ARW1-3
Hello guys...!! Welcome to our Blog on Reading and Writing 1-3.
On this blog we will work on different activities from the coursebook, and exchange ideas, while doing so-, in groups. Thus, this is our space to enjoy working collaboratively on the different tasks we will be assigned to work on all through our 3 months together.
I hope you will enjoy the new experience that will take you one step ahead in Reading and Writing, while getting into the latest of the world of technology, as well.
The first assignment will be to upload your Venn diagram onto this blog by Fri, 12th. You will have access to your friends' and will comment, get ideas from them, analyze and give your feedback to them about their work.
Ma. Graciela Vargas N.
Hello, guys, let´s get interactive..and enjoy this new adventure of keeping in touch..!! Now, you need to upload your final version of the first writing and help one another on the mutual correction: comment on your partners'work, make corrections, express your points of view...
ResponderEliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
Eliminarhello miss, i hope to learn a lot working in this way (blog)
EliminarYou Wil..Working collaboratively is key to developing your own growth..馃憣馃徎
EliminarHi teacher, it's my first time and i really want to learn more about english during this 3 months with my friends and you :)
EliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
EliminarHello everybody, on the first day of class we have done until the page 99, the teacher said that you have to review the new vocabulary and also read the text from the page 95, for the students who didn't upload their final essay please do it and comment it on the blog because the teacher want to check them.
EliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
EliminarHello, these are my firts graphics, please check them
Eliminarthanks :)
copy this link in another tap so see my work: https://es.scribd.com/document/360690252/PORFOLIO-ICPNA-AWR2
hi friend! in the second picture we have similar answers, still i'm gonna check my answers again :D
EliminarHello, this is my first wtitting
EliminarIn the article Extreme perception and animal intelligence written by Temple Grandin and Catherine Jonson, it is explained the extreme perception of the animals, they say that forensic dogs are better than a x-Ray machine at sniffing out contraband. Moreover some dogs that can predict uncounciosly a seizure before it starts, and the seizure alert dogs that were trained to respond a seizure.
Another example is a horse called Clever Hans that apparently knew how to count but in fact he realized human signs to understand the answer, these signs were produced by Hans's owner who trained the horse, the controversy is the even other people couldn't see this trick. So the author concluded that as Hans and the seizure alert dogs aquired their abilities without human help so they think that this animals show superior intelligence, because cognition is viable to solve and achieve something and that is what these animals are might doing.
your writing is really good, it embodies the whole essay :) well done my friend
Eliminarhttps://es.scribd.com/document/360986448/ARW-2 here are my graphs too
EliminarHello everybody, this is my first writing!!
Eliminar¿Animal intelligence or extreme perception? Actually, we do not know. Scientists are finding exactly what animal intellince is. However, there are many cases of animals that can do incredible things so that is why some people think that it is just extreme perception. Besides, in some cases animals are able to just read human behavior by observing what they are doing so in that case they are trained to make jobs that some people can not do themselves. In fact, there is an example, Clever Hans story, a horse that can count but scientist considered it was just extreme perception. Thus, animals can smell, hear,feel and predict things and situations that humans can not.
awesome! you were able to summarize the essay really well :)
EliminarI hope you like my first writing!
EliminarAnimals have shown remarkable abilities. For instance, forensic dogs working much better than x ray machines, but others like seizure alert dogs have proved to own extreme perception or animal intelligence? Temple Grandin and Catherine Johnson explain this dilemma that lies in whether these dogs are trained to predict seizures or the delevopment of those skills by itself. Some owners have said that their response dogs which help people when they already have the seizure,turned into seizure alert dogs. It is important to remember the Clever Hans case, the horse that could answer mathematical questions by strangers. Although it was showed that Hans only knew the answers by humans little movements. Was not that a sign of intelligence? What the seizures alert dogs and Hans did definitely shows something special that others of their specie can not do these days.
so good :)
EliminarHello guys, I hope you can check my work :)
Eliminarcopy this link in another tap so see my work: https://es.scribd.com/document/361451026/Portfolio-Awr2
good job friend! straight to the point :D
EliminarAnd now, here are my graphics prom page 138 and 140, hope you like it ;)
Eliminarhttps://es.scribd.com/document/361658264/awr2
hello, this is my second writing :)
Eliminarcopy this link in another tap so see my work: https://es.scribd.com/document/361749045/awr2-wrting-2
Here is my essay, hope you like it :)
Eliminarhttps://es.scribd.com/document/361755563/First-Essay#
Yebsy a can't see your essay .....i says This document has been removed from Scribd.
EliminarValeria, i like your essay...it is a good job :)
EliminarHi classmates and teacher. This is the link of my essay where you can see it.
Eliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzfIZ_4OottPVW9INjZqUmliN1E/view?usp=sharing
I hope you like it. :)
yepsi i can not see it too.
EliminarValeria i really enjoy your essay. you are a romantic person... like a i am...
Maaaaaricruz your essay is very long but it is very interesting!!!
Hello miss, how can I upload my Venn diagram ?
ResponderEliminarsame with me, i don't know how to upload it
EliminarTake a picture and then send it:)
Eliminarreally? but i don't see an option where to upload it :( Did you send it by hotmail or something?
EliminarJust send the link to this address.., or type it here.., tren click on publish..and that's it..:)
EliminarSo can I publish it here on the comments ?
Eliminarso.. i should send the link of the photo i took with my cell phone? how do i do that? sorry...I'm a little confused
Eliminarhttps://es.scribd.com/document/359255929/Venn-Diagram i did it in scribd, hope it's okay
Eliminarhey yepsi, how can i do that, i am very confused...
EliminarPlease , when should we present the portfolio?
EliminarYou should present it on 22nd si that I can checa it. :)
Eliminarhi Lleny, well..i created an account in Scribd, and upload my word file where is the picture of the diagram, and then i copied the link here in the comments, the thing is that is not a direct link, so i'm gonna try to do it again
EliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderEliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderEliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderEliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderEliminarHello everybody .. This is my Venn diagram ..
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=0B2mp5bWj2CjYREZKOFpPdUN0bnc
You have to copy this link in a new tab and that's it :D
Sandy how Did you do it ? 馃槺 help me 馃槉
Eliminaryour diagram it's really pretty! i did the same with my the link, i couldn't insert a direct link
EliminarYour diagram looks very good but i don't know how to do this kind of diagram
EliminarPlease can you help me????
EliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
Eliminarhttps://drive.google.com/drive/my-drive hey here is my venn diagram, can you see it?
Eliminarheeeey maricruz can u see mine?
LLeny; i can not see your venn diagram
Eliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0Bwym6QM1wMDsc3FZR3JFOUtOS1k/view?usp=sharing
EliminarNOW IT IS... I HOPE ALL OF YOU CAN SEE MINE.
