domingo, 14 de octubre de 2018

ARW1-3.: ARW1-3Hello guys...!! Welcome to our Blog on Readi...

ARW1-3.: ARW1-3Hello guys...!! Welcome to our Blog on Readi...: ARW1-3 Hello guys...!! Welcome to our Blog on  Reading and Writing 1-3 . On this blog we will work on different activities from the course...

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  1. Hi guys, this is our classblog. We'll be able to be in touch anytime anyday to exchange ideas, have a nice chat or updates on our course, have fun and the like...., all in English, isn't it wonderful?

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  2. As for the first assignment, why don't you exchange points of view on your Final draft of the second writing....,ask your partners about doubts on Grammar, spelling, connectors, etc. Make friends, abd don't feel embarrassed or shy...Everybody can make mistakes, and we learn from them...I'll just witness...your exchange, your work, your progress... Good work!

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  3. Hello..!! And.... your writing...?? Can we see it on this blog, please..??

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    1. Class, where are you..?? Are you shy..?? Remember I’ll take your participación into account since you’ll be reading and writing outside the classroom (doing extra work..!! 😎

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  5. I do not understand well the instructions. What writing should it be? The first draft or the second one? Somebody help me, please.

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  6. Nicole,you have tu send your second draft and our classmates are going to help you if you have some mistakes or doubs.

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  7. Good evening!
    I undertood, that it would be the second

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  8. Hi teacher, here's my writing:
    https://drive.google.com/file/d/122U6le9vY46JSBv2XEz6R-ut3jfEhExN/view?usp=sharing

    Thanks.

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  9. Ok Pipa...Good!!! Now..., your classmates will check it..., and help you enhance it..!! 👍🏻

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  10. Good morning :) Here´s my writing: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1r8JI3rveHkcxfQpIHggnFfwL8_Mc3VzUh-WW3xsZNV0/edit

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    1. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1r8JI3rveHkcxfQpIHggnFfwL8_Mc3VzUh-WW3xsZNV0/edit?usp=sharing

      For editing...

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  11. Good morning everybody!
    Pipa,I was reading your writing and you made some mistakes; here are some corrections from it:
    1.persuade you
    2.the same episode
    3.what career(or major) I should study
    4.started searching
    5.my life will depend on what career I study
    6.I talked to my parents
    7.I hated math and loved journalism
    I think these are the mistakes you have made. I hope it helps you 😊.

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  12. Excellent participation Nicole...!!! 👌🏻

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  13. Hello everyone, this is my writing:

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pj-Acc6ZjrrN_Pkzy0iGTmXMTPLHE4hhi87ZXxCBD2Q/edit?usp=sharing

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    1. Hi, Andy Luo. I have just read your writing and found mistakes. The corrections are with capital letters:
      -have faceD
      -wantED to study
      -that I MADE
      -wantED to study ... Line 4
      -I COULD study
      -the problem WAS
      - I talkED to
      -they acceptED
      -GIVE up
      You have to be care of the tenses!

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  14. Hello classmates, this is my writing and I would appreciate if you help me to correct my mistakes to improve it. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cxwsPz3lu0MUcq9VlQ8vKtnfdc3S8IlN0oDGwiFBg14/edit?usp=drivesdk

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  15. Great activity, guys..!! I’m really proud of you...Keep up the good work...💪🏻

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    1. Thanks a lot, teacher. This blog will be very useful for everybody. We needed it for practicing out the classroom.

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  16. Thank you, Miss. I think this is gonna be a good resource in order to learn more.

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  18. Good evening classmates! Here's my writing. It would be great if you check it. Please, tell me if I have mistakes.
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WxIhei3JPZoGtsr4Tw6y2vlleL7TsszDkbK8-5YtGt4/edit?usp=drivesdk

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  19. Hi everyone. Here's my Writing, I hope you will help me to correct and improve it if I have some Grammar o Spelling mistakes. https://docs.google.com/document/d/15ByGjARVKSv3ryOlx1KXci43_Vf68wQKTasUWCvVJ9I/edit?usp=drivesdk

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    1. Hi Maricielo! I read your writing and I found some mistakes from it. I'll show what they are:
      1. I think you should say: There are many causes that contributed to the problems she... Instead of saying that she had many children.
      2.First, my grandmother had to...
      3.often hit her
      4.because the lives of women were like that in the past, they had to bear their husbands' abuses.
      5.to give her children a better life and wouldn't suffer...
      6.too many people
      7.common children
      8.had to be stronger
      9.knew how to bring her children up and overcome the problems...
      I think these are your mistakes, Mari. I hope it help you😊.

