Starting our Adventure together
ARW1-3
Hello guys...!! Welcome to our Blog on Reading and Writing 1-3.
On this blog we will work on different activities from the coursebook, and exchange ideas, while doing so-, in groups. Thus, this is our space to enjoy working collaboratively on the different tasks we will be assigned to work on all through our 3 months together.
I hope you will enjoy the new experience that will take you one step ahead in Reading and Writing, while getting into the latest of the world of technology, as well.
Hello guys...!! Welcome to our Blog on Reading and Writing 1-3.
On this blog we will work on different activities from the coursebook, and exchange ideas, while doing so-, in groups. Thus, this is our space to enjoy working collaboratively on the different tasks we will be assigned to work on all through our 3 months together.
I hope you will enjoy the new experience that will take you one step ahead in Reading and Writing, while getting into the latest of the world of technology, as well.
Dear students, how about starting off by uploading our final version of the first writing? This way, you will have the chance of enlarging your vocabulary as you try to correct one another..It`s gonna be good fun, you'll see...
ResponderEliminarWell, miss im happy, we can be in contact but, i don't know so well how to use it.
EliminarHi everybody,this is Milenha Perez,I'm uploading my first writing I hope you guys enjoy it.
EliminarALBERT EINSTEIN:
Einstein who is considered a genius was a German born on March 14 1879.
Because he has the greatest mental capacity in the world until today,he is considered a genius.
Anothee reason for calling him as genius is that after he died,scientists discovered that he had a higher IQ by investigating his brain.
By the age of 76, he received the 1921 Nobel Prize, because of his services to theoretical physics.
To conclude, one of the most known achievements of Einstein is that he developed the theory of relativity.
Hi everybody,this is Milenha Perez,I'm uploading my first writing I hope you guys enjoy it.
EliminarALBERT EINSTEIN:
Einstein who is considered a genius was a German born on March 14 1879.
Because he has the greatest mental capacity in the world until today,he is considered a genius.
Another reason for calling him as a genius is that after he died,scientists discovered that he had a higher IQ by investigating his brain.
By the age of 76, he received the 1921 Nobel Prize, because of his services to theoretical physics.
To conclude, one of the most known achievements of Einstein is that he developed the theory of relativity.
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ResponderEliminarhi miss,it is such a good way to learn more and put in practice what we have learnt before.
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ResponderEliminarhello miss, it's very interesting for me to learn in this way.
ResponderEliminarHi, I want to share with all of you my first writing. I hope to receive feedbacks afterall. Thanks!
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1SMR_C8olUKjMTov0i--u6A2SHNL1CM5mkB29mHkqk0I/edit
I know Yaned, and it´s much more beneficial for it´s 25 different versions you'll ideally have to deal with. Can you imagine the amount of English you´ll all be producing..? Good luck and enjoy...!! :)
ResponderEliminar:)Yes Lizeth, everybody else should be interacting in no time
ResponderEliminarHi, I want to share with all of you my diagram. I hope to receive feedbacks afterall. Thanks!
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1781lwsEorY3-I50a8iiEJKjd-Z-jK8KfhYRh17lP_hE/edit
wooww Lizeth good job , i enjoyed reading your work, great.
EliminarBeauty, thank you so much.
Eliminarhello classmates,I WANT TO SHARE MY WRITING
ResponderEliminarWITH ALL OF YOU , I HOPE TO RECEIVE GOOD IDEAS
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1pzJK__GFMsKHu9zdAzLu9zkcE362OfBz/view?usp=sharing
good job my dear partner , i was reading your writing , i enjoyed it .
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ResponderEliminarHi guys, i wanna share with you my summary about reading one. I hope you can give me your feedback about it.
ResponderEliminarhttps://1drv.ms/w/s!AgGx1nAR_WwBd8A-qIjUx59LXzM
Hello Margiorie , Ican't open your work i don't know why ..
Eliminarhttps://1drv.ms/w/s!AgGx1nAR_WwBd8A-qIjUx59LXzM
Eliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=1a4KtBE-SAAdEKvXAufsrwNK_KKk_rY4s
EliminarHi guys, i wanna share with you my answers about the activity of page 130. I hope you can give me your feedbacks about it.
ResponderEliminarhttps://1drv.ms/w/s!AgGx1nAR_WwBdR50LPd4cbOV1BA
Hi guys, i wanna share with you my comparative chart about reading one and two. I hope you can give me your feedbacks about it.
ResponderEliminarhttps://1drv.ms/p/s!AgGx1nAR_WwBeA2py389Xh2J6i4
hi Margiorie , again i can't see your work.
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Eliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=1dFkhDHoQ_HCz8GJm9bYlahT2shlNQbgl
Eliminarhello guys ,i want to share my writing with all of you . https://1drv.ms/f/s!Am5DKXFcu7GUaSm4wA_NsMBZmhY
ResponderEliminarhello guys this is the chart of the R1 and R2 , I hope you could open my work. https://1drv.ms/f/s!Am5DKXFcu7GUaSm4wA_NsMBZmhY
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ResponderEliminarHi guys, here is my first writing:
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1mpUbBGzXuqDjQ6u45zApvcwcL34RaGXmqveAirRoFOk/edit?usp=sharing
hi guys!
ResponderEliminarhere is my first draft!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_u_T03Ul7zSpHHAvs5JRvng1LzcrmJ62IAI7gE54hGE/edit?usp=sharing
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ResponderEliminarHi guys! I hope you enjoy my first draft read and comment.
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1u3EXbUa1nupjhV93gpBEapcsqSkZpp0smBBtVOqi8Sc/edit
Well guys, here is the chart about R1 and R2 .
ResponderEliminarfile:///C:/Users/JYE/Downloads/Documento2.pdf
I can't open your task.....
EliminarHi, guys! Here is my first writing.
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1UxqQUGj3KDCBGF_5liVXwr0xhu1-pAU0DeKr3Muh3kg/edit
I CANT' OPEN YOUR TASK TOO..
Eliminari cannot open
EliminarCould you write you work in this blog? I can't open it .
EliminarOk guys, no problem
EliminarTomorrow I will fix it....
Guys, this is the correct link. Please check it..
Eliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1UxqQUGj3KDCBGF_5liVXwr0xhu1-pAU0DeKr3Muh3kg/edit?usp=drivesdk
good writing with synthesized information
EliminarDoes anyone remember which were the book pages for the portfolio ?
ResponderEliminarI don't remember any, except for the first 2 (105-109). I'm beginning my work on them and needed to get rid of this doubt.
Hi eveyone this is my essay about the last homework, Please if you find some mistake send me feedback in order to correct my work. Best regards.
ResponderEliminarI am reading a book of history about the French revolution when I think that I would like to stay at this time; suddenly, I remember that my time machine can return to the past. it might be awesome to return to this era when there are a lot of artists. However, Paris was loveless because the population was poor and the food was scarce.
French in 1879 was an economic crisis. the principal authorities had declared bankruptcy in all areas of this country. when I was in Paris despite the crisis people prepare a good food as an extraordinary bread I can smelt it on kilometers like the lion that smell its prey.
I can hear different philosopher that told population about liberty it seem that people danced with their words. they were so excited to get a new way to manage your country.
After these days I can notice that radically thought was motivate to obtain the liberty and change the new way of government the democracy.
Good job, Ricardo. I enjoyed your draft
EliminarHi. This is my firs draft:
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1fpBYT12docoU7ctQH8_Bf2sak76vjy5N690zkJV-xJQ/edit
Hi guys.how are you doing? i wish you the best ,here is my draft,i hope you enjoy reading ..
ResponderEliminarI am here in my bed with my two famale robots ,we are speding such a good time .everything is so funny .
they act like normal girls ,but the most importnat thing that i really like is when i feel tired ,they are alway here to help me in whatever to do that is why i love them.
last year ,my two famale robots and i went to Spain because i was on a vacation for one month .we really enjoyed travelling,but in this part ,i want to share with you an experience that we had to deal when we arrived at the Airport .one of my girl brought too much things ,so she was not permitted to travel because the things were so heavy ,so i talked with the person who was in charged .
After talking about the problem ,we finally got into the plane ,when we arrived to Spain ,all was so new for us ,we felt like zombies in a country where we have not been before,we have been stayed for nearly 2o days and then moved to London where spent 5 days more before return.
having my two famale robots ,helped me alot ,for example ,when i feel sad ,i can talk with them and do what i like ,i would say that my life is like a rich man because i have my two girls with me ,so i try to live happy and enjoy as much i can .
Hi Michael,
EliminarThis is my feedback
Spelling: female, spending, important.
grammar: many for much.
Hi. This is my W2:
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/18z2nZIt5NdTmfQFhR0xMe5SMg_uOdfWHIT7q8QKGtuM/edit
Hi christian i found one mistake on line six of paragraph one ( ... windows,and...) does not go a comma before "and" I believe. Also on paragraph 2 line 2 after COULD, should be the verd in basic form and not in pass (could see). Then on the same paragraph line 3 after LISTENED should be TO and then music ( listened to music). In your conclusion is not PARNET is PARTNER. GOOD JOB!! :)
EliminarHi guys, this is my first draft of the first writing, please tell me if there is a mistake. Thank you.
