do to have fun, something with the same importance as choosing which candy you will eat this time. The general thinking is terrible: ‘’You will probably live forever so, why would you ever marry just one person?’’
Now let’s talk about something that doesn’t affect everybody, but a big part of the population. They way companies hire people. People like me, with hundreds of years, don’t usually have problems searching for jobs, but young people…Well, it could be like searching for a job as a teacher when you have just graduated from kindergarten. That is the way companies see young people, as kids that have no value for them now.
Of course living more has brought benefits for us, but all these benefits are just as pragmatic and individualist as the problems are. We lost the beauty and magic of living once we knew we would live forever. Now there’s only one thing that matters: Efficiency.
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Eliminari saw amazing writings.. hey guys today is the final exam... good luck :)
ResponderEliminarWRITING 1
ResponderEliminarR1 talks about the research of Temple Grandin and Catherine Johnson on animals perception and intelligence where the main question is: “ Are animals really intelligent?”. In fact, they agree that animals demonstrate intelligence through acquiring abilities or skills to understand human beings’ behavior and the most important is that they decide to do something about it without a previous training only developing it by themselves.
WRITING 2
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Akeakamai is a female Atlantic Dolphin that has shown her ability to understand instructions that they mean the following: gestures are like words, and sequences of gestures are like sentences. All those gestures were able to be interpreted by Akeakamai that responds each one with different behavior.This is at least suggests the possibility that she was able to understand complex information and reach consensus in a short time wich opens a door to figure up animal’s intelligence.
WRITING 3
ResponderEliminarFuture in the year 2175
What a beautiful sky! Said my younger son looking through the glass roof of the house. I only laughed, because I have been living for 175 years and that sky doesn’t compare to the Earth’s sky.
On Earth we used to prepare our own food, walk at the park, play some sports, enjoy the view of the little stars in the sky when the darkness had fallen, or simply the smell of flowers. But as soon as the Earth’s population increased dramatically, science created a formula based on human’s cell regeneration that gave us the so precious inmortality.
Despite the fact that scientists discovered the key to longevity, our planet began to get distroyed little by little. Consequently, we were obligated to leave our beautiful planet and move to Mars, which is currently our home.
All around here is modern, sophisticated and awesome in their own way because it is an artificial reality. We have a lot of helper robots that cover the chores and main necessities of our home and, what we only do is being focused in raising our family and being happy.
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One of the most misunderstood animals in the world is the pig. Pot bellied pigs are clean, intelligent and devoted beings.
ResponderEliminarLulu the pot bellied pig showed the world just how loving and heroic the unsung pigs of the world could be.
A woman named JoAnn was pig-sitting Lulu for her daughter and the two developed a friendship. Everything was going fine when suddenly JoAnn suffered a major heart attack and fell to the ground unable to move and unable to get help. Knowing that her life was in danger, JoAnn called for help but no one could hear her.
Lulu somehow also knew her friend’s life was in danger. She ran out of the house to find help. Unable to find anyone to help, Lulu ran into the middle of the street and laid down, stopping traffic. Passersby paid no attention to the frantic pig but Lulu refused to give up. She returned to the house several times to check on JoAnn but kept running out of the house to find help. Finally someone noticed something was wrong and followed Lulu back to the house and called 911 for JoAnn. The paramedics rushed JoAnn to the hospital and she survived. JoAnn enjoys life everyday thanks to the heroic acts of one loving pig.
Lulu was honored with the ASPCA‘s Trooper Award for bravery.
“I’m extremely lucky to be alive,” says Jo Ann. “Lulu saved my life”
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ResponderEliminarHow was my English education at my school and at Icpna? I am happy with my learning that I have received at my school and at Icpna, but only one of them was the best and I am going to writhe some reasons about it.
My old school was a public school and it was very small. My English education wasn´t so good because my teachers had some issues with the principal of the school. However, we had material as text books, CD-ROMs, but my English teacher never used it, although he was an experienced teacher, he didn´t sometimes enter to the class, my classroom was in a bad condition, the chairs, tables were old and we needed to enhance about many aspects.
I studied English at Icpna and I can consider that my education and learning about English was much better because I improved in everything I needed to improve. In addition, It offered me more opportunities to learn, for example: the infrastructure was in a good condition, my teachers were more than one and they were young and old, but with a lot of knowledges and the technology, materials included text books with virtual classes, listening, speaking, etc.
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ResponderEliminarhi guys this is my comparison & contrast essay FINAL DRAFT
ResponderEliminarPrivate school vs Public school
Would you go to a private or public school? Which is better? We know that a good education is an essencial part of a child’s development, for that to most of the parents is a crucial decision to choose which school system is better for their children. I had the opportunity to study part of the secundary on a private school and i faced another reality totally different from a public school. Even though they have some differences in some major areas like class size, cost, curriculum and infrastructure, they also have some similarities such as teachers behavior and cleaning.