Este comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
EliminarI did it using muy gmail account .. I used my drive to upload my file, then I copied the link :D
Eliminaryes...we can see it :) I'm happy you were able to upload it
EliminarYes, I can see your diagram. It looks better
EliminarHello Miss, I hope u will receive my Venn Diagram https://es.scribd.com/document/359379924/Venn-Diagram-1
ResponderEliminarYour diagram is very educational and very cute. Congratulations FRIEND ....!!!!!
ResponderEliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderEliminarHi teacher, this is my VENN DIAGRAM :)
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzfIZ_4OottPekRRdkwzTERpS2M/view?usp=sharing
Hello Maricruz I like so much your Venn diagram, It looks cool ;)
EliminarThank's friend, it was a little difficult for me :)
EliminarHi everybody; i want to share you my second writing and i hope you like it
ResponderEliminarAN OBSTACLE THAT I HAD TO OVERCOME WITH DIFFICULTY IN MY LIFE
When i was 16 years old, i had to choose one career about math in a public university but it was very difficult and confused for me because i didn't know how to apply to the university and my parents didn't have enough money. It was an obstacle but my expectations and inquisitiveness was too high that helped me to never give up my dreams. Finally I found my vocation because i enjoy resolving different kind of math problems and now I'm studying at SAN MARCOS university. I really feel happy because i know that i will never stop doing what i like. In conclusion i consider that your happiness is in your hands, you have to work a lot in what you want because nobody said it was easy and if you never try, you will never know.
I felt identified with you, the same happened to me, I really liked your story which transmit a good message to inspire others.
EliminarNice story!!! I also had the same problem some years ago .. and this is my last year at San Marcos university :D .. I'm sure your family is so proud of how you are pursuing your dream! .. this's just the beginning ..
Eliminarwow, it's good to know you found your true calling, and most importantly, you never gave up on your goal. Keep it up girl!
EliminarOhhhh Sandy :) ... I'm glad to hear that.
EliminarYes, It's true that my parents are proud of me and I am very happy to study in San Marcos because I know it is my first step to have a successful life.
I really liked this story :)
EliminarHello everybody, this is MY writing #1 I hope you like it and could comment it. Genius: Alan Turing Alan Turing is considered a genius in the whole world because, he founded the first computer by traying to figure out the enigma machine codes, which were used to make attacks on the Second World War. He lived in Londres, where he had to study mathematics at university to work and achieve expertise. He must have been persistent because it took to him two years to decode what were the meaning of the codes. It benefited more than 2 million of people so that they would not die, so we could say thank you Alan for never giving up and become a genius.
ResponderEliminarAlso you can see the movie Enigma codes which is so interesting and really dramatic to understand better the life of Alan Turing.
ohhh friend, i knew i had heard that story somewhere else. there's this movie called the imitation game. i think it was nominated at the Oscars. i'm definitely gonna watch it ;)
EliminarI'd never heard about him before .. so interesting!! .. It's clear that a person needs determination and persistence to reach great goals
EliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
EliminarOh .... that movie is so good for me because It covers the key periods of Turing's life. Especially his unhappy teenage years in boarding school and obviously his triumph of his secret work during the war to break the encryption of the machine Enigma of Nazi Germany. But i'm not sure about his homosexual life because he was condened for that....... He's a extraordinary person....... He's so brave....
EliminarI never had heard about Alan Turim. I searched some information on the internet. It says hes descoveries made shorter the second war. This was great!
EliminarHi everyone, this is my first writing.Hope you like it :)
ResponderEliminarMario Vargas Llosa is considered a genius, not only for his literary techniques but also for his understanding of human emotions and social issues. Showing persistence since very young, Vargas had to work for local newspapers at 16 years old. Although he was denied a scholarship request in Paris, after getting one in Madrid, Vargs felt he should stay in Paris with his wife and started writing. In 1963 Vargas emerged gaining critical acclaim after publishing "La ciudad y los perros" followed by "La casa verde" and "Conversaci贸n en la Catedral". Vargas has had a major impact in comparison with other writers in Latin America and received a Nobel Prize among other recognitions for his remarkable work.
Hii Yepsi I really enjoyed reading ur summary paragraph , u used a clear topic sentence and content that supports it . Also ur topic sentence introduces the genius and include a controlling idea .
EliminarYebsi... I like your writing because is about a great person in literature. Vargas Llosa is an excellent writer and i like to read his books especially "LA CIUDAD Y LOS PERROS", but as a politician leaves much to be desired.
EliminarHis hatred against the Fujimori is extremely clear and I agree with him.
I really enjoyed too!
EliminarI read ''travesuras de la ni帽a mala'' It was very interesting and really nice story.
I did not Vargas Llosa is considered a genius. I am happy and proud that he has that recognition.
EliminarHow are you doing miss and guys, this is my first writing.
ResponderEliminarStephen Howking is consider a genius. When Howking was studying at university he was awarded a honor dregree in natural science. Stephen Howking is a particular genius becouse he has twelve honory dregrees so far.He has worked on the topic lows which govern the universe. In spite of his illness, he has persisted to become a legend after Isaac Newton and Albert Einteins. Also, he has studied Eintein's theory of relativity implied space. To conlude, he has published ''a brief history of time'', which was one of best selling book in United States.
see you
Lleny.... :) your summary is interesting and also i saw the movie about him some years ago. He is an example of overcoming and great savant for his good qualities and obviouly for his courage.
EliminarYeah, when you read about him and his life is a particular way to overcome many kind of problemas, obstacles...
EliminarI got very surprised about him.
I wrote about Howking too. I love his story, he is amazing. He has written scientific books, with his daughther, to common people too, in order to close science to people that is not a scientific.
EliminarHello! I want to share my second writting.
ResponderEliminarMy grandfather's name is Prospero, he is from Ancash, where he had a difficult life because of the obstacles that he had to face. When he was four years old his father died so he lived with his mother and five siblings. Furthermore when he was growing up the Government instituted the agrarian reform in which his family lost their lands. Living in a dilapidated house and yearning for a better life, he decided to come to Lima, there he started working by himself and when he could save money he bought a house and with it he became in a business man. Now he had ten children a live in a big house.
Hi Vale :)
EliminarYour grandfather's story is inspirational and it's a faithful reflection of people who come from provincial town cities and achieve success even having many obstacles in their road.
About "the agrarian reform" I think It was a populist measure that caused damage to families like your grandfather's family and It is a thing that the left-wing party, who usually are in favor, cannot deny.
Finally, about your writing, don't forget to put a comma after the word "Furthermore"
Friend ... :) I really like your story because I felt identified since my grandparents lived in Lima, they had to work hard for getting a better life quality. You have to feel proud of them
EliminarYeah in many cases members of our family consider to come here.