ResponderEliminarThe problem assessing animals intelligence is that scientists measure it using human standards.
According to Gita Simonsen, some methods scientists use in mammals are related to brain weight as a proportion of total weight or their capacity to imitate human behaviour. However, there are other elements that can influence on animal intelligence which human could not have. Moreover, since human intelligence is linked to language, communication is a great obstacle to understand animals behaviour.
A study of learning speed which gives as a result bees on the top and human babies at bottom eas considered failed because researchers conclude bees use their instincts, not intelligence.
" It is difficult to discern between reasoning, learned reflexes and pure instincts. This make challenging for humans to create tests that do not remind animals of their natural behaviour," says Bøckman. Apparently another method which includes the study of the neural network of animals and its uses can be the most successful option; nevertheless, there are many animals whose minuscule brains are extremely difficult to study. In conclusion, to estimate animals intelligence successfully scientists need to improve or design new methods because they can not use the same test to assess different species intelligence.
Sandra
EliminarSpelling: Behavior
Puntuctuation: ,and
Grammar: makes
Thanks. I'll correct them
EliminarI almost forgot it. Behavior or behaviour both are correct.
Eliminarhi guys, here is my chart abot unit 4
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/1ky-brAK7sZ3VJ_9wDtF5y9TNpdjPZx9W/view?usp=sharing
somebody can check my chart if is all ok!!
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EliminarHi guys, I send you my first draft
ResponderEliminarIn extreme perception and animal intelligence whose authors are Temple Grandin and Catherine Johnson discuss if the animals have an extreme perception or they are intelligent. They talked about the seizure alert dogs who predict the seizure of their owners. They said that the dogs do not learn about detecting or predicting the seizure. The dogs acquired their abilities by perceptions. Some researchers said that the behavior to detect smell drugs or alert seizure is unconscious. The controversy is the abilities is one way of the intelligence or only unconscious activities.
In concluding, the animals have different ways to show their intelligence and the humans should develop other technics to assess the intelligence of the animals.
hi Ricardo, i read your draft.
EliminarYou can write instead of who, which or that
in conclusion or to conclude
Some researchers said that forensic or alert seizure dogs just use their advanced perceptual abilities or instincts.
thanks Sandra.
EliminarHello guys! This is my first draft.
ResponderEliminarIn How smart are animals?, Gita Simonses discusses the big problem about assessing animal intelligence and that is because scientists and also people use the same standards to compare our and their intelligence. They think that animals need to imitate our behaviors to show intelligence but it is a wrong idea because there are different ways to demonstrate how smart an animal is.
Even for human beings there is not an only way to demonstrate our abilities, some people can solve math problems, other people can sing, play music, practice any sport and more and more important things.
To conclude, it is extremely necessary create new methods and development some useful ideas for comparing the intelligence in different species, whether we do that, we will be able to know the true intelligence in animals.
Hi Mario, i read your draft.
EliminarHere are some suggestions:
delete _and that_ after (animal intelligence)and _because_after (is)
it is extremely necessary_to_create new methods and _develop_ some useful ideas_to compare_the intelligence in different species
Thank you, Sandra. I'll have in mind it for our next draft =)
EliminarHi guys, this is my second writing; I hope you enjoy it.
ResponderEliminarPlease, If you find some mistakes you can tell me. Thanks
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_ixTjGsCBD-yO8Ax6n_-HNiXxChqXc-pwQmYA0l8b3o/edit?usp=drivesdk
hi mates ,here is my first draft from the first writing,if you see some mistakes,please let me know in order to correct and learn more ,thank you in advance.
ResponderEliminarwell ,as you know many animals can show their intelligence in sort of ways
some animals have developed their abilities without any human help ,so they have learnt by themself,but other needed some training ,for example ,dogs are able to help people in different ways ,they have improved a certain kind of thing to be helful for human.
also dogs are three times as good as any machines because they are able to recognize drugs ,explosives.
you see that dogs have a important role in our life ,so we have to look after them.
another example that i found out is about the horse that is able to solve mathematical problems ,but some people have a different opinion about it ,they think that horses are not smart because they only react a instinct.this idea has created a controversy between people.
Hi Michael, i read your draft.
EliminarHere are some suggestions:
-Spelling: helpful
-You can write instead of (recognize drugs) smell and find drugs.
-You can say:
As you can see, dogs have a important role in our life
-Use capital letters.
Hi classmates, This is my first writing.
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=1KUdVPcQpVPjz2ddcRxxnrlW0gQ-4gNZi
Hi guys, thanks for checking my first draft. I rewrote it adding some of your suggestions.
ResponderEliminarThe problem to know how smart animals are is that scientists usually use human standard tests to measure their intelligence.
According to Gita Simonsen, some methods scientists use in mammals are related to brain weight as a proportion of total weight or their capacity to imitate human behavior. However, there are other elements that can influence animal intelligence which humans could not have. Moreover, since human intelligence is linked to language, communication it is a great obstacle to understand animals behaviour.
A study of learning speed which gives as a result bees on the top and human babies at bottom eas considered failed because researchers conclude bees use their instincts, not intelligence.
" It is difficult to discern between reasoning, learned reflexes and pure instincts. This makes challenging for humans to create tests that do not remind animals of their natural behavior," says Bøckman. Apparently another method which includes the study of the neural network of animals and its uses can be the most successful option; nevertheless, there are many animals whose minuscule brains are extremely difficult to study. In conclusion, to estimate animals intelligence successfully scientists need to improve or design new methods because they can not use the same test to assess intelligence of different species.
Hi Sandra, it is definitely a better version. I really think that you are improving your skills! nice.
EliminarSo, here's the... first ? final draft ?
ResponderEliminarmeh, idk
but it's for the first writing.
When placing the words “intelligence” and “animal” in the same sentence, most people would think that would be unusual, crazy and even wrong. But in reality, animals have already shown cognitive abilities and extreme perception in the past. There is the case of the horse Clever Hans, who was known for counting numbers and solving mathematical problems by using his hoof. After some investigation, psychologists concluded that the horse was indeed intelligent, but not in the same way as a human. He was reacting to the behavior of humans around him; they would unconsciously make unnoticeable signs to the horse. And then, there are the seizure alert dogs, whose owners have claimed they have taught themselves to detect and prevent seizures, minutes and even hours before they happen. Normal seizure response dogs are trained to react to them, but the alert ones already know when they will attack. But even then, nobody knows how they acquired this kind of abilities. They would bark at you or push you away from the place where you might get the seizure. And all of this is just a bit; there are many other animals out there that we can put in the same category as Clever Hans or the seizure alert dogs.
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it's me, Bruce.
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ResponderEliminarHi guys, this is my second draft of writing 2.
ResponderEliminarI've already corrected some mistakes after checking it again, but if you notice more mistakes, let me know about them please. I thank you in advance.
I woke up a few days ago after having been frozen for more than 100 years out of the earth as part of an experiment since 2050. When I returned to earth I realized that everything changed completely, buildings, food and even humans. 2175s world is like a sci-fi movie, there are many amazing and bad things as well.
It is common that seven generations live simultaneously because their genes were modified to live longer than before; however, I live with my parents, husband and children, only three generations. Our house is awesome, we decided to live in an floating city since traditional cities are inhabited by many old robots which make an insufferable noise like rusty metals when they collide. We have a gadget that allow us to teleport from one place to another, but some people still using flying cars. We do not need to pay for anything, we can take whatever we want without any restriction. Food usually comes in little capsules and most of them taste good, the water containers are like edible bubbles. Furthermore, there are children who developed powers, such as telekinesis, invisibility and duplication.
Nevertheless, this kind lifestyle is boring and stressful sometimes since robots do everything at home and do not allow me to help them. Sometimes I miss the tic-tac that raindrops produce when falling, but i can not since there is no natural rain or even snow, they disappeared many years ago. Currently, there are few places where we can study a career because most people usually download and app with all the necessary information that goes directly to their chips inserted in their brains. Besides, government has us under surveillance and knows everything about us.
To conclude, I believe this is the lifestyle that human has always wanted and I like it, yet i would like some things from years ago to come back.
Hey Sandra I've read it and I really think that is a good draft. congrats because I know that you are improving.
Eliminar2nd draft
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/1TPq7E6Emdd-SubYReYgKgpSNic2y1ByY/view?usp=sharing
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ResponderEliminarHi guys! here is my first draft again,if you can open please read and comment.
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1u3EXbUa1nupjhV93gpBEapcsqSkZpp0smBBtVOqi8Sc/edit
Hi! again, this is my draft of my second writting.
