ARW1-3
Hello guys...!! Welcome to our Blog on Reading and Writing 1-3.
On this blog we will work on different activities from the coursebook, and exchange ideas, while doing so-, in groups. Thus, this is our space to enjoy working collaboratively on the different tasks we will be assigned to work on all through our 3 months together.
I hope you will enjoy the new experience that will take you one step ahead in Reading and Writing, while getting into the latest of the world of technology, as well.
The first assignment will be to upload your Venn diagram onto this blog by Fri, 12th. You will have access to your friends' and will comment, get ideas from them, analyze and give your feedback to them about their work.
Hi teacher! I have a question. I don't know how can i upload the work but i found your email so, i send you my Venn diagram by email.
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ResponderEliminarHi miss! Here's my Venn diagram:
ResponderEliminarhttps://goo.gl/xVter2
Excelent work, Alex..! Keep up the good job...! :)
EliminarHi teacher and guys, I hope to learn from everyone :D
ResponderEliminarIndeed, Luis..! You'll enjoy this course...!! :)
EliminarHi guys, i´m very happy about this class beacuse i like to read in any languages. So here is my first work: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B8GZBA9U2tKxSDlVaFctandnbjA
ResponderEliminarWell done..! :)
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ResponderEliminarHi teacher, hi guys! I know I'll enjoy this course and all of us will get fun.
ResponderEliminarHere's my diagram:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xzhUSh0kABxXOdsLLRrZiz0KHzZ2w-Ov5HfeIJBy80w/edit
I'm proud of you...! :)
EliminarHi Teacher, here's my venn diagram
ResponderEliminarcheck it Please :D
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-M9M7KifNMwOThIMjNHRUdFRTg/view?usp=sharing
Keep up the good work...!! :)
EliminarHi miss and guys, I'm enjoying this class! Here's my Venn diagram: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B7VEEFGVtfIlZGRhR3RzaTZldms/view?usp=sharing
ResponderEliminarPerfect..!! :)
EliminarGood night, teacher. I want to leave you my first and second writing.
EliminarThank you for offering us this medium, is very comfortable to work in this way. https://1drv.ms/w/s!AknhR3d06Xw8gTATNwrTd2BIcRGw
Hi Teacher, here's my venn diagram:
ResponderEliminarhttps://1drv.ms/w/s!AknhR3d06Xw8gSqTDzSVE6tXUbeY
Good job...!! :)
EliminarI would also like to leave you the practice of writing about FRANK MCCOURT AND MARLA RUNWAY.https://1drv.ms/w/s!AknhR3d06Xw8gUYR0-pGbjmm2ri_
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ResponderEliminarHi teacher,this is my venn diagram :3
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1MbBRWqufGHk6JmceRS07swSyD9n47S_uUfd62LIC0mo/edit?usp=sharing
Great..!! :)
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ResponderEliminarHello teacher , I know that I learn more with this kind of technology.Here is my Venn Diagfam.
ResponderEliminarhttps://www.dropbox.com/s/qqtbz59xduvr3tv/Documento%20%284%29.docx?dl=0
Janela Becerra Santos
Good, Janela...!! :)
EliminarHi all, This is my Venn Diagram.
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2jaQA8bM9L_RnlzM21odU9Yelk/view
Great..!! :)
EliminarHello Miss and guys, it's an interesting way to learn English :)
ResponderEliminarHere's my Venn diagram:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BwdI-lIIkqVzQ3dJUnBxZFFhVDQ/view?usp=sharing
Perfect..!! :)
EliminarHi teacher and everyone! This is my Venn diagram:
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=0B3QtHkGyvfHudkpjX2pCemI0M2c
Excelent..!! :)
EliminarHi teaher and classmates. Here is my Ven Diagram
ResponderEliminarhttps://www.dropbox.com/s/112d2ebifl4sjuk/VENNDIAGRAM-ARW1.docx?dl=0
Good job..!! :)
EliminarHi , teacher here is muy final writing :)
ResponderEliminarhttps://www.dropbox.com/s/zh3oisaztraxmle/Documento%20%281%29.docx?dl=0
There are serious mistakes in this piece of writing, I left a message for you...:)
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ResponderEliminarHI MISS AND GUYS!!