EliminarHi guys.. I'm going to share with you my first writing .. It's about Stephen Hawking, I really admire him .
ResponderEliminarStephen Hawking is well-know for his outstanding achievements and constributions to modern science while living with a severe physical disability. When most people think about this savant, the first thing that come to mind are his extraordinary acomplishments in the field of physics and cosmology. Thanks to communication technology as well as his persistence and intelligence, Hawking's disability has done nothing to stymie his studies in science. Hawking's research has earned him numerous awards and honors. his body can be restricted, but his mind still lives stronger than ever. He tells us how to put progress and the betterment of the world in the first place in our life, even when the circumstances suggest you should be disregarded and should give up. His life teaches us that we need to focus on the positive side of everything.
I invite you to see a movie "The Theory of Everything" where you could learn more about this savant. You will find it in Netflix, too :D
hi
ResponderEliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderEliminarHi friends, I want to share my first writing about an extraordinary genius..... I hope you like it ..... :)
ResponderEliminarAlbert Einstein is considered a genius and a great savant because he discovered the theory of relativity. By his passion for inquiry, Einstein is generally considered the most influential physicist of the 20th century. Although he was recognized as a leading scientist, he was appointed lecture at the university of Bern. After he was appointed lecture, he became a scientist very recognized by his experiment.
Years later, he had to aasimilate the death of his parents because they were his motivation. Additionally, Einstein had problems about his childhood because he couldn't retain information and his teacher said him that he was not a good student at math class. Perhaps he may have felt anxious or sad by those obstacle but he was able to get ahead. Nowadays, he is best known by the general public for his mass energy equivalence formula E=MC2, which has been dubbed "THE WORLD'S most famous equation".
Conclusion, he could transformed his life and had success. Finally I consider that everyone should follow his example of practice to attain true expertise.
Hi Maricruz,
EliminarI just read your writing and it's cute. There are only two mistakes that you could review:
1. "...Although he was recognized as a leading scientist, he was appointed lecture at the university of Bern..."
Suggest: When you use "Although" you have to show two opposite ideas, differences or may be limitations. Please check it.
2. "...he could transformed his life..."
Suggest: You should change "transformed" for "transform" because is the right form of the verb.
I hope these suggestions help you :)
Best regards.
Hi! Thank Youtube very much For your suggestion. I'll improve it.
EliminarTank for your suggestion .... I'm going to fix it
EliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderEliminarHi guys,
ResponderEliminarthis is the link where you can see my Venn diagram:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B61kLYS49CxERjNFLUtlQ3owRHM/view?usp=sharing
Please, copy it in a new tab to see and letme know your advises.
thank you.
Your diagram is so good..... it looks fabulous
EliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderEliminarHii guys this is my frist writing about Leonard Cohen
ResponderEliminarhttps://es.scribd.com/document/359558314/Leonard-Cohen-1
Leonard Cohen is considered a lyrical genius because he had an execeptional voice and was able to compose extraordinary songs. He lived in Los Angeles California. Leonard Cohen was persistent and spent five years focus on his song “Hallelujah”, which should make people feel better about not achieving instant success. Additionally,he worked obssesively on his own work, exploring religion,politics,isolation,sexuality and personal relationship.In conclusion , he must have worked persintenly. In 2011, he received one of the Austurias Awards for Literature and the ninth Glenn Prize.
I didn't know he was the author of hallelujah! Wow.. Definitely, all geniuses had to go through hard work to achieve success! Well done, my friend
EliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderEliminarHi guys ,This is my Venn Diagram ... Please, If You can´t see my PPT just tell me. Thanks :)
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=0B9kXZCYlwDe-YnVPbV9tYklCZjQ
It looks good...... It's colorful and it caught my attention a lot..
EliminarHi everybody,
ResponderEliminarI want to share my second writing with you guys. I corrected it with la teacher's advises and added some parts. I hope you can read it.
Thank you in advance.
Tittle: A hard life
We sometimes tend to complain about insignificant issues, for instance traffic, our body’s shape, etc. But there are people that face big challenges in their lives without or with less complaints. That is the case of my mother. She is a really brave woman who had to face poverty, orphanhood, injustice and sordid family events that have made her take decisions and force her to be strong and fight to overcome all obstacles.
When she was 10 years old, her father died. According to what she told me, it was a hard shock in her life, but there was not time to blame or complain. She had to get over it and go ahead because she had 4 siblings, lived in a dilapidated house and had money problems, so she said "I cannot be a problem too" and that is why she accepted to start to work when she turned 12 years. At age 15, a new tragic event happened, her mother was agonizing victim of cancer. Her siblings were sad, however after some months they were afraid and tired to care her mother, so once more, my mother had to be strong and cared with less help her mother until my grandmother died that year. Four years later, after her mother’s death, she had to move from her own house because her old sister and her sister’s husband committed verbal abuse against her and her other 2 younger sisters so she decided to move with them even when she was a 19 years-old woman and she knew that she had to be economically and morally responsible to them. She had to work very hard to support her sisters.
In every tragic event of her life, she was not defeated. Her motto is “there is no time to complain, we have to continue fighting” so her brave character is worth admiring.
Hi everybody.In this opportunity I would like to talk about a famous people that I didn´t know he was considered genius.
ResponderEliminarWell,let´s start...
Leonardo Da Vinci has developed many techniques in different subjects,which helped him make great works of art in the world.
His success was achieved with two of his most famous painting:Mona Lisa and The Last Supper.His genius is between 180 to 190 IQ So He had to develop many inteligences.After 2 Years,Leonardo Da Vinci would have had the opportunity to learn drafting,chemistry,metal working and carpentry as well as the artistic skill of drawing,painting,sculpting and modeling.
Hi gays this is my second writing i hope you enjoy it.
ResponderEliminarMy mother has faced obstacles in her life. She is very persistent and very strong. Se got pregnant of me and my father did not want to have kids so suddendly disappeared. My mother was mortified becouse she was very young.
In reality, she has found different ways to overcome obstacles. She really learned a lot but the most important is that she actually got beneficts frome these obstacles and never gave up. Thus, i will follow her example.
wow you mother was very strong :) she could overcome all her obstacles by herslef
EliminarThanks a lot Pedro :') I will follow her example, working so hard!!