ResponderEliminarToday I woke up like every day,listening a beautiful song like the singing of the gods,forever young of alphaville band.It was obvious my husband put that music as every day in the mornings,memories come to my mind those beautiful memories of when We went to the beach,the sun burning our bodies, the smell of the sea watching the waves dancing from one place to another.We were crazy in love. I get up and hug him. We are almost ederly now, We have been married more than six decades. My first and only love.Our cook robot is preparing our breakfast toast and milk.Since our children and granchildren left the city many years ago, my husband bought this robot.It is special and useful because he knows how to prepare many meals.We are surronded by robots , robots here robots through there.It is awesome how they can look like humans.My husband is one of the creators of those machines ,He has worked as a robotics engineer for 38 years.We have recieved a good new this morning,Our daugther and grandchildren will come to visit us this weekend , my chef robot will prepare a big feast also we are excited to see her. For sure, She will arrive in one of those flying cars. I hate those cars. to be honest i am not a technology lover.Well, I can say that I am happy, my husband my children, I have had a life full of blessings.
Hi guys, I would like to upload my first writing again because I want to improve it.
ResponderEliminarIn How smart are animals?, Gita Simonsen discusses about some issues to define animal intelligence.
First of all, the most important thing is defining what intelligence is and how scientists can demonstrate it. One method used is brain weight as a proportion of total weight, in this case dolphins are very intelligent. On the other hand, if we use the language to prove animal intelligence; we could say that each specie is not intelligent.
For the second point, when scientists compare intelligence between species use their instincts but after all that does not prove the real intelligence.
Finally, Simonsen concludes that it is really necessary create new methods, theories and better tools for comparing intelligence between animals and obviously not use the same standards to compare our intelligence (as human beings) and their intelligence (as animal species).
Hi Mario, this is my feedback.
EliminarGrammar: case, all, to create.
Spelling: species.
Hi guys. I improved my first writing:
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1fpBYT12docoU7ctQH8_Bf2sak76vjy5N690zkJV-xJQ/edit?usp=sharing
Hi guys, I wanna show you my draft about second writing please give me your feedback.
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=1azeB4MQThXO-GL0nb429hdYWMNayhxL_
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ResponderEliminarHey guys. I improved my first writing with the Teacher suggestions. https://docs.google.com/document/d/136RI0z1r_0xTDDXbbdYAKnAcB_pFOCDNyh-bPB6kkCo/edit?usp=sharing
ResponderEliminarGuys! Also, here it is my second writing. (:
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1BHoBo8o4mqASH8cFp1BCYPOiqJO3uAea3urXOWTp5YQ/edit?usp=sharing
- Stephany Jimenez
Hi guys and teacher. This is my solutions of portfolio:
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1LwSRRP-s82pwNYXURo4Kj4TXXAf6uQ97QJ6iDscxRlU/edit?usp=sharing
Hi, classmates. This is my second writing.
ResponderEliminarMY SUCCESSFUL LIFE
It is amazing how my life has changed since I turned 150 years old. I am able to do a lot of things with more security and perfection. I believe that living in the sky, my big family and the experience I got in these years have made my life very successful. Now, I can say my life has become in a roller coaster where at each stop I learned something new.
Since scientists concluded that living in the sky would make our life longer, I bought an incredible flying house, where every day my beautiful robot dog wake me up, I can smell whatever I want with a systematic program that each home has, such us eucalyptus and a sweet smell of flowers. Besides, it includes a big space where my children can play and spend good experiences with their friends.
My big family makes me happy and feels comfortable. I have 10 children, most of them have their own family, so I only have to take care of two; Juliana and Bruno, my last children I hope I will be able to see them for a long time. Also, I go with them to a different country every year to learn about new cultures with my flash car that can arrive to the other side of the world in 30 minutes approximately.
During this years I got important abilities that I can use in my daily routine, take for instance, no one can lies me because I immediately notice what they are hiding. On the other hand, I studied different careers that help me a lot to save money. My last career was medicine, to stay healthy and architecture to design my house.
Additionally, even though it has passed more than 100 years, I see myself with a young appearance. To conclude, my family, my life and my abilities gave me a successful life. Until now I am grateful because when I became in a centenarian person made I have enjoyed every moment every year. I only hope to continue living to achieve my goals.
Good writing I enjoyed it. But, you can correct "this years" to "these years"
EliminarOnly that, thanks
Nice writing, I enjoyed your creativity in some lines, like the car that can arrive to the other side of the world in 30 minutes
Eliminarhi guys,I'M YANED PACCO TRUEVAS , this is my second writing.
ResponderEliminarI'm in the garden of my house with my handsome robot husband , He is massaging me with cream and special oil,He is a muscular robot,strong ,honest and intelligent,we got married last year . We traveled to brazil for our honeymoon in his flying car, when we arrived to brazil, we stayed in a hotel under the ground.
It's spring ,the sun is shining in the sky, the waves are dancing on the sea,I'm so glad remainding our trip . He is my ideal husband because he is not unfaithful like conventional man , He is mine and i belong to him . He is lovely , his kisses are like honey and his hugs are like a panda bear.
It's a beautiful sunset , the sun says good bye to us ,the wind sings a harmonious melody of spring love ,he tells ''I love you Yaned, you are the perfect wife ,i want to have 10 children with you''.
Now ,my vigorous husband is preparing a delicious food , he is good at cooking and also, he is an excellent house mate. In short , I think he is the perfect robot husband , we are very happy and he is the love of my life.
If you want to check my second draft, here it is.
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/12He5kUaDQULekkThUojwDCah6phcmYennonLoPqgc6M/edit#heading=h.gjdgxs
Hi, I am josué quiroz. This is my second draft.
ResponderEliminarI am walking in way to my friend's home with a microchip that contains our investigation about the death of the wife of an important and very rich businessman called Rodrigo Kirk , when suddenly appears a gang of robots that want to kill me and carry off the microchip. I run very fast and use my watch to call my friend and ask him for help. He immediately send me a flying car that he can drive from his house with a remote control. I get on the car and go to my friend's house while my friend help me to dodge the guns that the gangster robots shoot me. I arrive to my friend's house and we decide to hide us in the basement of his house. The gangster robots start to destroy the house but we are save because the basement is armored. Me and my friend call our team of experts in weapons to help us. They arrive quickly with a weapons arsenal and destroy the robots except one. We question the robot about who is behind the attack and the robot reply that Rodrigo Kirk is who sent them to get the microchip.
We go to the house of Rodrigo to catch him. He is as tall as a giraffe, as white as a ghost and his soul is black. He accept that he killed his wife and we put him in jail.
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ResponderEliminarhi guys, i improve mi first draft!!
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/1gKVpLK1S1UiFNp_oM-KRsdNtBg14fKad/view?usp=sharing
great job! it was an interesting text.
Eliminarhello classmates, here my second writing
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=1gCHZCLbgggL9y3-JjOgm0hhMGihO9K0s
Hello guys, I improved my first and second draft.
ResponderEliminar1. Draft
The author Gita Simonsen wrote an article that discussed animal intelligence, she thinks animals have different levels of intelligence. Nowdays, we know smart animals like dolphins, clever foxes, crafty crows and else but we don't know if we can use the word intelligence with that kind of animals. Researhs want to discover animal intelligence and experiment with animals like chimpanzees but the problem is that all animals use tools like chimpanzees do. Scientifics can determinate the IQ of a human using different test, human intellifence is strongly linked to the language that we usea to communicate with animals. The scientis from Queen Mary University in London examined studies of animal intelligence of many species, british scientist invented bottom up method that studies the animal behaviour. Although is not the only method to determinate the intelligence of an animal and in the future will appear more methods to demostrate how smart animals are.
2. Draft
In 2175 my life will change with a lot of things that could appear in the future. The future would be incredible, I believe living in a big house with my family, a house that my carrear will pay it. A lot of experiences I got every year, I will able to give recomendations to another person. Many thechnological things will be invented like cellphones, cars can fly to the sky, or a new way to study with digitals boards. It could be interesting but I prefer don't think in the future because I like mystery in anything, so I prefer live my life without concern.
interesting second draft, i hope it happen in the
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Yep, it's a good draft i hope you can get a good grade about it
EliminarHi guys, I'm Carlos Quille. This is my first draft:
ResponderEliminarExtreme perceptions and animal intelligence.
Most animals show abilities and intelligence that the human sometimes can't undestand. In the article written by Temple Grandin and Catherine Jhonson, we can see two examples about this controversial topic.
First, dogs have some many abilities, like identifying things using their strong smell, but the most incredible of this is that they can predict a seizure before it starts. So some dogs are trained as seizure respond dogs, meaning they can help a person once a seizure has begun.
Second, we know that horses are very intelligence animals, and also useful to help the human to do so many things, and the horse that demostrated that is Hans, the world famous German Horse. Because, though this may sound disparate, this horse could count and answer mathematical questions.
In conclusion, animals show intelligence in so many ways, and humans should recognize them more and don't thing that they are not smart.
yes, sometimes people think that there are not intelligence in animals , but it is not like that.
EliminarHi guys! I'm sorry because today I had to go earlier and I could not give you the second quiz.
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Gianella Cornejo - 1
Andrea Samán - 2
Carlos Quille - 2
Josué Quiroz - 2
Johnny Quispe - 2
Daniel Muñoz - 1
Stephany Jimenez - 2
Christian Rios - 2
Tomorrow I will give you the second quiz anyway. Thank you!
hi guys i would like you to read my second writing.