ResponderEliminarTHIS IS MY VENN DIAGRAM
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B91PaefYK9DUc0htNzZsazlydWs/view
Excellent, Liz.. :)
EliminarHi miss, I'm Grethel Ortiz
ResponderEliminarthis is my ven diagram
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BymUyxP_okWabmZtTldCSE9Idm8/view?usp=sharing
this is my writing, I made a mistake :(
EliminarDear Grethel, I liked your writing very much...It has some mistakes,though... I would like your classmates to help you correct them, so I'm going to ask them to do so, ok? :)
EliminarClass, would you please help in the correction of the paragrapgh above? Let's interact in this blogspot, shall we? It's a new, exciting and updated way of going on with the learning process out of the classroom premises.. :))
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ResponderEliminarHi miss, I made a mistake in my first link it's my first writting and here is my Venn Diagram
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0BymUyxP_okWaTGVsVTRVbmxPcWM/view?usp=sharing
Excellent Grethel....!! I'm very proud of you..!! :)
EliminarHello miss, here's my Venn Diagram
ResponderEliminarName: Yessenia Sanchez
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BxvVl5ZCxVPHZGdZay1HTUlmMUk/view?usp=sharing
Good job..!! :)
EliminarHi! ^-^/
ResponderEliminarVenn diagram --> https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B4Um7BSN-eAiZGFDVHJqcEM1dzg/view?usp=sharing
Perfect, Ninfa..:)
EliminarHi everyone, Here is my Ven Diagram https://drive.google.com/drive/my-drive
ResponderEliminarDeear Medaly, you've made a mistake... This is not your work link... It's my Googledrive... :( Please RE-check your address...and upload your work properly, please.
EliminarI'm sorry miss, Here Isend you again my job. Please check it , first writting . tahnks https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B3dnr1OfJbfEMklrdlNRN2ZYVVk/view?usp=sharing
EliminarHere is my Venn Diagram too, I hope your answer https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B3dnr1OfJbfESUc2SjB5anRTQ0k/view?usp=sharing
EliminarWell done as for both pieces of work, Medaly..!
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ResponderEliminarSee above, please.
EliminarHi miss, here are my writings
ResponderEliminarPlease check it
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-M9M7KifNMwbmlaRkZfVTJwVDZqTVBoV3NkSzAtQi1RNS1n/view?usp=sharing
Dear Maicol, I've just done so...and discovered some mistakes.., I'm going to ask your friends to help correct them, so that everybody benefits from that... :)
EliminarOn Monday they should tell me abbbbbout them and, of course herein, as well.
Class, would you please check this out and correct the mistakes...Remember we learn through making mistakes.. :)
EliminarTeacher, here's my other Diagram about Genius :D
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-M9M7KifNMwNm5QTjZsUmZzR2NxWHNzdGtCdnRlS2tSNW5Z/view?usp=sharing
It´s wonderful...! However, there are a couple of mistakes I'd like you to correct yourself and tell me about it on Monday, ok? :)
EliminarHi teacher! here is my work.
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-pDkO42ilK8MG1IbWtUX3Jmcnc
Lovely..! :)
EliminarHi miss, here is my first writing.
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/13PMPvEMZ1fXGhuJ7iTK4v5jnAX-AirMYJbxbUK-LBrw/edit?usp=sharing
It's very good. There are two or so mistakes...Can you spot them, and tell me about them, please? :)
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ResponderEliminarHi Miss, here is my venn diagram.
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1AplKOsoFTRRU_-bxnbKS1eeXBxmEWbku4MroDro9Jms/edit?usp=sharing
Well done..! :)
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ResponderEliminar1 Hi Teacher, here's my Venn diagram
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1cCkq0tz_Bff9G-4h2DercCClMNgPf0ze7_0vSSu00jg/edit
Lovely..!! :)
EliminarHi teacher, here is my first writing.
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1n-BfIMBuZHCS3cIA8XJRkNI2EizgvHQmxKbK3ZtSiNE/edit
Very good...but check out for punctuation, please... Tell me about it herein, ok? :)
EliminarMs Vargas please check it :)
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1Twvk3qIky0K6j0MOYxQVe1FmOWLoZP580VQDPp0HDhY/edit?usp=sharing
Good job..! :)
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ResponderEliminarHi teacher, here's my writing: Summary Paragraph.