Eliminarhello miss and classmates, this is my first writing
ResponderEliminarSteve jobs is considered a genius because he founded one of the most popular technological companies in the world. He was born in San Francisco. Their parents put him up in adoption so he had to raised in San Franciso Ebay Area until he traveled to India to study. He created Apple with a friend in 1976. The same year, they created the first Apple computer. The next year, they were ready to show the final computer that was a success so it benefited Steve Jobs, and he became millionaire. That's how he started to be successful. In this part of his life had trouble with Bill Gates up to Apple went in ruin. After that, he realized how can solve that problem with a plan that made Bill Gates had to help him. Steve Jobs might not be successful if Bill Gates didn't help him. To achieved more success, he had to created a popular cellphone that is Iphone. Now, Apple is a great technological company thanks to Steve Jobs who also could be considered a savant because he left university, but he never gave up even with all the obstacles, he achieved true mastery and he could safe his company
I don't know much about him, his life seems interesting, and i think there are a couple of movies about his life!
Eliminaryeah yepsi, also there are documentaries about his life
Eliminarwhat interesting story my friend!
EliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderEliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderEliminarHi everybody, this is my Venn Diagram. :)
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2fPO5uT4dD9ZzQ1dDREcVJwSkk/view?usp=sharing
Good night! Everybody have posted some interesting histories about people who they admired.In my case I chose one of my favorite singers.He is Andrea Bocelli,I like How He can play the piano.
ResponderEliminarPlease, let me talk about him.
Andrea Bocelli is a blind Italian tenor who didn’t give up in the face of problems.
His parents and he lived in a farm and sometimes they couldn’t pay their debts. So Harvesting Chiato Bocelli was their principal support.
In his childhood, he was not able to play with other children because he suffered of glaucoma. One day He wanted to play like everybody so while he played soccer he had an accident and got blind.
After, in his twelve years; he had the ability to practice music. Andrea enjoyed playing the piano and sax.His mentor urged him to take classes he even had to work in bars.
Despite having much hopelessness in his career to be a handicapped, he did not give up and continued thanks to the support of his family and children.
Finally, His success came when he sang with Pavarotti and recording albums as a soloist. His expectations were realized with his musical producer.
I hope that you enjoy my little story.
Hi everybody . this is my venn diagram and all my portfolio
ResponderEliminarlink: https://goo.gl/sfEU4S
Hello again everybody ! This is my last writting, I hope you like it and help me to improve it.
ResponderEliminarGenetic testing is curreltly becoming popular but even with this revolutionary testing in which we can know what diseases we would have, can cause on people a negative effect and also the risk factor that can indicate a positive generic result.
The advantages of this kind of test is that who support genetic testing believe it has potential to save many lives. For example this is the case of a person if she hadn't been tested, she would never have known that I had an elevated risk of type-2 diabetes. Because of her test results, she was able to change her lifestyle before developing the disease.
On the negative side the impact of a negative result could cause psychological effects, can lead to risk unhealthy desicions, for instance. Moreover, patients could interpretate the result incorrectly.
For all these negative and positive reasons we need to analyze all our alternative to make a correct desion.
Yes, my friend. There are pros and cons when it comes to this test. I'm still thinking if is it beneficial or all the contrary. See you tomorrow :)
EliminarHi,everybody. This is my first writing,
ResponderEliminarMozart was considered a genius because he was playing the violin and piano by age 4 and composing by age 6. Mozart was born in Austria. He composed more than 600 musics in his life, however his first music was composed when he was 5 years old. He could retain sounds in his head like images for that reason I think he could assimilate a lot of note. In conclusion, he had many abilities to create new beautiful music.
I really like the classic music from Mozart because he has a variety in the instruments and obviously he is a great genius
EliminarYeahh, i strongly agree with you maricruz!!!
EliminarHello
ResponderEliminarThis is my second writing
My best friend is called Jazmin, she is a person who was faced great obstacles in her life but has found ways to overcome and actually benefit from these obstacles. For example, when she was 10 years old her mother died but she undertood the situation and continued with her life. Moreover, my best friend had problems to understand math; however, she studied very hard and she entered university when she was 18 years old. actually, she is an engineer. Her childhood was tormented because she had to live with her cousin who didn't like to take care of her but she always is showing a beautiful smail. In conclusion, she always tries to be a positive person who confronts obstacles.
thanks guys :)
hi teacher I'm Fabiana and this is my opinion essay(Writing)
ResponderEliminarStop People Stop are you going to take a "Home Genetic Testing"
the tittle makes us feel so scared right?. I honestly consider that these king of tests should not be taken without a doctor in front of you , that can explain what the result actually means once you finish completing the test . I'm Fabiana Lara a 17 year-old student and a books lover ,, i think that i have read 400 books in my life among them medical books in which i could learned and understand medical terms and the differences of many diseases .In my case i already know what hereditary diseases i have in my genes and yes it is possibe to develop them but if i maintain a healthy lifestyle i'm sure i can avoid them , i mean it's all up to you , if you take care of your health and you try to improve your lifestyle and you know that you are prone to have an illness , be conscious just prevent and trust me you will feel better.
I have seen how devastated people can feel when they finally get their results , i am going to tell you an anecdote that now makes me laugh , i remember a few years ago i got home and then i visited my grandmother and when i arrived to her house she e¿was crying and shaking with a paper in her hands i asked her: "what happened?" and she gave me the paper , were her results of her Genetic testing , they said that she had an 89% chance of developing Thyroid Cancer and she was really frightened because she suffers hyperthyroidism , she was saying:"I am gonna die" i tried to calm her and we went to a doctor , he did a quick review and the doctor told her that the levels of probabilities of developing thyroid cancer were not as exhorbitant as the test said . Finally the doctor said that taking the indicated medicine she could live well and possibly never develop Thyroid cancer.
Nowadays people rely on these genetic tets wich is incorrect because people give them too much power and then when they see their reults , they feel concerned . I think that taking these kind of tests at home it is completely crazy and "Home Genetic Testing" should be prohibited because they don't have an inkling of how much concern can bring and they are not reliable either , very few diseases can be indicated by a single gene , what about Skin cancer or Leukemia taht is not in our genes , on the contrary they are consciously and sometimes unconsciously provoke on the one hand the sun exposure and on the other side taking about Leukimia is due to bad nutrition wich produces low defenses or a weakened inmune system , the have nothing to do with genetics.
Let's show how intelligent and responsible we are , if we stop taking these kind of tests so lightly , we are going to contribute to stop using them without an appropiate and effective interpretation by a doctor.
I loved your hook Fabiana! Everything you said was right. We shouldn't give so much power to a paper.We should just be aware of our lifestyle :)
Eliminaroow thank you Yepsi
EliminarI really like you hook because it catches my attention.... Good job...!!!