ResponderEliminarI was sleeping in my house suddenly I appeared in an elevator next to me were three buttons:past present and future. A voice in my mind said press the future because i liked to know about technological advances. When the door starts to open i saw that all was white it looks like a mirror , there were no color on the street , all was in silence and i couldn’t believe that I was in the future . I started to walk , i found some people walking on the streets and i asked how all they are , some people said 150 but they look like 30 or 40 years,no more . I visited some hospitals and i could see how many doctors could solve illness by light.for me, was totally bright. If this were in my time people could be saved from many diseases. I thought that my parents were here so I thought about looking for them. I was outside of my house watching a window, i saw a happy family, there were my siblings with someone who looks like my copy . I was scared, I ran into the garden and saw a small grave with my name . I start to cry , I could not understand that I was dead . I heard the sound of a door, it was my mother surprised, I covered her mouth : do not say that I am here. She started to cry and explain what was what it happened. “The lights that the doctors use to save people makes women became infertile, some doctors do not know how to do so they started to create robots who looks like normal people to recover someone who died for depression, insecurity or much knowledge about the future. Those robots have your DNA but they take away all the reasons why you died“she said. I could not stop crying, all of this time that my parents were living with me, all of those good moments.now, that they only live with a person that is not me. My father could not believe what is happening, he did not want to believe what he saw ,so long waiting for my mom to calm down, so many moments that he endured his cries for my death, he did not want to suffer again, he picked up the phone and called to the police while my mom said to me crying “ Nothing has been the same since you left, now go look for help”. I moved away as soon as I could, I arrived at a park and saw how the sky waned and began to get dark, I did not know who to go much less to where to go, I only knew that the police wanted me and that the person you least thought was going to turn his back he did. Suddenly I saw that man crying, I sat next to him , he start to tell me how his mother was changed for a robot . I felt that someone could understand me so I decided to tell him my problem . He wanted that I looked like someone who does not have problems , he helped me to settle in the same university of him , giving me a false identification ( and identification of an student who die by suicide ) I learned that everybody studied the same courses, courses about The UD( unidentified disease) or as I said love desease. Some people who suffer this problem used to die. they could not find the meaning of life by not having children and they die. Sometimes I felt lonely , sometimes sick , I felt that I need someone . I opened the door , suddenly Ian ( el boy who help me to be At the university) was here , he started to hug me and he told me that he was starting to have the UD.he lay down next to me and told me that what he felt for me, he had never felt , that he felt strange but that he loved that pleasure that he felt when she saw her. I kiss him and we end up sleeping together. “ I want to go with you , together, always" it will continue.
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ResponderEliminarwell, that does it, quota fulfilled :P
Hi , I am new to the blog :)
ResponderEliminarHi,I hope that today'll be a good day for all 😋
ResponderEliminarhi classmate, I would like to know if we have to submit the writing today or tomorrow
ResponderEliminarhello classmtes, here is my first writing and i hope your comments.
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ResponderEliminarHi guys this is my first draft and I would like to receive some feedback from you. It's about studying English at ICPNA and at school thanks.
ResponderEliminarStudying English is not easy and it can be affected by where are you studying or who is teaching you. I've studied it at school for 13 years and at ICPNA for 3 years and although these are really different places I were able to learn many things in both ICPNA and school. there were more differences than similarities but both were useful.
The biggest difference is that at ICPNA we always use English during the class but at school it was rare to use it at least not verbally. However, at school were times when we speak in English such as interviewing tourists or classmates and drilling whereas at ICPNA we use it with the teacher and classmates to do almost everything. we also have a big variety of materials and teachers for example our workbooks, e-workbooks, CDs, Wi-Fi,etc, but at school I just had notebooks and paper sheets that my teacher had prepared. Also at school we had one teacher per year or more while at ICPNA we have a teacher per 1 or 3 months. The difference with the biggest impact on me was that at ICPNA I needed to talk with people I didn't know and all the time because the teacher grade that in contrast at school I didn't have to talk at all I just had to take exams and practices and if I had to talk they were people that I already knew. I'm sure that there are more differences but it depends on the school you've studied.
And although these are really different places I learned many different and useful thing in each one. For example at school I learned most of my values whereas at ICPNA I learned to express myself and to communicate with others. Moreover I also learn more academic thing such as basic English at school and then improving it and becoming more fluent while speaking at ICPNA. What I learned about English at school helped me later at ICPNA since I already knew a bunch of words and some tenses so when I started at the English institute I was able to understand many things so it wasn't so difficult for me however I had a problem, interacting with people isn't my best quality but at ICPNA I learned how to talk and keep a conversation with others at least in English. The things I learned there are both memorable and wonderful for me.
The differences were quite a lot but the experiences I had there are valuable, I hope I will never forget those things I learned and how do that help me. Studying English is important now so it doesn't matter where are you studying what's important is that you are doing it.
Thanks for reaching it
I have read your writing and I think that you should use more "commas".I think that the correction is in this way
EliminarFOR EXAMPLE, at school I learned most of my values, WHEREAS at ICPNA I learned to express myself and to communicate with others. MOREVER, I also learn more academic thing such as basic English at school and then improving it and becoming more fluent while speaking at ICPNA.
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ResponderEliminarHi classmate, this is my first draft, please tell me if there is a mistake. thank a lot
ResponderEliminarOne of the most important events that people have is finishing the school and being accepted into college. Even it is one of the biggest challenges that young people usually do. I want to share my experiences of it when I was at school and in the university.
When I was at school my mother planned what I should do before, during and after high school. Similarly to primary school, so it made me feel significantly overpressure. Over time I had to analyze what I really want to do, overall I made my plans without pressure. At school, I had a routine that my mom had given me and it assumed that it was a law. However, not all was boring because being at school I had a lot of free time to play, participated in dancing contests, also homework in a group was exciting and funny since at school teachers didn't want a full of information, they just wanted good summaries. I had a lazy tutor who was very cheerful, but he could advise you; however, when he called mothers to tip off about our misbehavior, that was embarrassing because mothers needed to go to the school to shouted us.
On the other hand, at college, I felt a little disappointed because what other persons told me was not totally true, since being at university gives us independence, but a lot of responsibilities at the same time, so we must use the time productively, even enhance the method of study. But being at university is not so bad since it helps you to mature, whereas at school you might not learn about the "real independence”. Consequently, I wanted to relate the case of one of my classmates, we had two different teachers that taught mathematics, though we could choose one for the course, so he changed twice his election, but it involved him with a problem since he took the course with a different teacher that the system gave him, he hadn't noticed after the course concludes, however he tried to fix it but was almost impossible so what he did was call to the correct teacher, but who talked with the teacher was the mom of my classmate, it was embarrassing not only for him if not for us since our teacher expected we were mature instead of avoiding our mistakes.
While the school gives us the knowledge, the university transforms us into great connoisseurs. Furthermore, being at university is a mix of feeling because it makes you stronger, but the school was a beautiful experience that I would like to repeat.
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ResponderEliminarHi classmates, here is the final draft of my writting I hope you like it : )
ResponderEliminarplease, if you have any coment or doubt let me know
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_rsA5kvJXe34MwSj5armDCtY-tP7tS4Y/view?usp=sharing
Hello guys, I finished my writing and I would like to know your opinions about it. If there is something that I need to improve please let me know. Thank you all of you.
ResponderEliminarI am majoring in law and taking some courses this summer because I want to star in a good way the next semester. Two of the most difficult are 'civil law' and 'constitutional law'. I am trying to do my best to pass those courses. Happily, my profesors are excellent to explain the toppics.
My Civil Law professor, Mr. Montero and my Constitutional Law professor, Mr. Gálvez have a lot of patience with us. Mr. Montero likes to tell us some short funny stories during the class, specially to avoid feeling stressed. Similarly, Mr. Gálvez likes singing for a couple of minutes; I think that that is because to make us feel comfortable and not bored at all. As I said before, both courses are a bit difficult, we have 4 hours of class (each one).
Besides, they insist that we work hard and we do. In contrast, the type of work that they give us is different. Mr. Montero expects us to read some chapters of books before every class, he thinks it is to understand better the next class. On the other hand, Mr. Gálvez prefers to explain the class first and then he thinks that we are able to read the books about the course and the lesson of that day.
Finally, despite their differences, I think that they both are excellent professors.
i have had the opportunity to experience two kinds of learning english. that is one of my favorite courses and i would like to enhance it. this experience is really positive for me,as it makes me analize that there are many things to compare and to contrast between english at ICPNA and english at my school.
ResponderEliminarMy english classes at ICPNA are taken in a really big classroom . I have classes one hour and a half and five days for a week . Here at ICPNA ,each courses lasts one month with the same partners , also sometimes the same classroom. Happiy, is no too expensive for almost all ICPNA´S students. Finally, all the students from ICPNA must get good grades in orden to pass the course in the same way other institues.
In my school, english clasess are taken in a really big classroom similarity as ICPNA does. Fortunately, those classes are given for free; however, each english class is taken two hour just one a week and i do not practice too much, that is crucial issue. At my school , the course lasts one year with the same teacher , partners,and schedule. And ,to pass the course , you have to get good grades in the evaluations.