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/19gvKBqxe7EWqsSoi4nr4JbsYnZrhinJI6TpQpmsGx9A/edit#heading=h.gjdgxs
Good; however, you need to correct some few mistakes...Maybe you can get your friends to help you do so. And thbere's also a typo.. :)
EliminarGood night miss!!
ResponderEliminarHere's my writing. check it, please.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B91PaefYK9DUZ0tQV3BybWxQMFk/view
this is my venn diagram. I'm uploading my Venn Diagram again because I think it can't be seen.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B91PaefYK9DUc0htNzZsazlydWs/view
Dear Liz, you mistook the address (link). Please, resend the correct one. As for your Venn diagram, I couldn't access it for I need a Drive permit, so please, again REcheck all that, will you?
EliminarMiss, here send my venn Diagram and first writing again.
EliminarPlease, check it. Thanks.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B91PaefYK9DUZ0tQV3BybWxQMFk/view?usp=drivesdk
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B91PaefYK9DUc0htNzZsazlydWs/view?usp=drivesdk
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ResponderEliminarHello miss! Here's my final writing!
ResponderEliminarhttps://goo.gl/6woUQO
Very Good job. I spotted only one mistake, can you find it, and let me know about it? :)
EliminarHi teacher, here's my first writing.
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0B7VEEFGVtfIlNndVb29TX0ExZUE/view?usp=sharing
Very good..! There are a couple of mistakes both in Grammar and in Spelling.. Can you find them and let me know about it? :)
EliminarWhat about your Venn diagram? :s
EliminarHello Teacher, Here's my final writing :D
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2jaQA8bM9L_MFRSTS11bm9ZQk0/view
Well done, though you need to correct a few mistakes. Please do so, and let me know about it, ok? :)
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ResponderEliminarHello everybody, here is my final writing :) https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B8GZBA9U2tKxUEIxZ1RvZWpja00
ResponderEliminarPd: Miss, I want you to recommend me a book to read, according to our level :)
Josué, it's good.....though, there are acouple of Grammar mistakes, and a big one , which is a FRagment..., please correct them with your classmates' help, will you?
EliminarClass, bearing in mind, once again that we learn through making mistakes..., why don't you help in the correction of the paragraph above, will you? :)
EliminarHi Miss, tomorrow i will taake my writing from my portfolio to ask for the correction :)
EliminarMy final writing :)
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=0B4Um7BSN-eAiU2Rpd2dHN2JVVmM
Good job, Ninfa..However there are about five mistakes.., can you find and correct them, please? :)
Eliminarhttps://drive.google.com/drive/u/0/my-drive
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/drive/u/0/my-drive
V.D & First writing
Dear Madeline, you have copied the class Google drive. Please, chack that out, and send your work... :)
EliminarHi teacher and guys, here is my First Writing :)
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8syjslPRBcFSGNRUnlJUlYxbGc/view?usp=drivesdk
Dear Jean, your job is very good..,but we need to correct some few mistakes. Please, do so, and resend your work. :)
EliminarDear class, I've just finished correcting and checking your work. Let me tell you I'm happy and satisfied with your performance, and would be delighted to see your comments about anything related to our work together. Remember, we learn through making mistakes that our peers help us notice. That's why working in this close interaction (colaborative work) will contribute to our being better students and people. We´re in touch.. :)
ResponderEliminarOne last thing,.... one of you is asking me to suggest a good book to read. Nevertheless, he never mentioned what about, is it to enhance your Reading skills, or your Writing ones?
ResponderEliminarAnyway, good books to read are those published by either Cambridge, or Oxford University Press. :)
Sorry teacher , was a mistake of my cellphone , my keyboard has corrector but here is my correct writting , also I'll take it on Monday to correct if something is wrong . It's fun to correct it all together :)
ResponderEliminarhttps://www.dropbox.com/s/gau4ct8zrksjkg6/writting.docx?dl=0
Good Janela, but a couple of verb tense mistakes and a preposition. Can you spot them? :)
EliminarHello teacher, here is my writting!