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    2. Thank you, Nicole. Your corrections were very useful to me to do my writing. c:

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  23. Hi guys this is my writing, please check it and help me,thankss.
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BhVGH1iv55-26Lkr6TtOHcYO0lOyPN-9o3dyjje3rU4/edit

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  24. Hi classmates,Can you correct my writing?please
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1V1xJl1hvVZyLdQQoidUs3w3mD8o0PzClHtYBN1jbSS0/edit?usp=sharing

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  26. Hello classmates, I'm sending my writing. Maybe someone could give me some advices or just take my writing as a example.
    https://drive.google.com/file/d/19BsJyjqnkyDDJmxmgBghoteSyvUtthHF/view?usp=sharing

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  27. Good afternoon, this is my writing https://docs.google.com/document/d/17hd5ho5eklgoKwoNUIp-wnIK2n2zFnzMYH5jHErV-oY/edit?usp=sharing

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  28. Good afternoon teacher. this is my draft. Although tomorrow I wait to improve it. Thanks
    https://drive.google.com/drive/recent?ogsrc=32

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  29. Can someone tell me what the portfolio has to contain? I guess I'm forgetting something.

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    1. Hi Renato, the portfolio has to contain:
      -writting 1 (draft)
      -writting 1 (final)
      -writting 2 (draft)
      -writting 2 (final)
      -Venn diagrams
      -Vocal logs (pag18)
      -pg 16,18,30,49

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    2. Thanks for the answer, I forgot the Venn diagrams.

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    3. veen diagrams is only one (pag16)? or pag 76 too?

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    4. yes we had to put both of them

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    5. yes we had to put both of them

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  30. Respuestas
    1. Is there anything important for todas??? Of course there is...!!! Our class..!!��

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  31. Good afternoo friendo its something important for. Today?

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  32. My comment is above Christian...👌🏻

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  33. Hi, this is my reading. If someone checked and corrected it, it would help to my learning:

    Overal, what I realized about how genetic testing is that it brings adverse effects. The testimonies emphasize that.

    Home genetic testing is not regulated. There¨s a case, for instance, when a 55 year-old person whose family had a history of cancer submitted a DNA sample to an Internet genetic testing company.

    The results of genetic testing are seen as infallible and definitive what is not truth. Genetic testing is in its infancy, and even experts, as doctors or researchers, don´t fully understand the interaction between diferent genes.

    Home genetic testing must be regulated, and includes counseling and interpreting by professionals. Furthermore, its results must not be taken as truth.

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  34. Do we have to include the draft that we write today in the portfolio? thanks

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  35. Hi guys this is my writing, please check it and help me,thankss.
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/106o_UNdk7Sk33ZjrYTsfsz80R-yteLmo34vex0F5mFI/edit?usp=sharing

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  36. hi guys...in this course I learned to differenciate things,for examples, in the venn diagram, I wrote about importants information.Also I learned new words,such as Nouns, Verbs, Adjectives and Adverbs...thanks.
    Maria Esther,Alarcon Morales.

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  37. Hi guys this is my writing, please check it and help me,thankss.
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Jcxg2gguEkU-wUXxIZQhJfyxom5Oai-bgQY4A1AXw-k/edit?hl=es

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  38. Good afternoon guys! I regret not having written before, but as the saying goes "Better late than never" xd I also write because I want to secure my extra point, I think I did not do well in the exam :(, I thought that more Vocabulary would come but it was not like that. I wish good luck in your final grade, see you in the classroom!

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  39. Hi guys this is my writing, if someone checked and corrected it, it would help to my learning.

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZU6GYAHfFHn9nxiJC_8_1b6Qp0Vv4wFXj7FIMO9PobM/edit?usp=sharing

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    1. It is generally fine, but it would be better if there was a separation between the introduction and the body of the writing

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  40. Hello people, this is my work, please review it and give me your opinions :)
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-C5A_U3w4x7IyszIo5AWgiG0IdCpfwP4rnmwQGHg91w/edit?usp=sharing

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  41. Hello, this is my writing maybe could help someone.
    https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Tvi6fRVeZOmn3O0LQI4nXB8UdsC61vWI/view?usp=sharing