In conclusion, there are more differences than similarities in both of these institues , but both are good educational experiences. The best part is that both institues teach us a really good and necessary language english.
Hello classmates this is my final version , Can you help me if i have mistakes? please :)
Hi classmates, I finished the final draft of the writing I. If you have any commments just let me know. Thank you!
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ResponderEliminarHi guys, this is my final version of my writing. I hope that you enjoy it. If you find any mistakes let me know. Thanks.
ResponderEliminarI remember when I went to school. I was really happy with all my subjects and my teachers. In addition, my history teachers were significantly my favorites. One of them taught me history of Peru and the other Universal history. They were both extremely dedicated and knowledgeable with their classes. For instance, my Peruvian history teacher, Mr. Huamán, was hired by a prestigious academy because he knew how to explain his classes by an easy way. Likewise, my teacher of universal history, Mr. Alcarima, was hired to teach some universities. They both had a creative ideas and the best methodology. Mr. Huamán liked to explain little by Little his classes and if we didn’t understand well, he gave us a lot of creative methods, about how we can summarize all his classes with the most important information. He always said, “ If you want to enhance your knowledge or understand more, you should summarize the most outstanding of each class.” Similarly, Mr. Alcarima, he loved to explain his classes with summaries and performances, they were like a movie. That we understood what happened in the past was crucial for him. However, the type of homework that they left was different. Mr. Huamán wanted us to look for some extra information about the class via internet and then publish it on his virtual blog. On the other hand, Mr. Alcarima wanted that we analize his classes and then, with the collaboration of my classmates find the most important points and finally he wanted that we make schemes and drawings in our notebooks. Despite their differences, they were both excellent and amazing teachers.
Hi guys. This is my final version of W1
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/17zUOq_tcHOXSAfha4U1ye_EWN_YS-NRfKy1Bw9Hql9Y/edit?usp=sharing
Hello, this is my final version 😊
ResponderEliminarWhen I started school I didn't know how is going to be, then I started university and it was completely different to school so I writing this to compare both part of my life.
My school was very small because it didn't have cafeteria, green areas either social ares. In contrast my university is so bis and have green areas with tall trees, a big cafeteria and alsoa gym!, where students can go in their break. Moreover there were many students in my old school like 500 approx. and we all knew each other well, also we used to have the same interesting. However, in the university there are 3500 students (only in the career that I'm studying). There are older students, people who work and have different goals.
Besides, the teachers in school were very good and always were able to answer any question that we used to have similarly in the university the teacher are also execelent and friendly, they so dinamic when explain the class and they use materials like ppts or experience that they had.
In addition, students at school can study a minimum of 1-2 hourcometek and this may be only fos the test on the other hand students of university are necessary to study at least 3-4 hours, it depends of the course. In school I took 15 courses for year while in the university I take just 5 or 6 courses for semester, for exqmple in school there are courses that you have to take mandatory like Algebra, Math, Geography, Literature and others. Nonetheless in university we take courses of our career.
In conclusion, school and university is different completely different in many ways, but It's the best experience that I have had because I learned too much things and met a lot of people.
Hi Maria, I read your writing and here are some suggestions.
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we used to have(or share) the same [interests].
they [are very enthusiastic](OR dynamic)
In addition, students at school can study a minimum of 1-2 hour and this may be only [for] the test[; on the other hand,] students of university [need] to study at least 3-4 hours, [but] it depends of the course.
I take just 5 or 6 courses [per] semester, for [example, in school was mandatory to take courses] like Algebra,
Nonetheless, in
school and university [are completely different in many ways], but [are OR were] the best experience that I have had because I learned [a lot of OR many] things and met a lot of people.
What does "hourcometek" means?
Hi guys , here is my final writing.
ResponderEliminarOne of the most special moments or experiences in our life that you can remember is the school and the university, in both you can find people that may help in your future for example Ms.Diana and Mr.Neyra , two persons that changed my life.Now I say similarities and differences of them.
When I was in the school, my favorite subjects are biology,comunication and literature.At the time I thought to study veterinary but the last year of the school changed my idea . In addition , my favorite teacher at school is Ms Diana, she is funny and friendly with the students likeise Mr.Neyra, who is my teacher at University, they are punctuak and responsable . Mr.Neyra likes to read, report and comment about the news in the same way Ms.Diana but one big thing that have in common is that they teach comunication.
In contrast , they have different type of work , Ms Diana explained her class with patience and answer all the dubts while Mr.Neyra explained with jokes and examples that make more easier to understand .Moreover Ms.Diana planned her class in a scheduale similary Mr.Neyra but she extended her explanation and we did not finish the topic of the day while Mr.Neyra finished the topic and when we did not understand something in his Youtube channel, he solved somequestions and explained more about the topic.
To conclude, this two persons have many differences and similarities but are special for me because both thought me a value things for instance,Ms.Diana taught me to love reading and express myself without nervous in front of others besides Mr.Neyra taught me to be patient and put my effort to finish my career.
Hi guys, this is my first draft of the first writing, please tell me if there is a mistake. Thank you.
ResponderEliminarHaving studied english at ICPNA and at high school for many years, I can say that studying in both were a good experience, although there are more differences than similarities.
Two of the differences between studying English at ICPNA and my high school are the teachers and their method of teaching.In general, teachers at ICPNA are good, they are well prepared, very enthusiastic and punctual. Moreover, they prepare their own material to complement their classes like a tv screen to show power points or videos to illustrate what they are talking about, so students can understand easily. In contrast, at my high school, teachers just gave us papers to complete and used the blackboard to write their examples and homework, but they taught us the basic and important things that helped me not to be lost when I started to study at ICPNA, and that so far I do not forget. Also at high school I had one teacher per year or more while at ICPNA there is a different teacher for every month. The class size is different too. Whereas my high school had about 40 students per class, ICPNA's classes have a maximum of 25 students and that fact affects the learning of students. Furthermore, my classmates at icpna are of different ages; therefore, there is a great diversity of points of view that help students to enhance their level of english in class. On the other hand, my classmates in my high school were practically the same age as me and we knew each other since we were children, but we did not practice speaking english as much as we do at ICPNA.
To conclude, once a teacher told me that I should value all the teachings they give me and learn as much as I can.
despite the differences and similarities, in both I learned more than a english course and I am very grateful for that.
Hi Sandra, I've read your essay and I think that it's good. You used correctly the vocabulary and punctuation rules.
EliminarKeep improving, greetings.
Hi guys, Here is my first writing!!! If you find some mistakes,
ResponderEliminarplease tell me.....bye
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dsP6F4hG_VTM2QT7P2kfq4_u3FLe6zrWOMWsVyT484c/edit?usp=sharing
hi guys ,this is my writing hope you enjoy reading ,please let me know if there are mistakes ,thanks in advance
ResponderEliminari am taking three courses this month ,i am very happy with all my teachers.In addition ,my english teacher at icpna and my teacher at crc -peru are my favorite because they are very friendly and smart ,they both have a good sense of humor ,they arel able to help you whenevr you want.
In fact,my english teacher ,Mr.Mark has created such smart way to learn named class -blog where you can interact with other students while my teacher at crc -peru has received an award for his long time of teaching.he has been teaching since 1995,they know how to catch the attention of their students .both teachers tell us that we need to work hard in order to get good grades and we do .however ,the type of work that they give is different ,Mr.Mark suggests us to read a lot and watch english movies .in contrast ,Mr .paul ,tells us to listening music.
Mr.Mark tries to motivate his students ,giving some small homeworks,he is such a nice person ,he likes giving good advices to his students in the same way he likes to do the right things .in contrast ,Mr paul likes to make jokes during his class ,he always says -be responsible and you will be a winner-,despite all their defferences ,they both are great teachers.
Hi it's me, Bruce.
ResponderEliminarHere's my first draft of the first writing, hope I get some advice on my mistakes.
Here it is:
Yesterday on the bus, I was talking with a friend and we ended up comparing our old schools. Overall, his school was better, making me want to go back in time to go with him to his school.
My school was practically new, the principal had to raise it from zero. It was a small building, and had only 1 section per grade. Her prices were cheap when comparing it to the other schools around. My parents chose it because of this, but cheap things bring ruin sometimes. The principal was kind of greedy, she wouldn't pay the teachers on time and when they asked for a raise, she would refuse to give it to them. This made the teachers leave for better job opportunities. We were switching teachers every 3-4 months and that had a negative impact on our education. And we had to rent a soccer yard for our physical education classes.
On the other hand, my friend's school was also new, but very known and it was heavily supported by a bank. It was a medium-sized building that could have at least 2 sections per grade. In contrast to my school, his had expensive prices, but it was actually worth paying those amounts, because the education levels were higher. No bad finances caused by high ranks (the principal) meant well paid teachers, no need to leave in the middle of the school year. They had also extracurricular courses like guitar courses and dancing practices. And they had their own sports yard to top it all off. He had won the discussion, and made me think that I had studied in a junkyard, I got a little jealous.
Hi Bruce, I read your draft and here are some suggestions.