ResponderEliminarI hope you have a good day :)
Happy mom's day <3
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-pDkO42ilK8UXJTS3ZfTFQzb0k/view?usp=sharing
Very good, Fiorela. One or two minor mistakes. :)
EliminarHi teacher, Happy Mother's day, I hope you are spending a good time with your sons and not only today.
ResponderEliminarI am attaching my venn diagram. Good night!
http://prezi.com/tmcyqxrwkrfh/?utm_campaign=share&utm_medium=copy
Excellent, Katherine..:)
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ResponderEliminarHi again teacher, now I'm sending the link of my First Draft Checklist, I wanted to write about John Forbes Nash, his life is incredibly amazing, worthy of exaggeration!
ResponderEliminarGood night.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-HLvwKZi_xr5_pYHqDfoHnK-J04NT6gYd3I-xmJSQxQ/edit?usp=sharing
Some few mistakes like prepositions and one verb tense. Will you spot and correct them, please? :)
EliminarThank you for your feedback, here is the link of the checked text.
Eliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=1-HLvwKZi_xr5_pYHqDfoHnK-J04NT6gYd3I-xmJSQxQ
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ResponderEliminarHi,teacher this is my final writing!
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1OlbKg7JehrPvHWeLuVSteGJgVu5v6GC2JoQEDzoDXMM/pub?start=false&loop=false&delayms=3000
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ResponderEliminarHello teacher! This is my final writing ;)
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=0B3QtHkGyvfHuOXNzZDBNUG9aNkU
this is my writing Ms.Vargas
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0B5AAh0LUcMJ-eUFaQUtXMnpwM2s/view?usp=sharing
Hello teacher,this is my homework.
ResponderEliminarHave a good day!
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-pDkO42ilK8MVFRY1AtQjRiNVE
Hello teacher :) Here's my letter to Marla Runyan :D
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0B7VEEFGVtfIlempuaEF2QmxDNHM/view?usp=sharing
Hello miss. This is my letter to Frank McCourt:
ResponderEliminarhttps://goo.gl/NMWmyv
Hi teacher this is the exercise of the book about a summarizing of the stories of Frank and Marla https://www.dropbox.com/s/hlk03xdg6ycdts5/exercise.docx?dl=0
ResponderEliminarAnd this is muy letter to Frank McCourt https://www.dropbox.com/s/47tf36ehm8o032f/letter.docx?dl=0 I hope you have a nice day teacher :)
Hello Janela! I have a question .... The work wasn't just the first exercise? a mean the case of Marla not of Frank McCourt
EliminarBecause I remember that. the teacher said "just do the first excercise" or am I wrong? :/
EliminarPlease, tell us
EliminarTeacher here's my Letter to Frank McCourt, please chek it, if someone find mistakes, tell me please to correct it.
ResponderEliminarLetter to frank MacCourt
Dear Frank, I’m greatly happy because you were my teacher, i learned many thinks from you, one of them is how to see the posity way for almost everything, i always remember you with a big smile. I’m writing to you, because i have problems so come to my mind what you said me when we were at University and all your advices. I can’t explain how you helped me to affront my problems, i only want to say THANKS.
Maikol Arrieta.
Some few mistakes you can spot for Monday and tell me about them, ok, Maicol? :)
EliminarHi Teacher here is my second writing :)
ResponderEliminarhttps://www.dropbox.com/s/m96c5gmau61f14e/writing2.docx?dl=0
Thanks for your time :)
Hi Miss, here is my second writing.
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1qaCsr0wzUFXhjqufZp5C7zGSRDu2B-FPIDf0fZmCbe4/edit?usp=sharing
Hi teacher, this is my second writing. I hope you have a good day and check it my homework. see you!
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-pDkO42ilK8ME02akZiOE5oZXc
Hi Fiorella. What a great story . May be I would suggest to correct the verb "FOUND"; I think it should go in present form, and rather than say "THE KEY OF SOLUTION" you would say "A WAY TO OVERCOME THEM".it's only a suggestion. Have a nice weekend :)
EliminarHi teacher thank you for your suggestion! I will correct it!