For one thing, when i left my public school and started studying in a private school, i significantly changed my way of studying, because of their difference. First of all, is the class size. Private school has 15 to 18 students per class while in a public school has 25 to 30 students. I particularly realized that a class with few students helps the teacher to notice the difficulties of each student so in that way they enhance their learning. Another difference is the cost. Private school demand tuition from their students whereas public school is funded by state money so they gave you some materials, to illustrate, each student received a book for each course and returned it at the end of the year. In addition the curriculum of a private school has diversity of courses. In contrast, private school has less courses. Finally a significant difference is the infrastructure. Private school has better looking building with grass around on the other hand public school a worn building that need to be repeared.
Even though there are many differences, there are also some similarities between this two school systems one of them is the teacher behavior. Private school has funny and serious teachers in the same way private school has, for example, I remember a math teacher who was very severe and always told us, "if you want to learn with me, it would be better if you do not blink during my class". In addition private school has always bathrooms and classrooms clean just as public school, I liked that very much in both schools.
In conclusion, you can be sure that a private school is very different from a public because of the teaching method, the money you spent and maybe a bit in the values but also has some similarities that helps you to choose better; However, I consider that overall, the student dedication and the support of the family makes a child the best no matter in which school system.
College vs. High school
ResponderEliminarDifferences & Similarities.
Should education be the same everywhere? Nowadays if we talk about education it has different meanings and also it is a crucial issue in our society, i had the opportunity to study in both high school and college, which made me analyze that we have a poor education in our high school.
There are a number of differences that i found in my high school. for example, the attendance of every school class is an obligation. In contrast, the attendance in college is just a few hours per week. In fact, students in high school do not understand the entire subjects that they take while in college students are able to ask whatever they want. Furthermore, teacher and parents cooperate to discuss the progress about the students at high school. However, college students meet with particular professors only 2-3 times a week. Therefore, they do not need to take all the subjects if they do not want to. one of the significant point that experts are analyzing is the level of education, they said that the level of colleges are far advanced in contrast high school.
There are a few similarities between high school and college education. In both grades are very important for the career. In addition, the subjects you take in high school is similar to college, just more advanced. Both high school and college have teachers textbooks, test, homework. Moreover, Not only do teachers teach in high school, but also they teach in college.
To sum up, It is clear that there are differences and similarities between high school and college, even though high school have been improving, i believe that we need new methodology to enhance education in high school.
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ResponderEliminarPrivate School vs Public School
Having studied at Private School the three first years of my high school and then at Public School the last two. I can say that studying in both were a good experience,although there are some differences and similarities.
One of the differences is the level of education and competitive. While, at a Private School, the level of education is very high and the competition between students is harder, at a Public School, the poor education doesn't encourage the competition between student. Another difference that I could saw in my school years was the method of learning, at a Private School the method of learning is very good I took an exam every weeks and also I took advanced courses in math and chemistry, on the other hand, at a Public School I took an exam whenever the teacher wanted. The infrastructure is very different too, at a Private School the infrastructure is very big and colorful. In contrast, a Public School looks like a worn building that needs to be repaired. Finally, the most important difference between both is the price, a Private School is very expensive but compensate the money whit the high level of education. However, a Public School it's free and just need spend money on schools material.
Even though there are many differences, there are also some similarities between Private School and Public School. For example, the interaction between the teacher and the student at a public school was friendly and funny but also had strict teachers.Likewise, at a private school, there are teachers who everybody love and teachers who nobody wants to take his class.
To conclude, it is very clear that a Private School is very different to a Public School, but despite the advantages that a Private School have if I had to choose between Private School and Public School I would choose the Public School for the nostalgia, the memorable moments that I happened there and the friends that I made.Education is very important but it does not only depend on the school where you are, it also depends on yourself and the ways you can enhance your learning.
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EliminarWho are the best primary or secondary teachers? Who gives a better teaching method? During my school years I have had many teachers of different personal and professional aspects of which some stand out more than others and leave a great mark on their students.
ResponderEliminarOn the one hand, in the example that I am going to put, it is the difference between my math teachers of primary and secondary; the one of primary was very relaxed in contrast with the one of secondary that was very active, they even differ in the physical, the primary one was of fine texture and the other of coarse texture. My primary teacher left most of the exercises as homework; however, the secondary one tried to solve all the exercises. In the exams, the way to correct differs in that the primary only indicates if it is correct or incorrect, but does not tell you where it has failed, unlike the secondary one that puts the correct procedure in what has been wrong.
On the other hand, both teachers have similarities, the primary one answers if you have any doubts, in the same way the secondary one helps you with doubts in the subject. Both are competitive in any aspect as in interscholastic competitions always try to win against their opponents. They gave study techniques to their students for their tests.
In conclusion, whether they are good or bad, teachers leave a trace in the lives of their students that carry them throughout their studies and that they learn many things from them.
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ResponderEliminarThis is my Flowchart (Writing Nº2) about how the Cause-Effects of the TV.
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FLOWCHART UNIT 8: https://imgur.com/DcvjUAX
Hi everyone! this is my second writing (Flowchart), it is the causes and effects of eBooks.
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