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she[didn't]pay the teachers on time and (when they asked for a raise, she refused to give it to them.
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if they asked for a raise, she would refuse to give it to them.)
On the other hand, my friend's school was new, but well known(or very well known) and it was heavily supported by a bank.
No bad finances caused by high ranks [that] meant well paid teachers
Hi guys, this is my first draft of the first writing, please tell me if there is a mistake. Thank you.
ResponderEliminarAmong the 4 years that I've been studying english I've met a lot of teachers, visited a lot of classrooms and learned different kinds of teaching strategies. However, I really enjoy learning english at ICPNA as well as I did at CIVIME. CIVIME is a place where militaries study and their children too, because it is cheaper to pay than ICPNA.
In this place the teachers taught me how to pronounce a lot of words, grammar too, but they focused more in pronunciation. I studied only on saturdays , my classes began at 8:00 am and finished at 3:30 pm. I had three breaks. However, I didint like to go too early there and I was in the classroom at 9:00 am. and left that place at 1:00 pm.
I entered at ICPNA, not because I wanted to, it was beacuse my father realized that I neither study nor going to class and pass the books with successful grades. I began ICPNA on I06 and I couldn't be absent as I used to do. It was because I could fail the book or lose a point and I didn't want that. At ICPNA I've learned more vocabulary and grammar. The teacher that taught me here were so much good and I learned and enjoyed the way they teach. When I began advance courses , I started to be absent again but sometimes I have to review my book because there is something new to learn.
To conclude, in both places I enjoyed learning and sharing with new people. Nevertheless, I love a little more ICPNA because I went through a lot of experiences and that is something I wont forget
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ResponderEliminarhi my dear partners,I'M YANED PACCO TRUEVAS.This is the first writing , if you find any mistake please just tell me .
ResponderEliminarI'm taking three courses this month, methodology, english and french.I'm happy with my teachers; however,my english and methodology teachers are my favorite.They are both completely friendly and smart.For instance, my english teacher Ms.Alvarez has been working at ICPNA since 2002, she is a good teacher.In the same way, my methodology teacher Ms.Saavedra has a lot of experience working at ICPNA.They both have a good sense of humor,Ms.Saavedra is always smiling in class.Similarly,Ms.Alvarez is very funny , she is always smiling in class too.Ms.Saavedra is patient and well organized.In contrast, Ms.Alvarez is not so patient and a little untidy.The type of work that they give is different.Ms.Saavedra expects us to present a good demo class in only 20 minutes and she grades us according to our presentation ,also she always says ¨be early for your demo class presentation´´.On the other hand,Ms.Alvarez created a blog and we send our writing there and share our opinions with our partners,I think is a good way to learn more .In conclusion , depite their differences and similarities they are both excellent teachers,i'm happy with them.
Dear Classmates.
ResponderEliminarthis is my writing.
The big difference between mooc and conventional education is the possibility to access to the course every moment while conventional course people have to attend the university on a specific schedule. Therefore, I think that online course is good resources to learn new skills or knowledge.
The online course that an important university organizes in order to increase new students from different nationalities. Although, the class is different and no common the faculty create excellent resources such as blogs and chats.
On the other hand, in the conventional class, the teacher creates classes such as a presentation about their topics and he has to attend to the faculty to teach their students. Besides, the students listen to the teacher and interact with other students.
To conclude, Mooc and conventional education have advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, I believe that mooc is a way to learn that it will be common in the future and will create a new way to learn without attend to the classroom.
Hi Ricardo, i read your writing and here are some suggestions.
Eliminaraccess to the course[whenever], while conventional course
I think that an online course is [a] good resource to learn
The [purpose of an] online course that an important university organizes [is] to increase [the number of] new students from different nationalities.
Although the class is different and [not too] common, the faculty create excellent resources such as blogs and chats.
I believe that mooc is a good way to learn that will be common in the future and an excellent option to learn without having to attend class meetings.
Hi Ricardo, I was reading your first writing and I have some advices. In the first paragraph just put an "a" like this "I think that an online course is a good resource to learn." And improve the second paragraph exactly the first sentence.
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Hi guys, this is my final draft please read and comment and
ResponderEliminaralso let me know if there are any mistakes thanks.
Teachers have a lot of responsability because they are passing knowledge to the students while educating,counseling and couching.I have been studyin gEnglish for almost three years, this is my last month actually. In all this time I have met many teachers all of them wonderfull professionals but I have two favorites which I would like to describe their differences and similarities in terms of teaching.
Mr.Fong, who was my teacher in Basic 5 used to use many teaching techniques and many materials like power point,videos,games and books.Using learning tools he created a very motivated learning environment On the other hand Mr.Kiezebrink ,who was my teacher in Intermediate 8 liked to use just the program book and he made us to read it in class, that technique made the class a little boring sometimes.The sense of humor was also completely different between them. For example,Mr.Fong used to joke with the students he always smiled and it gave us the confidence to participate and also share ideas in class whereas Mr.kiezebrink always was serious he seemed to be upset all the time.In fact, many of my classmates including me had
something like fear.
Learning a new language is difficult at the begining it was that Mr.Fong always said he also told us that we should read and review the class and getting good grades would depend on us In the same way Mr.kiezebrink gave us some advices of how to improve our grades or tips to speak fluently. Both are good English speakers.Mr.Kiezebrink is from Canadian so English is his native language.I liked his pronunciation;likewise Mr.Fong had a perfect pronunciation.
In adittion, they helped me a lot in my English learning process.To be honest both are incredibles teachers with incredibles teaching styles.
Hi everybody. I want to share my final draft with us. If something is wrong please let me know it.
ResponderEliminarFinal Draft: My Two Educational Experience
I had two great educational experiences in which I learned a lot and developed my skills how professional. They were two courses related my career, architecture, one of them was a social workshop to design a cultural center in Villa María del Triunfo, Lima, Peru. In contrast, the other one was a international summerschool to design a house of the future in Brescia, Italia.
When I took the social workshop I was enthusiastic because this project would help a community in Villa María, similarly, I was so exited when I was selected to participate in the international workshop. But now that I can analyze those two educational experience I notice that both were so different.
At first in the social workshop we worked on a room of the humble community center near to the project's area. In contrast, on the international summerschool we designed all the time in a classroom at the University of Brescia. But how both workshops were to design we had to work in groups everytime.
The communication in the social workshop was easy, everyone spoke in spanish, teachers, students and the community. On the other hands in the international workshop we usually spoke in english but sometimes in spanish,italian or french.
We had very little technology in the social workshop. However, to design the community center we had to carry ours lap tops and when the architects needed explain some ideas they just used a whiteboard. In contrast, in the international summerschool we could use university's computers, projectors or internet connection.
Class makeups-student were different too, in the social workshop the students were predominantly from Peru but from different areas or sectors of the country. On the other hands, in the summerschool most of the students were italians and some of us were peruvians, colombians, spanish and french.
In the end both project's results were amazing, those educational experiences changed in some way my view of my career, but I will not never forget what a teacher, Mr. Ferreyra, in the social workshop told me. He said all of us could make a different in the world if we really want and work hard to become our dreams reality.
Frank Mendoza Rodriguez
Hi Frank, I read your final draft and here are some suggestions.
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They were two courses related [to] my career
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[And] the other one was [an] international summerschool
But because both workshops were to design, we had to work in groups the whole time.
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we had to carry our lap tops and when the architects needed [to]explain some ideas they just used a whiteboard.
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those educational experiences changed in some way my view of my career, but I [will never] forget
He [told us that we] could make a [difference] in the world if we really [wanted] and [worked] hard to [make our dreams come true.]
Good night classmates I wolud like you to read my homework, please if you find any mistake let me know.
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Good morning classmates, I recently read yours writings and I think you can improve it with the vocabulary of the book, also see carefully when u put the connectors. I hope it can help you 😊
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ResponderEliminarHi classmates, in this opportunity i’m going to leave here my final version of the W1:
ResponderEliminarDuring my school life, I’ve only had 2 favorite teachers. One of them in primary school and the other one in secondary school. Even though they were my favorite teachers, they were really different in how they behaved.
Their differences were a lot, from the way they behaved to how they taught. My favorite teacher in primary school was the history teacher. Her name was Kathy. She was very relaxed, unlike Annabelle, she was my favorite teacher in secondary school. She was very strict about how to behave and at what time we arrived from the break. On the other hand, Ms Kathy was completely opposite. Instead she always got us ice-cream and that’s one of the reasons why she was my favorite teacher. But sometimes, while her classes were really boring, Annabelle’s were never because in every class we had she always had an interesting story or tale, and they were so amazing that we always hated once her class finished.
Even though they were different, they had strong similarities as well. Ms Kathy as well as Ms Annabelle both were so pationate on their classes. When Ms Kathy showed us historic videos she always used to stop them to explain more about it. In the same way, when Ms Annabelle narrated ya stories she even interpretated the voices of the characters to make it funnier and catchier for us.
If i had to choose one of them to say who i liked thebes most, It will definitely be Annabelle. Her stories were just so amazing that they introduced me into literature and also i’ll never forget the stories she narrated us.