Eliminarhello everubody, this is my second writing, is a great story
ResponderEliminarmy friend from my school has faced obstacles, but he has struggled to overcame these. For example, his father abandoned him when he was a baby so his mom had to work and his aunt took care of him. In addition, his family was poor. Living in poverty was difficult for him because he didn't have enough resources and he couldn't go to a great school. After that, he had to leave his downtown home to study in Lima. He neve give up so he obtained a scholarship in my school thanks to his good grades and when he finished school, he entered a public university. Now he is studying at UNI and he wants to get his mom out of poverty. To conclude it, seeing what he did, it inspired me and other friends to never give up even if you are in the worst situations, you can defeat all your obstacles
Ohh.. That was so sweet! It's still surprising how many kids are abandoned and still manage to survive and move on. Your friend is really strong and brave :)
EliminarGreat story .. your friend was so persistent , I'm sure he's going to have a successful future :D
EliminarHi! This is my opinion about "Home Genetic Testing".
ResponderEliminarWe can decide to live or die for ourselves. If our 99.9% of the DNA of each one has general characteristics like human being but 0.1% that makes us different. This 0.1% can help us solve inherited problems or diseases.
In recent years medicine has been developed by technology, there are different ways to prevent, treat and solve some diseases connected with DNA. For example home genetic testing, which has made life easier for some people; on the other hand there are people who have had problems with this. The anxiety to interpret the results is a negative effect, changes the emotional state and mental balance.
Home genetic testing can only identify 4 types of hereditary diseases, for example Parkinson; the current test does not have the capability to diagnose you with certain diseases. It can only inform you of your genetic risk. We can give assumptions or interpret tests so we need help from specialists.
Seeing that our knowledge about the function and composition of DNA is very poor we should not interpret or assimilate ideas as to suffer a genetic disease. Only experts as a genetic counselor can help us to follow a correct process. Despite the rapidity of these results we must not forget the consequences that can give us in the future.
You 're so right about the anxiety of getting the results. I focused more on that in my essay. That can definitely make people take the wrong decision. Anyways, I liked your essay !
EliminarHi everyone, this is my second writing. Sorry it took a while
ResponderEliminarMy grandma has had to overcome big obstacles in her life,but has always been able to reborn from the ashes as well. As a child, she had to go through poverty in Piura, but never lost hope or given up, even after being exploited while working as a maid in Lima with only 11 years old. After being forced to marry someone she didn't love at 17 years old, she realized she could find freedom and paradise far away from her cruel godmother. Years later, she would suffer a car accident that left her with a serious nervous sequel, writing clearly for her was never the same ever since. But against most of people's expectations, she started working normally struggling with her condition. As far as i'm concerned, she proved to life and everyone that considered her as weak, that she will not be defeated ever again.
Ohhhhh .... the story about your mom is so sad for me and unfair for her.... You have to feel proud by her because she was brave despite the obstacles she had during the life.... :)
EliminarI admire you grandma .. Altough her life wasn't easy , she never gave up..
Eliminaryou both are really sweet! thank you, i am really proud her. My grandma and my mom are everything to me!
EliminarHi again, this is my last writing :) hope you like it.
ResponderEliminar"Oh no! " is what people say when they 're tested positive on developing a desease. I'm currently studying English and one day in class we learnt about genetic test, a non conventional technique of using your genes to know if you're likely to develop a desease. Eventhough there were advantages, i was able to note even more disadvantages in real life.
We have to take in count the psychological effects on people, that is to say mostly negative. I've read about a man that misunderstood a genetic test, which said he had 83% chance of developing colon cancer. That affected him so much that he ended up losing his job. After a time a doctor said to him that those results were only probabilities and with a lifestyle change he could avoid having the disease.
Also, the not full understanding of genes, makes genetic tests not reliable! On the internet these test are offered without a physician's signature or medical guide. Also, we all know our body system is not the same. Therefore, all tests are not equal and don't mean the same.
Truth is, genetic testing a revolutionary alternative in Medicine,but if Goverment truly care for us, they would have to get a consensus in terms of who is authorized on doing these tests.
jejeje I really like the hook from your introduction..... and obviously it help me to continue reading
EliminarGreat job!! .. Even tough I have a different opinion about it, I think you have an interesting point of view..
EliminarHello, guys this is my second writing
ResponderEliminarA Biographical paragraph
My neighbor is a successful and persistent person because he has overcome many obstacles in life and achieved his goals. Unfortunately,When he was Young ,he had an accident and lost one lost one leg. Then ,his wife abandonned him. Even so, he wanted to be a lawyer and worked hard.First, he was persistent and graduated from San marcos University, then studied in California to complete his Master’s Degree. Additionally,he got married again and started a new family. In short I admire him because he was never defeated even though his life was filled with obstacles and deceptions.
Ohhhhh ... i really like this story and it affected my heart.... :'( that motivates me to never give up...
EliminarLife always gives us reasons to smile :D
EliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderEliminarHii this is my essay .Enjoy it :D
ResponderEliminarI’m a university student. I really interested in be tested. Because I believe that Genetic testing could save your life . Genetic testing is the analysis of DNA, RNA, chromosomes, or proteins to detect abnormalities related to an inherited disorder . Think for a moment. You could avoid and prevent your death .It is truth or it is just a joke?.If many people hadn’t been tested , they wouldn’t have prevented their possibles deseases and change their habits or consider treatments . Instead of that , there are advantages and disadvantages that we need to analize .
Patients can avoid serious deseases and choose appropiate treatments. There are many advantages to be tested One of them is that a patient can prevent a desease. For example, a young woman called Sonja decided to be tested and the result showed that she had 50 % to develop cancer . As a result, she took all the preventive measures to avoid getting cancer.Thus, If Sonja hadn’t been tested , she would have gotten cancer. Another advantage is that patients can find the best treatment and improve the quality of life. If patients hadn’t be tested, they wouldn’t choose the best treatments .
On the other hand, patients may feel anxious about the results. The emotional and physical impact can affect the family and the patient. Frist of all , patients are not always physicological prepared to wait and know the truth. Take the case of a Philipine women who got deppression after knew her possitve results. Another is that emotional impact before and after the test. A study showed that 90% patients got anxious during the process. If they had looked counseling they could not got depression.
In conclusion Genetic testing will continue revolutionizing the medicine. Also If you decided to be tested remenber that Testing requires informed consent, careful discussion of test interpretation and , do not forget that It’s always better to prevent desease than to treat it. These factors can make the change and play an important role in your life.
Good afternoon, this is my first writing.
ResponderEliminarALBERT EINSTEIN
Albert Einstein is considered genius because he developed the general theory of relativity, also he is considered the most influential physicist of the 20th century. He was born in Ulm, W眉ttemberg, Germany in 1879. In 1921, he won the Nobel Prize as physicist for his explanation of the photoelectric effect. Also, he worked on development of atomic energy. After EEUU threw the bomb atomicfrom from Hiroshima and Nagasaki, he learned that it is going to be too bad for the world, so he decided to curtail usage of the a-bomb. On April 17th, 1955, Albert Einstein suffered an abdominal aortic aneurysm. Also, Albert Einstein had big problems with his wife. he was not very flexible to change his plans . He just wanted to develop his theory. In conclusion, Albert Einstein might have been studied a lot.