EliminarHello Miss, this is my letter to Frank McCourt I hope you'll like it :)
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0BymUyxP_okWaMzN5WW1NMGNOd0E/view?usp=sharing.
Hi Miss , This is my second writing. :D
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0BymUyxP_okWaTUI3OFVWS3l1TFU/view?usp=sharing
Dear Grethel, correct the mistakes there are in both, please. Get your friends' help, ok?
EliminarHi grethel in your writing you put "he decided to came lima" I believe that sounds better "He decided to went to Lima". Also I saw that you didn't put a concluding sentence :D in my wiriting i put this.
Eliminar-In short, despite all of his problems, if you are persistent to confront, you will be able to achieve and overcome whatever situation you want.
Miss this is my letter to Marla Runyan:
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0BwdI-lIIkqVzREJOSktHcWo3ckk/view?usp=sharing
Miss this is my second writing:
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0BwdI-lIIkqVzdVlhRTFBVjFGcHc/view?usp=sharing
I hope to receive your comments my friends.
I'll be very grateful that you can help me in improving my second writing ...... :)
Good story of how to overcome the obstacles ;)
EliminarWhat a great story my friend :). I'm not sure, but it seems you used the pronoun "he" too many times. Have a nice week my friend.
EliminarHello Teacher !!! This is my letter to Frank McCourt's:
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2jaQA8bM9L_dGFsM2NxWHJPRGc/view
Wonderful letter, Luis , one or two mistakes you can show me the correction of on Monday, ok? :)
Eliminarand this is my second writing :
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2jaQA8bM9L_MDBKdnhNY3Y0ZkU/view
Some few mistakes,please check them out and let me know about them on Monday, please, Luis. :)
EliminarMS.VARGAS THIS IS MY LETTER TO FRANCK McCOURT, HAVE A NICE DAY!
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0B5AAh0LUcMJ-Sy1YdldwSFRzb2M/view?usp=sharing
Very good Marycielo. I really liked your letter. :)
EliminarHi teacher and guys! Here is mi letter to Frank MaCourt:
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=0B8syjslPRBcFOG02a0R4T0VNenM
Dear Jean, please correct some mistakes I found. You can ask your classmates to help you, by asking them here, on this blog..:)
EliminarAnd here goes my SECOND WRITING! Have a nice weekend all of you :)
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=0B8syjslPRBcFYnhnSlAteVc3OTQ
ONE mistake, Jean, would you find it for Mon., and correct it, please? :)
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ResponderEliminarHi teacher, here's my second writing (and a little bit better with the corrections, I hope so)
ResponderEliminarhttps://goo.gl/vvfrPe
Excellent letter, Alan, but it contains some few mistakes I'd like you to correct for Mon., and tell me about it, please. :)
EliminarHere is my second writing
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0B5AAh0LUcMJ-cXhORklLT3o5SDg/view?usp=sharing
Marycielo. A very touchy letter.., but please, correct some mistakes it contains. Ask your partners on this blog to do so, please...:)
EliminarHi,teacher here is my second writing!
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1BQ65Sb3C6fu6C40nlrL5DgMeKE5EfG8F6aQhnSHPDSM/pub?start=false&loop=false&delayms=3000
THIS IS MY LETTER TO FRANK McCOURT !
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1wEgJVW_0FXoREzfZp9SmWtVoGolsGyAB4svpIm5Cd-w/pub
A couple of mistakes, Evelin. Correct them please..for Mon... :)
EliminarGood Night, miss and guys!!
ResponderEliminarHere my letter to McCourt.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B91PaefYK9DUamgwSWRSYXcwNXc/view?usp=drivesdk
Also my second writing.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B91PaefYK9DUYUE0cFRZcTlPT00/view?usp=drivesdk
NOTE:You can check again the first writing becuse it could not be seen by the linK, PLEASE.
Some mistakes in both, Liz, would you correct them please, by asking your classmates to do so via this blog..:)
EliminarHi everyone. Well, here my letter to Marla Runyan
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0B3dnr1OfJbfEeDRPck1qVGRnX2s/view?usp=sharing
Please, Medaly, find and correct some mistakes it contains...:)
EliminarHere is my second writting Miss . Take care :)
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0B3dnr1OfJbfEaV8zSEpIb1pBSTg/view?usp=sharing
Very good, thoug some things to correcdt for Mon.,Medaly.. :)
EliminarHi Miss, here is my letter to Frank McCourt.