Christian L
Hi guys this is my first draft and I would like to receive some feedback from you.
ResponderEliminarI’ve had two favorite teachers who have been very important in my english gramar process.
In fact,they are really smart.My english teacher at school and my english teacher at ICPNA.They have many traits in common,but there are some differences between them.Firstly,they are both enthusiastic.My english teacher at school,Ms.Sanchez tried her best to help us study english,specially encouraging us t oread books and listen music in english.Likewise,my english teacher at ICPNA,Mr.Rojas willingly answered our questions anytime,even when we were out of class.Moreover,both of them used to motivate us to speak frequently and interact with others.Secondly,both of them have a good sense of humor.For instance,Ms.Sanchez used top ut a romantic song in english,when we were tired or stressed.In the same way,Mr.Rojas always started a lesson with a funny story to attract our attention to his lectura.
However,there are some differences between them.Ms.Sanchez used to give us to come class about ten minutes late.Also she used to give us a lot of homework,but she hardly ever checked it.She always said “I’ll check all homework next week”,in other words,she was a lazy teacher.On the other hand Mr.Rojas was very responsable,punctual and strict.He always checked all homework.He even created an email,so that we sent our questions about english grammar.
In short,despite their differences,they are both excellent teachers because all these activities helped me a lot in my english process and nowsays I’m able to speak and write in english correctly.
Hi guys, I 'll share my Flowchart with you, I hope you like it, also as all of us know tomorrow We have to present the portfolio, if you have any idea of extra things we should add, please let me know. : )
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ResponderEliminarhi guys. im sharing my first flowchart. If something is wrong please let me know it.
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hi guys, I forgot to submit my homework of page 244 but I'm sending it now.
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Hi guys, this is my final version of w1
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Hi guys, this is my first version of W2
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/13xDQreh-q_80P270WjLOrnEHyI2EwQN-uEG2NK35UxM/edit
Hi guys! I’d like to share my first writing with you. If there’s something missing or wrong, please let me know :)
ResponderEliminarTwo mandatory courses that all students have to take at college are Political Science and Philosophy. Both of these courses involve a lot of reading and critical thinking, what makes them my favorite courses.
The methodologies each teacher uses are totally different, and so are they. But they are the best teachers that I could have had, and they have helped me, a lot, to improve my skills and previous knowledges.
Mr. Aguilar, mi Political Science teacher, is a very happy and talkative person; while Dr. Beraun, my Philosophy teacher, is very serious and strict. The reading assignments are also different: Mr. Aguilar always gives us four to five chapters of different books to read in a week; on the other hand, Dr. Beraun gives us only one chapter from a book he wrote and a quiz for the next class. Their classes are totally the opposite too: in the Politics class, te teacher sits in front of us and tells us the history of the political structures of different countries, making us feel involved; in contrast, in the Philosophy class, the teacher usually stays in a corner reading a book for us. Mr. Aguilar enjoys making us participate and discuss; however, Dr. Beraun prefers to have everybody in silence. Both of the classes are full of questions, but Mr. Aguilar is the only one willing to answer them; whereas Dr. Beraun always says “It’s all in the book”, and he is totally right.
Despite their differences, they have both taught me excellent classes, and have helped me learn effectively and pass their courses with high grades.
hello classmates, here is my second writing
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here is my flowchart
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Hi guys, this is my first draft and I would like to receive some feedback from you.
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hi guys, this is my final version.
ResponderEliminarI studied in different locations of ICPNA’s institute. I studied in Icpna Lima centro and Icpna San Miguel .
First of all I can say that bought are consider good because of their teachers and the way of teaching and learning. In Icpna San Miguel , the majority of teacher give extra task for students via on-line while in ICPNA lima centro, the methodology is different, they help students giving examples in papers and listening some audios ,as I consider , face to face listening and writing .despite that there are 25 students per classroom in bought locations ,teachers try to explain as better as possible for what the majority of students can learn.
on the other hand In ICPNA San Miguel a large amounts of students go for the library for having good grades .in ICPNA Lima centro only some students go for the library for studying or reading some text.
Whereas in ICPNA Lima centro have a couple or dinking fountains where you can fill your bottle and drinking water to relax ,in ICPNA San Miguel have drinking fountains for each floor where you can drink a glass of cold water.
to conclude, what really matters is the eduction that thery give you to learn something.
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ResponderEliminarypu can find my final version here.
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hey! her is my flowchart :)
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Hi guys, this is my first draft of the second writing, please tell me if there is a mistake. Thank you.
ResponderEliminarNowadays, a video game console is one of the most popular devices used by children, teenagers and even adults. Some players are able to limit their usage in ways that do not interfere with their responsabilities, but others have developed an addiction and consequently suffer its effects.
Video game addiction involves playing games uncontrollably for many hours at a time. Some people will play only four hours at a time while others can not stop for over twenty-four hours; as a consequence, they can get health problems like insomnio or a worse vision.
Another common effect of video game addiction is isolation and withdrawal from social experiences. Some players get so wrapped up in the game that forget their surroundings, this can lead to a breakdown of communication skills and often a loss in socialization.
Furthermore, it can disrupt the ability of a person to keep up with regular daily responsibilities; consequently, people can show a poor academic performance and others may end up losing their jobs altogether. Dependency, lazyness and anxiety are also caused by video games addiction.
However, playing video games has a positive side as well. According to studies, people who play video games constantly train their brains; as a result, they improve their cognitive functions and thus help them make fast and more precise decisions. Also it enhances hand eye coordination, better concentration, increase creativity and may slow down aging.
To conclude, playing video games can and should be a fun activity for all to enjoy. But just like everything else, the amount of time one spends playing video games needs to be balanced with personal and social responsibilities.
Hi guys, this is my draft about Flowchart and caused-and-effect essay.
ResponderEliminarFlowchart : CAUSE = TABLETS
1. Dependency --> check it all the time --> over use it
2. Missed opportunities --> plans with family and friends ---> ignore them
3. Use it in innapropriate places --> in front of important people --> in classroom or even at work
4. Affect social and emotional development --> issues to express ideas --> problemas to speak in front of classmates or coworkers.
Tablet dependancy may lead to compulsive behaviors. These behaviors include check it all the time. As a consequence, you will over use it even in places where you are not allowed to do it.
Besides, whether you keep using it excesive times; consequently, you will miss opportunities in your life. For example, lost plans with your family and friends. But not only that, whether you use it in classrooms or even at work; therefore, you will miss opportunities to socialize with other people, they might think that you are being rude with them because you are ignoring them.
Due to the fact that you have compulsive behaviors, your social and emotional development will be affected.
To avoid these issues in your life it is completly necessary that people try to control the time to use a tablet or any electronic devices.
Hi everybody here is my draft but I lack the conclusion , I want to be corrected if I have some mistakes , Thaks.
ResponderEliminarCurrently technology may solve many problems , some people say that make more easier our life but When them become a problem ?. Let us to know some positive and negative effects.
As you know, todaythere are many devices that give us solutions for examples GPS, this allows you to locate addresses faster and easier moreover, GPS can give an extra information for instances about which streets are closed or where there are accidents besides, give other alternative to arrive fast to wherever you wantbecause show extra routes or paths that are bot busy by the traffic, I can say that it is one of the solutions for not to be stressed by the traffic.
On the other hand, GPS might cause dependency bacause many people use it a lot of times for any address includes that you know also it could be distractive while driving . In addition, may can cause a problem in a hipocampo because when you get used to GPS, gets all the routes , you can not pout into practice your memory and few time later it could be difficult to memorize something.
Hi! Nice one, but I think you should recheck the punctuation when you use subordinators. Also, you have some little spelling mistakes.
Eliminarhey! this is my first draft, if there a mistake please let me know. Thanks :)
ResponderEliminarMany devices have influenced in our lives since technology has advanced, bringing good and bad effects in society. One of these are the tablets, from which I will begin to write.
First I will start with the positive effects. Tablets allow people to stay connected anywhere and at anytime, thats makes our lives easier. A good example of this for teenagers or students is that they can find anything there either books summaries or definitions; as a result, they would no longer go to the library to check out books or ask their parents about a topic that they dont understand. Consequently, they save time and can use it in things that they like. Another positive effect is that tablets is a good tool for students because it have access to the internet, they can find a diversity of apps that can improve in their studies like courses online.
You can also find bad effects like the dependence of being with this electronic object. Children get addicted so they make tantrums when they dont use the tablet. A a result they, dont want to sleep. One example of this is my litlle cousin that always start breaking out in tears when my aunt dont give her the tablet. Another negative effect is that adults and teenagers make constant interruptions or get distracted when something is serious. Thus, they aren't aware of what is happening around them. Consequently they dont enjoy their live.
In conclusion, many devices affect our lives, but we decide if we choose the good the bad effects. An advice that I can give to people who declined to be addicted of the use of tablets or any device is to make specific times technology-free, it ´ll help you a lot.
Hi classmate, this is my final version of writing Nª2. If there’s something missing or wrong, please let me know.