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  42. Hello guys. Here's my writting, correct me if I have some mistakes and give me more ideas to improve it. C: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gG6KawedrRyP0TjL96fGNul2JByhq9Z-Q5aq8G7YkAs/edit?usp=drivesdk

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    1. Hi Maricielo! I was reading your writing and I've found some mistakes,here they are:
      1. It's doubts not doubs
      2. They only use their ...
      3. How can we know what intelligence is for them
      4. So that they are smarter than the rest
      5. I think you should say "the case if Clever Hans that was thought to solve..." because it's an animal and not a person.
      6. A psychologist made an investigation that or where showed Clever wasn't counting...
      7. But he only perceived signs people sent unconsciously
      8. We are not going to know how animal intelligence is if we...
      These are some mistakes I found. I hope it helps you, blessings :).

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  43. Hello. This is my writing. If someone wants give me feedback, it would be a great favor to me
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vixuc4OdNN5G23MJ9F0KOzMoh0OxcwOn0uAmu7tyN34/edit?usp=sharing

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  44. Hi guys, It's my writting :) https://docs.google.com/document/d/178K_UgXKTuT5wGQv97_DjjMbl02ydpHH--8PKRDewM4/edit

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    1. Hi darling! I like it your writing and I give you some advice! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1P7p98xl9OTIi8tYMOCOXLlr6GC_bC771IZKQv764uOc/edit

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  45. Good afternoon guys! How are you? This is my writing, I hope you can review it and give me your opinions and suggestions. Everything is welcome! Enjoy the rest of the day :)
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1umtYFgeJCfvAOfFfMXNIm3I7xaWzp4AGELKS6r5v6vU/edit

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  46. Hi guys, I need your help... Our teacher said that We should have 4 charts in the portfolio, I have only written down 3 charts which are on page 105,109 and 162... Can someone tell me what is the fourth, please?

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    1. I missed classes on Tuesday, but on Wednesday they told me that the table on pages 140-141 is also for the portfolio.

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    2. Oh, thank you so much,Freddy!

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  47. Good Sunday! This is my second writing about life in future, I hope you can give me your observations. Thanks :D

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_XizJbFz9UVjBJxpOi4ZadzcuDTeNt6k0Jd2gy99O3U/edit?usp=sharing

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  48. Hi Guys, here is my second draft.
    I hope you will check it and tell me if I have mistakes, so I will correct and improve it. Thanks c:
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bWOuf-igN05fXDsAerX0wxesMqD5yYisBhhwwP0gKyY/edit?usp=drivesdk

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    1. Hi Maricielo, I read your writing and I have some advices: Yo can change gaining for getting and the second, phase for stage when you mean a part of life. That´s all, I liked your conclusion, the message is so interesting!

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    2. Thank you, Norka. I also was thinking about it, I was going to write "Getting" but I didn't want to use too much that word. I'm really thankful for your advices.

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  49. Hi classmates, this is my writing about "MY LIFE IN 2175"
    Let me know if I have some mistakes. Thanks!
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hYmkXfnUB_x807onynrMQNijt2xzMy-OK6voc0ari98/edit

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  51. Hello, guys. This is my 2nd writing. I hope someone check it and tell me if I have mistakes to improve it... Thanks. https://docs.google.com/document/d/10Mm0OrEMcSgMrccXjDzdXbIEMmTbQ70vBrp_2vn1ZCA/edit?usp=sharing

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  52. Hello guys this is my second writing and I open to your suggestions to improve my writing.
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/17EBpEG9tBe3xqOH3ikEnQ4tCeEhuj5mdrSkexr40hnc/edit

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  53. Good evening everyone, I'm sending my second writing my second writing. I hope it helps someone to have some ideas.
    https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NBQ7R0EjOVoHfeX2DJZcdSc577aBrTuL/view?usp=sharing

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  54. Hi, to everybody. Here is my second writing. I hope it would be useful and I'll be thankful if you geve me feedback

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1h3_Fd1MnSJkAJbr5Brvq_TgMenCyS0Sy_ojJdoIMCns/edit?usp=sharing

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  55. Hi guys, sorry for the delay but I had some problems in the last days. Here is my writing.
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/19cxHdMXRKnzwa89pRbJtaIswt1r-83VhaBTlrv8Z2kA/edit

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  56. Hi guys.Only for remember, The teacher said that from Alarcón to Paucar will have the interview tomorrow. :)

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  57. Hi classmates. I don't know what are the pages where are the charts that we have to copy to the portfolio. Can someone tell me? Please.