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1HLe8WcOJ5kAqYGbGnKP2NZjIX0Gpc3pHXd8_bBm7cfY/edit?usp=sharing
Good Edelita, but there are some mistakes to correct for Monday, ok? :)
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ResponderEliminarDear Students:
ResponderEliminarI've noticed you send me your work, I make comments and ask you to please correct the mistakes with your friends' help, but you're not interacting. Let's see who is the first one to ask the others for help and gets them to actually HELP. Remenber how important this is for your future work life. Hope to see something posted later, ok? <3
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ResponderEliminarGuys, I forgot to share with you the organizer that help me with the first Draft. As I told you I talked about John Forbes Nash, this kind of tools are very useful, it really helps me.
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1sZJkSd1jdHMOlsywXUqexIwn4TXvfPkEY7MZjC4R478/pub?start=false&loop=false&delayms=3000
Hello Miss, I send you the link of my Venn Diagram. Sorry for the delay. Thank you.
ResponderEliminarhttps://1drv.ms/w/s!Alg3JJ1ogg1UkBY_-vADThrHKwIe
Miguel Moreno.
Good night everyone!. I was so inspired writing this letter, don't laugh if you read it :) Here you have:
ResponderEliminarhttps://www.dropbox.com/s/uef7gxupeghmj37/LETTER%20TO%20FRANK%20MCCOURT.docx?dl=0
Dear classmates and teacher, here I share with you the FIRST DRAFT and THE FINAL WRITING OF MY BIOGRAPHICAL PARAGRAPH. I Hope you like it. https://www.dropbox.com/s/esi59x5p02d5dm0/DRAFT%20%26%20FINAL%20WRITING_BIOGRAPHICAL%20PARAGRAPH.docx?dl=0
ResponderEliminarHi teacher, here's my biographical paragraph
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0B7VEEFGVtfIlZ0NycnJXSDc4bms/view?usp=sharing
Good night, teacher. I want to leave you my first and second writing.
ResponderEliminarThank you for offering us this medium, is very comfortable to work in this way. https://1drv.ms/w/s!AknhR3d06Xw8gTATNwrTd2BIcRGw
I would also like to leave you the practice of writing about FRANK MCCOURT AND MARLA RUNWAY.https://1drv.ms/w/s!AknhR3d06Xw8gUYR0-pGbjmm2ri_
EliminarGood morning teacher, I hope this time can access, sorry for the inconvenient.
ResponderEliminarVD:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Cgh_fU9sv6CpCr0Twz6kmgXOlocodqS7qNHCj4sFPAU/edit
Writing1: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZHiXfzP2R2SSfGcmyJLg1V0UzuwxzTukR8c6z-dGmaI/edit
Letter:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16PQSFLkQd1Dx3ajbOy0fr9bHddUD9byHME2eTXg-EH8/edit
Writing2:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1my1N9zfmH2dhbhJd2i7E9RSeIRs36cIDXIFRhJgBWq0/edit
Hi, everyone! This is my letter to Frank McCourt: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B3QtHkGyvfHuZW9YV0xvMUo2ZXM
ResponderEliminarThis is my second writing: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B3QtHkGyvfHuSGp6Z3RRVWtGVVU
If someone find a mistake, tell me to correct it. Have nice a day, guys! :)
Hi Mari.. i read your writing and it's very interesting,Also in the third sentence you used the word " working" maybe you can use another word. :) xoxo
EliminarThanks for your recommendation ;)
EliminarGOOD AFTERNOON,TEACHER. THIS IS MY ORGANIZE ABOUT UNIT 3
ResponderEliminarhttps://1drv.ms/w/s!AknhR3d06Xw8gUu8eeMTAd-EM1Af
HERE I LEAVE MY SHORT PARAGRAPH EXPLAINING THE SIMILARITIES AND DIFFERENCES BETWEEN THE GENETIC TESTING STORY AND NORMAN COUSINS’S STORY.