He's really a genius .. He contributed to important advances in science .. I love his phrase " Imagination is more important than knowledge"
EliminarI like so much the explanation of his theory. I advice you if you want to know more about him, you should watch "Genius". It was released months ago in National Geographic. Genius is nominated for 10 Emmy Award categories, including Best Limited Series and Geoffrey Rush for Best Actor in a Limited Series. :)
EliminarHello, this is my second writing:
ResponderEliminarOVERCOMING AN OBSTACLE
I am a student who overcame an obstacle when I was thirteen years old. Playing on the computer was my obstacle. When I was eleven and twelve years old, I played on the computer for many hours. My parents talked me that I must not turn on the computer, but when they were not at home, I turned it on. At school, I did not have good grades. I did not study. Maybe, I could have been an adicted person. In the summer of 2009, My parents had a big problem, so my mother went to Ventanilla and my father continued living at Rimac. I had to take a decision. There were two options. First, If I lived with my father, I would have a computer and internet. Second, If I lived with my mother, I would not have a computer and nor internet, but I decided for this option. Living with my mother changed my behavior because I could study a lot. I could improve my grades. Now, I am studying laws at San Marcos university.
To conclude, I could overcome my obstacle because I left the adiction when I decided to live with my mother.
WAOOOO..... this kind of obstacles can have a big impact in the routine life especially when you don't take the control...... I consider that children have to study without a computer or without any distraction because it affects their mind and brain.
EliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
EliminarI completely agree with you. I have read some articles about pros and cons of technology. It could help simplify our lives, also it could appear new addictions for children and adults. :)
EliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderEliminarHi, This is my essay.
ResponderEliminarSaving money with Genetic testing
If you are the kind of person who likes to have a good health and save money, you should read this essay. Genetic testing has revolutionized the Medical treatments. It could save your life from some desease and save money. Doctors and Patients could take better decisions for treatment. Nowadays, Some couples do it before they have a son, but now you are asking you what the reason is. The reason is simple. They want to know what desease their sons could have and prevent it.
Genetic testing, nowadays, is very expensive. Many people would like to practice it and knowing what disease could develop, but let me say to you: "Do not worried!" The Genetic testing technology is advancing. In few year after, It will be accessible for your wallet and the results of genetic testing are going to be more reliable. Majority of Doctors say "A good diagnosis could save your life". That is true because the doctors will give you a treatment that it would attack directly to the disease.
In addition, Genetic testing would prevent desease and this is the best way to save money because generally the treatments are expensive or they are sometimes very long. When you have a desease , you must pay the Doctor, treatment, pills, transportation, food and other, but if you take a genetic testing before you have a desease, you would prevent it. So, you would just pay the doctor for reading the result and give you a good diet and some suggestions.
To conclude, Genetic testing will have more benefits than disadvantages. It would help to improve people´s lifestyle.
Your writing is good and i agreee with you when you mention that GENETIC TESTING is very expensive because we have a result with counseling and interpretation by professionals and also because we can choose a treatment according to the genetic profile... It's a little expensive.
EliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderEliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderEliminarHi everyone. This is my essay about making medical decisions based on genetic testing. I hope you like it :)
ResponderEliminarNowadays, there are many genetic diseases around the world, that’s why a lot of people are dying or will die any moment. It is true that many people are not caring of their health in a correct way; fortunately there is a big and awesome solution called Genetic testing, it is a good alternative to know what is happening inside of us.
Because genetic conditions often run in families, information about your genetic makeup might be useful to other family members. If family members are aware that a genetic condition runs in the family, it might prevent them from being misdiagnosed. This information might also be of use to them when they are planning children.
Genetics testing has potential benefits whether the results are positive or negative for a gene mutation. Test results can help people make informed decisions about managing their health care. For example, a negative result can eliminate the need for unnecessary checkups and screening tests in some cases; on the other hand, a positive result can direct a person toward available prevention, monitoring, and treatment options.
In conclusion, medicine has no limits. It is important to know what is happening to everybody around the world and to break the rules in order to find out more cures against mortal diseases. Be part of this.
this is a good writing because it has controlling idea that introduces the topic, it has topic sentence that supports the topic statement..... Good job!!!!!
EliminarHello, guys..!! Ley me tell you I'm very proud of your exchange and collaborative Siri...Keep it up..:)
ResponderEliminarThank you teacher ... :) This is a good way to learn english
EliminarThank you !! :D we're improving our English skills
EliminarEste comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderEliminarHi friends... :) This is my third writing and i hope you like it.
ResponderEliminarHOME GENETIC TESTING IS THE BEST ALTERNATIVE FOR HAVING A DEFINITIVE RESULT
Nervous. Worried. Well, I'm already here. Let me tell you that I'm a student's young and in this opportunity I want to talk about a controversial topic that is a Home Genetic Testing because in the majority of the cases interpreting the results without the help of a medical professional can have a big impact in your routine life. Also the risk factors and the environment can affect your life. What’s the difference between genetic testing and results without the help of a medical professional? Do you think the results without the help of a medical professional will identify the exactly disease? Come on to find out.
First of all, from my personal perspective, I believe that home genetic testing should be much more strictly regulated because it doesn't help to patients. They feel anxious and worried about their suffering. For example a 55 year-old worker whose family had a history of cancer were deceived by a DNA sample to an internet genetic testing company and that fact elicited many issues like his job because he couldn't concentrate but he searched another alternative like going to a serious doctor and the professional was able to interpret the results and explain to him that taking the medications and a correct treatment, he could live for many more years. This is exactly why is genetic testing should be much more strictly regulated. Imagine if we had given up, we wouldn't have had more years for living happy.
Second, DNA is not only the factor affecting disease. We have to know that the environment factors play a large part in who develops a disease and who doesn't. For example, some cancers and other diseases are caused by exposure to chemicals or even to the sun because we have too much pollution in our world and that aspect likely produce negative effects in our life. But Knowledge is power and that's the reason why genetic testing is seen as infallible and definitive.
Third, we want to mention that genetic testing have more positives effects than negative effects because it has counseling and interpretation by professional who help you to understanding your real situation. In this way patients can choose the best treatment for their genetic profile and lifestyle. They can have a good option to take care their life because nowadays there is not many people who protect the life as a great value, they prefer to entertainment and set aside their health.
In conclusion, I recommend you that home genetic testing is the best option for having an exact result with interpretation and counseling by professionals because your life is very value and you have to take care about it. Please, you avoid results without the help of medical professional because it isn't true in the majority of the cases. If Kristen hadn't identified the negative impact of the false results in our life, he wouldn't have recommended you.