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GPS is an important technology that provides essential information about the position of different vehicles such as cars, trucks or ships. As a result of the information, we avoid getting stuck in traffic or reducing waste time. However, it has some disadvantages due to robber could use the information and steal our house or business. Another disadvantage is that devices are expensive and some people could buy it.
ResponderEliminarTo conclude, GPS is a great technology to help and improve our lives because it provides important information. However, it might be controlled because other people could know our position and take advantage of it.
Hi. This is my final version of W2.
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Hi guys, this is my first draft of the first writing, please tell me if there is a mistake. Thank you.
ResponderEliminarAs we know laptops make our life easier because its portability makes it available to work or play games anytime or anywhere. However, it also leads us to develop several problems.
Some of these problems might be that its portability makes it easier to be stolen. Another problem is spending hours working or playing in the laptop might cause your eyes to get red. Moreover, laptops allow you to share documents, photos or games. In addition, having it at all times may be a little stressful, due to the constant efforts that you'll have to do to concentrate.
In conclution, laptops might be a sword of double edge because it can make our life easier or it can cause several damages if we are not carful.
Hi guys, this is my flowchart. I hope you read it and if you find some mistakes, please let me know.. thanks
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Hello, this is my final version of W2 after the final class.
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hello dear partners , I'm Yaned Pacco Truevas,i wanna share with you mi final draft of the final writing , i hope you will enjoy reading .
ResponderEliminarBeing one of the greatest inventions of the 21st century makes the smartphone something we cannot imagine our lives without.The fact that this small piece of technology provides us with numerous funtions,among which the most valuable one is communication ,the smartphone are starting to catch on around the world.
smartphone provide people with music,we can access to search engines,chatting options and even playing games.However,the time students spend on the smartphone nowadays turn it into extremely worrying because they do not understand the many negative effects that smartphone have aside from the actual advantages.
The main reason why smartphones are bad for the people is their influence on helth.Smartphones are harmful to the heart, brain and the body in general. Acording to some researches, using the smartphone too often may lead to serious brain damage. Aproof of this statement is headaches many people complain after using the smartphone for too long, specially when talking on it.The waves from the smartphone move to the brain and cause headaches which may even result in poor memory.
A person using their smartphone too often can develop heart diseases. What many people are not aware of is that a person is not only exposed to the dangerous waves when carrying on the smarphone , but also,when the smartphone is kept near the body .Consecuently ,if a person is keeping the smartphone near the body or even under the pillow, he might be damaging himself.
To conclude ,overuse of smartphones will affect your health.Therefore you should try to put it aside , in that way you are going to prevent some diseases.It's recommendable to turn off your smartphone if you are going to bed .Try to find an appropriate way to do it since its such a useful tool.
Hi guys,this is my second and last draft , I hope you enjoy and let me know if there are some mistakes.
ResponderEliminarComputers have changed the lives of people in many ways.Now sitting in front of the computer , people can simply do anything such as, get useful information,do homework ifr you are a student, find your favorite music or something about it, etc.For these reasons,people use computers in many places such as, schools ,hospitals,offices and at home.As you can see, computers make our live easier.However,computers may have positive and negative effects on us.
The most common positive effect is the easy access to enter different social networks.There are many social network such as, facebook , skipe and my space where people can meet new people also share photos or talk with old friends from school.Other positive effect could be the esay way to find information for assigment,so many students are able to use social networking of learning math´s, reading history and science.
On the other hand the compulsive use of these machines can cause severe health problems.For example:eye strain and headache .Staring at the computer in the same position for a long time cause eye strain;as a consequence, people can get a headache and pain in the eyes;as a result of that, they have to use glasses.Moreover be on internet all the time could become addiction.
To conclude, computers are wonderfull creation and are very useful in our daily lives, but we must know how to use them because they may have good and bad effects on us.
Hi guys, this is my secod writing. if there are some mistakes, please tell me.
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hello my dear mates,i will show you my final writing ,i hope you enjoy reading ,please ,if you can find any mistakes let me know in order to correct them .
ResponderEliminarHaving been witness of a lot of greatest inventions in the last decade ,we think of computers,they are amazing because they make us our life easier .Computers have a great influence on our every day life ,however ,they have advantages y desadvantages ,let us try to explain in context .
As many of you know, nowadays computers play an important role in our life ,For example,we could do our work ,you could find any information you want .Actually ,computer is such a wonderful tool for students in order to get knowledge.
Currently ,there are alot of apps available .For example,SKYPE,where you could meet people from all over the world ,this helps us to know a new culture and also you could llearn a new language.
Talking about advantages of computers.In this part ,I would like to share my point of view of having a computer at home .As we know ,there are a lot of good and bad apps .For instance ,people turn addicted to playing video games and others get addicted to watching hot videos,as a consequence,they waste too much time .
Another example can be.if you spend hours and hours in front of computer ,it will end up in eye problems.As a result of that ,yours eyes will get sick.
to sum up all ,computers are good and we have to know how to use it to get good results.
hello my dear mates,i will show you my final writing ,i hope you enjoy reading ,please ,if you can find any mistakes let me know in order to correct them .
ResponderEliminarHaving been witness of a lot of greatest inventions in the last decade ,we think of computers,they are amazing because they make us our life easier .Computers have a great influence on our every day life ,however ,they have advantages y desadvantages ,let us try to explain in context .
As many of you know, nowadays computers play an important role in our life ,For example,we could do our work ,you could find any information you want .Actually ,computer is such a wonderful tool for students in order to get knowledge.
Currently ,there are alot of apps available .For example,SKYPE,where you could meet people from all over the world ,this helps us to know a new culture and also you could llearn a new language.
Talking about advantages of computers.In this part ,I would like to share my point of view of having a computer at home .As we know ,there are a lot of good and bad apps .For instance ,people turn addicted to playing video games and others get addicted to watching hot videos,as a consequence,they waste too much time .
Another example can be.if you spend hours and hours in front of computer ,it will end up in eye problems.As a result of that ,yours eyes will get sick.
to sum up all ,computers are good and we have to know how to use it to get good results.
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ResponderEliminarHELLO GUYS
ResponderEliminarSO IM GOING TO WRITE ESSAY WRITING 2... (PLEASE READ IT AND TRY TO CORRECT IF YOU SEE ANY MISTAKE PLEASE FRIENDS..!!!!)
ResponderEliminarI CANT BELIEVE THAT TIME HAS PASSED SO FAST !!! I RECENTLY WOKE UP IN THE MORNING ,THANKS TO MY HOUSEKEEPING ROBOT ,CALLED MEGUZ568, FORTUNATELY SHE IS PREPARING ME A DELICIOUS PILLS THAT TASTE ITALIAN PIZZA .IM LATE TO GO TO MY WORK SO I WILL USE MY TELE-TRANSPORTER WHICH IS MORE FAST THAN THE SPEED OF LIGHT,IT WILL TAKE ME JUST FEW SECONDS.
NOW IM IN MY OWN COMPANY ,CALLED POLANCO´S, IT IS A WEAPON LASER STORE THAT HELPS YOU TO FIND THE BEST SOFTWARS IN INNOVATIVE ARMS LIKE THE OLD FAMOUS MOVIE ¨STARS WORLD¨.
I USED TO WORK WITH ENGINEERS BUT NOW IM WORKING WITH ROBOTS THAT MAKE GOOD AND PERFECT JOBS .
ONE DISADVANTAGE OF LIVING IN THE 2175 IS THAT THERE ARE OVERPOPULATION AND POVERTY SO IT IS DIFFICULT FOR THEM TO FIND A JOB.
TO SUM UP, MY LIFE HAS CHANGED A LOT WITH SUCH A TECHNOLOGY AND ARIFICIAL INTELINGENCE THAT MAKES ME RECALL THE OLD TIME IN MY TOWN HOUSE WHEN I PLAYED FOOTBALL WITH MY CREW AND SOME NEIBORHOODS.
YASMIN POLANCO
Hi guys I'm lizandro ... I would like to share with you an important idea in the reading 1, that kept my atention... It says that the animals and humanas have their own inteligence, a dogs can smell things a person can't, and humans can see things dogs can't.... So, what do you think about that?
ResponderEliminarHi guys I'm lizandro, and I have researched about koko the gorilla, I could read that, this animal was trained by a doctor, koko could learn to communicate with people with signs.... Do you believe it?
ResponderEliminartoday we need to present our writing 1 of education please..dont be absent this weekend
ResponderEliminarTeacher good afternoon, this is my second writing. take care.
ResponderEliminarMy neighbor could become one of the best tour guide in Peru, although he was hit by a car and he was in coma for 3 months. My neighbor is named Hans and he studied to be a guide for 3 years but one day when he was walking Hans bye hit by a car, fortunately people helped him and he was attended quickly. He was in coma for 3 months and when he woke up he couldn’t remember many things. Hans was in a treatment and little by little he could remind all. Hans studied 1 more year in order to remember all about his career. Finally he found a job and started working again. Nowadays is one of the best tour guide in Peru. In conclusion Hans had a very difficult problem in his life but he never gave up, on the contrary he overcame the obstacle.