Eliminarhttps://1drv.ms/w/s!AknhR3d06Xw8gU_r_6HF7Adb--uA
Hi Madai , I see that we have some ideas un common ,is a nice job :) ,I have one doubt, Is the short paragraph obligatory to upload to the blogspot ? or only optional ?
EliminarHi Teacher! Good night!this is muy venn diagram :)
ResponderEliminarhttps://www.dropbox.com/s/wpaadurxgbz6moj/venn%20diagram%202.docx?dl=0
Hello everybody this is the 1st time I access the blog ,I know I shouldve done it long time ago and Im really really sorry .I wonder if you could help me out. I know we ought to upload our drafts,diagrams,etc here and interact with each other but unfortunately I dont know how many assigments Im are to upload so far. Would you mind listing in chronological order the pieces of homework Ive missed? Im Anthony btw
ResponderEliminarHi Anthony, I believe that the activities are:
Eliminar-Venn diagram about Genius (Unit 1)
-1° Writing (About a Genius)
-2° writing (About obstacles)
-Venn diagram about Genetic testing and Laughter Therapy
-Summarize about Genetic testing and Laughter Therapy
If I forgot something, the rest can tell us, please!
Good night Miss! I send the venn diagram about the readings of Unit 3:
ResponderEliminarhttps://1drv.ms/w/s!Alg3JJ1ogg1UkB0TKCh4vJmFNmlN
Also, I send the two writings. I know that is late, sorry =/:
https://1drv.ms/w/s!Alg3JJ1ogg1UkBzMN0CMtI_l-Xax
Miguel M.
PD: In the first link is a summary of similarities and differences of readings topics. =)
EliminarHello miss, here's my letter from Marla Runyan. Sorry is too late to present it, I hope you could check it.
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Dear Marla,
I really want to tell you how terrific was your story for me and especially for my son. The time I know about you was the day I could helped my son in a better way.
My son felt very confused and most of the time he felt hopelessness, but because of you now he has self-reliance and free to do what he wants to do.
To finish this, I want to thank you to be an inspiration to my son now he has good expectations.
Blessings,
Yessenia Sanchez.
Hi! Your letter is nice! I think that in the second sentence, you have to change the word "know" for "knew" because you refer to the past and also, change "free" for "freedom" that is a noun. I hope I've helped you :)
EliminarHi Maricielo, thank you for your corrections. I really appreciate your comment :)
EliminarI'll correct my letter on my portfolio.
Hi miss, writing about Frank and Marla, on page 49.
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/file/d/0BxvVl5ZCxVPHVGdWT1VCOTREMmM/view?usp=sharing
Hi Yessi , After reading your piece of writing I noticed you had problems conveying your thoughts.For example:
Eliminar"he grew up into poverty and in a bad situation but he had their books and after that, he had their students when he became a teacher, to inspired him."
*I do understand what you are trying to say but wouldnt it be better if we put it this way "He grew up in poverty and in a terrible situation but fortunately he`d rely on his books to scape from his sordid childhoood and After he became a teacher his students would become his main source of inspiration.
Hi Miss, this is my venn diagram.
ResponderEliminarhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1kilngf7AnjvC1dNbit75Jvu-BquPPMAJ8dovILF-_IU/edit?usp=sharing
Hello everyone ^^
ResponderEliminarMy letter
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B4Um7BSN-eAiYnlEMUh5bDRJOVU
2° writing (About obstacles)
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B4Um7BSN-eAiNnQ0MTNkTVZOVkE
Venn diagram about Genetic testing and Laughter Therapy
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B4Um7BSN-eAidDBRdG9ETmdEbEU
I loved you piece of writing but it has some mistakes.You should check it out again.
EliminarHi teacher and classmates! Here is my DIAGRAM OF UNIT 3:
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=0B8syjslPRBcFNWxaVjM3TU56Mms
and here is my summary of DIFFRENCES AND SIMILARITIES of Gentic Testing and Laughter Therapy. Have a nice night ;)
ResponderEliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=0B8syjslPRBcFSUJpYUEwVlEtdWs
Hi teacher here is my Veen diagram :)
Eliminarhttps://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-pDkO42ilK8TllfajFVRkZHbVU