Guys!! Here is my essay!!!
ResponderEliminarGuess what!!! I am not a doctor. Actually, I am a university student who is really interested in Medicine threatments and have read a lot about it. Genetic testing , for instance, is a good way to know if we have any disease because it shows us our genetic risk factor.
The knowledge provided by human gene mapping gives us a powerful tool to be sure about what is happening in our body. So, with this information, we are able to make medical decisions and cure all problems.
The impact of a positive test could be devasting, but only at the beginning. You could have an specific threatment for your illness and save your life.
Finally, your health is on your hands. Genetic testing is an easy alternative to prevent many diseases. If scientist had discovered this testing before, million of people might have been alive now.
Este comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderEliminarHello;these are my graphics and my summary. https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B1J9gsuriPTbU2J5WDhoUzR3OXc
ResponderEliminarHi! This is my first writing.
ResponderEliminarIn the article extreme perception and animal intelligence by temple grand in and Catherine Johnson. They concluded that the animal intelligence is growing because of their instinct developed and this can be useful for human’s necessities.
Many animals have developed some characteristics that allow them use more than their instinct, their way to percept extreme situations. For example, there are dogs who can predict a seizure before it starts and nobody knows how they perceive signs of seizure if we can not see and feel them. One of the popular cases is Connie Standley, Who has two dogs that predict her seizure and help her to keep safe. Another example is the clever Hans, He is a well-known horse because of He can answer or solve mathematics problems like us do it but He have been responding for instinct and seeing unconscious movements, explain Dr. Dfungst.
Psychologists show us that humans delude themselves because we can't find differences between human abilities and animal instinct nevertheless animals acquired their skills without human intervention. The intelligence is a way to achieve useful skills and get goals, the specie doesn't matter.
My graphic organizer: (P.105)
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=0B9kXZCYlwDe-TVhuNlh0Wl9RX3c
hi guys this is my first graft about Extreme Perception and Animal Intelligence
ResponderEliminarNowadays people are discussing about the intelligence and abilities that animals have .It is such a controversial debate about defining animal intelligence or discovering the extreme perception that all animals have for example tHE Seizure alert dogs whose extreme perception is really high using their advanced perceptual abilities all the time to solve a problem. Seizure alert dogs whose owners assure that can predict seizures before it starts are causing controversy because some people are wondering how they could train their dogss to predict seizures like some dogs who hve figure it out on their own but the truth is that they were trained as seizure response dogs , so they can help a person once a seizure has begun .Connie standley, who says that her dogs can predict her seizures ,which is really weird . The dogs start doing things like trying to warn her , apparently her dogs were trained before she had been her owner .Another curious case is about clever hans the famous german horse that could count according his owner ,Wilhelm Van Osten he could solve mathematical questions by moving his hoof.The psychologist Oskar Pfungust showed that Hans was not counting.They were only unconscious movements .Finally Pfungust clarified the case of Clever Hans but he takes him as an example to explain people , who think animals are intelligent but the curious part is that no one has ever been able to train a horse to do what hans did.T HE TRUTH IS THAT BOTH ANIMALS AS THE ALERT SEIZURE DOGS AND CLEVERNESS AND BOTH ACQUIRED THEIR SKILLS BY THEIR OWN.
I KNOW IS TOO LONG BUT IS THE FIRST GRAFT
Hi Fabiana, your first draft is so good because it includes the thesis statement, answers some of the Wh- questions and the most important thing is that you do it with your own words. Congratulations... I really like it.
EliminarHi Teacher and classmates!! This is my first draft about Extreme Perception and Animal Intelligence by Temple Grand and Catherine Johnson.
ResponderEliminarMany animals have extreme perception. For example: Forensic dogs. They can smell things and act like a X-ray machine at shiffing out contraband drugs or explosives. But some dogs have invented their advanced perceptual abilities, like a cognition, which solves a problem under novel conditions. For example, Seizure alert dogs that can predict a seizure before it starts. The dog is trained to lie on top of the person, help, bring the person his medicine or cellphone. These dogs are trained to perform. That is a controversy. The Neww York Times published a terrific article about a woman named Connie, who has three kind of dogs. He says that her dogs predicted about 80 percent of seizures. They are in other category. Aparently, there are a lot of examples of animals with ablities. Horse that can count numbers-for instance. These kinds of signs are a high intelligence. Using intelligence and cognitive skills help us to achieve useful and remarkable goals.
Thank you!!!! :)
Hi Arnaldo, your first writing is very good because it includes the author's name and the tittle of the reading and also because it is a little short but with a good summary..... I like it
EliminarMY FIRST WRITING.
ResponderEliminarMany animals have different kind of abilities for example forensic dog have extreme perception and work like an x-ray machine, other example is seizure alert dogs that use abilities to solve problems. The case of Connie Stand, it’s a good example about the abilities of this kind of dogs, her seizure alert dogs can predict her seizures. Other case is Cleven Hans, which was the world famous German horse that could count, but a psychologist discover that Hans didn’t count and only it was able to detect and understands human signs. Finally, dogs and horse demonstrate that animals have the ability to acquired their skills without human help. Maybe both cases are questionable but they did what many people believe is impossible to do as they understand the things in their environment to a point that they can have right answers.
Hi! This is my first writing.
ResponderEliminarIn extreme perception and animal intelligence by Temple Grandin and Catherine Johnson talk about many animals have extreme perception and they can help us detecting drugs, contraband or explosives. However, having extreme perception does not make you intelligent. There have been invented some jobs for dogs such as seizure alert dogs and seizure respond dogs. The first one, Dogs can predict a seizure before it starts, but people do not know how they can train a dog to predict it. There was a story from Connie Standley. She has two dogs who can predict her seizure thirty minutes before. The second, Dogs can help a person once a seizure has begun. There was other story about Clever Hans. It was a famous horse from Germany in 1900s. His owner thought his horse could count. However, Oskar Pfungst, who is a psychologist, found the answer about Clever Hans, “Hans could answer questions only when the person asking the question was in plain view and already knew the answer.” He uses Clever Hans´s story to show the animals are not intelligent. Intelligence is related to persons who use their cognitive abilities to achieve remarkable goals.
It is a fabulous writing because i consider it has a good structure but it lacks the title.