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    1. The pages are 105, 109, 162 and 140-141,5 charts in total.

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  58. Hello classmates, in the portfolio you must also include the charts on page 168 of the book

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  59. Hello, I found a video that is a example of the oral exam, I think it can help a lot to be ready for this exam.
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tbp8VnD--w8&t=167s

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    1. Oh, thanks for the video, it hepls me to know how is the exam.

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  60. Hello, this is the last writing! Thanks for your suggestions.

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sKmW2Y1YorloM0Ghy5FcooX5aaDlpHB-azNYWVaAOYY/edit?usp=sharing

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  61. Good afternoon guys, Today I'm going to present my final draft, I hope you correct me.
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W9X1rhLv7CnM3qnyh-waZlZDrbvouZ3_BEQdp8GuzSU/edit

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  62. WORK AS A VOLUNTEER
    You wouldnt work , you enjoy !! Some schools in Peru and others countries work as a volunteer is a main required to gratuated . It should be promoted by the goverment in Peru.

    Works as a volunteer is helpful, because it can help to many students , This students will became to be a responsables and disciplinated , it can change their life , for examples : this students get up earlier than before , they have a responsables schedules and they dont spend time in bad things for examples : in drugs , robs , and delinquenses .Also , it make yourself known in the comunity, many students could become famous, it can help to promote in social media such as Facebook, Twitter, Instagran and including WhatsApp. Also they can learn many things for instance, they can learn to build new houses and help to poor people and they takecare animal and plants , maybe in the future they became a veterinarians or biologist.
    To concluded that it an excellent idea that students work as a volunteer , it can promote that many students think in good things and they became a good proffessional.


    Maria Esther Alarcòn Morales


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  63. Hello classmates, this is my draft
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FPVXhikxrfTm04dYqtgbUnrIXWEAE7XvlQ0wgXThDI4/edit?usp=drivesdk

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    1. I didn't have time to finish my third writing so I already read yours and it was really good.

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  64. Good night, guys! This is my writing...
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1swfGlwm-yZF5rTAUj_xydcz46P3gFJcKHCdrD-wJVqY/edit?usp=sharing

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  65. Hey, guys.., how about your long weekend?? Tomorrow we’ll have our Midterm exam...Today’s the first Reading Quiz

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  66. Good morning everyone, I'm sorry to didn't upload my first writing but better late than never. Maybe it could be useful for someone.
    https://drive.google.com/open?id=19mPrqjDVpAlkuBOKJA0ifJbnzsZ4RKz9

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  67. Hello, Today I had a problem at university so I want to know what pages teacher did in class.

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  68. Hi classmates, this is my writing about "High school vs College"
    Let me know if I have some mistakes. Thanks!

    High school vs College

    When I was a child, my parents always said to me that ¨Education nowadays is changing because most of the teachers now adjust the method to be a more easy study for students. There is an issue about the High school vs The University comparing and contrast their similarities and differences.
    First of all, the location was crucial for my parents to decided where did I am going to study. When I was 12 years old, the school was near to my house It means that it was in the same district and I remember too that I used a uniform because it was a general rule when I was there at school While I went to college the location was not near to my district, it was in another sector of district, I also remember that I went with a casual clothes because in college is not necessary to go with uniform.
    Second, in high school, my classes were face to face so I can exchange ideas with my partners, I also use books for reading and learn new issues in the same way in college classes are the same in methods to learn as in high school. The schedule in high school it was regular because I have had taken classes in the morning, in the afternoon and sometimes at night similarly, in college I had a diversity schedule, so I love it, because it gives me a time to relax and prepare for next class.
    In short, there are similarities and differences that have in common, the high school and the college are institutions that used different methods of learning for students. My experiences in high school and in college were fine because when I attended there it was significant for me so I get knowledge as experience.




    CLAUDIA, YUYALI YARLEQUE


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  71. Good evening, guys. Here's my writting, correct me if I have some mistakes, please. Thanks! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iT9X7LWcPexYYDBWpFFf4Ew73YBxcE6zbH9KEp7sCa0/edit?usp=sharing

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    1. Hi Norka! I've just read your writing and I found some mistakes about it. Here they are:
      1. In people's lifestyles
      2. Studies say that
      3. In the mind
      4. whims have been attended immediately
      5. Another cause is low self-esteem which is often at the base of many human sufferings.
      6.it's common that the person start to lie, because may be spending more time that their parents said
      7.a way to entertain and be relax
      I hope these few corrections help you!

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