EliminarHi friends adn teacher......I want to share you my first draft
ResponderEliminarEXTREME PERCEPTION AND ANIMAL INTELLIGENCE
By Temple Grandin and Catherine Johnson
Nowadays, animals intelligence are a controversial topic because one part don't believe that animals are intelligent and the other part sustain that animals act only by instinct. It is obviously that their extreme perception is amazing for us because they can smell, see, hear or feel something that people can not do. the seizure alert dogs are an example of animals using advanced perceptual abilities to solve a problem. Another example is Clever Hans, an famous horse, who his owner thought that he could count but it didn't true because Hans didn't really counting. Instead, Hans was observing subtle, unconscious cues the humans had no idea they were giving off. Psychologists often use the Clever Hans story to show that humans who believe animals are intelligent are deluding themselves because intelligence is people using their built-in perceptual and cognitive skills and abilities to achieve useful and sometimes remarkable goals.
Very well summarized friend :D i loved it
EliminarHi ! This is my first writing.
ResponderEliminarAccording to the article, there are animals have extreme perception like a forensic dog because they are so good at sniffing drugs. Eventhough, all of the dogs have this ability, there are others who can solve a problem no matter the conditions and nobody knows how they do that. There was a case of a horse who could count but a psychologist demostrated that it was not true. He showed that the horse could answer because the animal could read unconscious signs of the owner. Although, the psychologist showed that, nobody explain how the horse could understand human behaviors. So,those examples demostrate how the animals show their intelligence in different ways.
It's a good job. I like your summary
EliminarHi teacher and classmates, here is my first writing, I hope you enjoy it.
ResponderEliminarThe article Extreme Perception and Animal Intelligence by Temple Gardin and Catherine Johnson is about the skills or abilities of animals to understand the ability to percept and how intelligence they are. I mean for example a dog can not count, but it is able to detect and understand human signs. Those dogs are fabulous in what they do, we also can say that they work better than a x.ray machine. Dogs are too smart, so they can adapt their skills in any situation . Humans can not perceive a seizure, however dogs are able to predict it. Before a seizure doogs show signs to human (it is their way to say a seizure will occur), to be prepare for this. Animals like human are intelligence, but only some of them have a superior intelligence.
i love that you used your own words to explain the topic :)
EliminarHi teacher and classmates, this is my first writing. I hope to like them.
ResponderEliminarExtreme Perception and Animal Intelligence by Temple Grandin and Catherine Johnson
In the world , how can the humans can find the viable way to discern the animal intelligence and extreme perception ?, there are special animals as forensic dogs that can detect drugs or explosives so they have developed an extreme perception. Besides, Some of dogs as the case of seizure alert dogs that have better perceptual habilities than humans when they can anticipate a seizure before it happens. For instance, Ms. Standley who has two huge dogs that saved her of many seizures. It is weird because she didn´t know how the dogs can predict and respond to seizures. There is also another case in Germany, it is a famous horse whose name is Hans. According to Dr. Pfungst it could not show intelligence because he only repeated unconscious cues the humans did it when he seemed to figure out any mathematical problem but it was not possible. In conclusion, the humans can not difference what kind of actions the seizure alert dogs or Hans could take them to show a sign whether it was an extreme perception or intelligence. It is not possible to compare intelligence between humans and animals using same methods in perceptual and cognitive skills.
Yes , i agree with you because intelligence belongs to humans and instinct belongs to animals.
EliminarHi!! guys..this is my first writing
ResponderEliminarEXTREME PERCEPTION AND ANIMAL INTELLIGENCE BY TEMPLE GRANDIN AND CATHERINE JOHNSON
A lot of animals have extreme perception. Seizure alert dogs are a good example of an animal using advanced perceptual abilities to solve a problem. Seizure alert dogs are amazing because they can prevent and predict a seizure before it happens. Nobody knows how they do this, because this kind of sign is not perceived by people. The next example that the authors mentioned is about Clever Hans that was the world famous German horse in the early 1900s. Wilhelm von Osten who is Clever's owner thought he could count because Clever would tap out the number with his hoof in order to answer some mathematical problems. Although a phycologist showed that Clever could answer the question only when people who ask was in plain view and already knew the answer, it was due that he noticed clues that humans unconsciously gave him.
What makes those examples very similar is that they did things that aren't attributed to them. Furthermore, the facts that any of them needed humans helps to acquire their talents and then decide to do something about it shows a sing of high intelligence.
I enjoy reading your first writing because it's a good summary.
EliminarHi guys, I want to share my first organizer. I hope you like it....
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzfIZ_4OottPTl9mNWZlaVR6bkU/view?usp=sharing
Hi friends and teacher. This is my second organizer :
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzfIZ_4OottPRTdLalgtdVU4MW8/view?usp=sharing ...... I hope you like it.
Hi classmates and teacher... I share you my thirst organizer about Reading 1 (R1) "DEATH DO US PART" and Reading 2 "TOWARD IMMORTALITY: THE SOCIAL BURDEN OF LONGER LIVES"
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzfIZ_4OottPMjh0Wks1ektORlk/view?usp=sharing
Hello Teacher, this is my first graph organizer:
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=0B4QPQluI8IkPUzdqRzlJZFZRUVU
Hello Teacher, this is my second graph organizer!!!
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=0B4QPQluI8IkPWUlhSl9FNUN2Qnc
Hello teacher, this is my third graph organizer!!!
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=0B4QPQluI8IkPcDJEcThIN3NIWUU
Hi everybody! This is my second graphic organizer.(P.138)
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=0B9kXZCYlwDe-Q1NBdGJ2Zzgtck0
MY GRAPHIC ORGANIZER (P.138)
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0B84nOjSWImLJMnAzTUxneDRMYzA/view?usp=sharing
Este comentario ha sido eliminado por un administrador del blog.
ResponderEliminarDear guys.., I’m following the blog exchange as you know.., but I can notice there are a couple of students who are still missing from the blog....Could we kind of talk them into? It’s good fun..!! I’m around evaluating your performance..:)
ResponderEliminarhello guys, this is my first graphic
ResponderEliminarhttps://es.scribd.com/document/361677799/Graphic
Well done my friend! :D
Eliminarhello guys, this is my writing
ResponderEliminarIn Extreme perception and animal intelligence, authors Temple Grandin and Catherine Johnson, there are a lot of animals that have extreme preception to develop special abilities, for example, forensic dogs that can find contraband,drugs, and explosives. Dogs have a better sense of smell than a human, but it don't became them a genius. Forensic dogs can predict a seizure. One case was published, it was about a woman who has 2 dogs, they start doing things like bark at her or pull on her clothes before a seizure happens. Other case is about Clever Hans. The horse, whose owner thought he can count, but then the scientists discover that he really doesn't count so they use this story to show humans to not believe in animals with abilities.
your writing is good, a couple of words are mistaken but after that it's fine ;)
EliminarHi classmates and teacher. This is the link of my essay where you can see it.
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzfIZ_4OottPVW9INjZqUmliN1E/view?usp=sharing
I hope you like it. :)
Este comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderEliminar